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ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye - 14th August 2006, 12:16 PM

ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye
ghulaam hai aaj apnon ke jo aazaad ho gaye

bijli,sadak,paani bhi mayassar nahin aaj tak
jhoothe sapne dekh kar ham to barbaad ho gaye

doodh ki nadiyan thi jahan aaj khoon behta hai
siyaasatdaan jabse mulq mein jallaad ho gaye.

sadiyaan gujri hai tinka-tinka aashiyana banane mein
do kadam badhe the ke peeche fasaad ho gaye

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hi - 14th August 2006, 12:25 PM

waaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah

Manoj janab aap ki ghazal mai is desh ki vastavik (real) paristhitiyaaN jhalak rahi hai

ek dilchasp kalam ke liye dil se dad kabool kareN

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Re: ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye - 14th August 2006, 12:30 PM

ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye
ghulaam hai aaj apnon ke jo aazaad ho gaye

bijli,sadak,paani bhi mayassar nahin aaj tak
jhoothe sapne dekh kar ham to barbaad ho gaye

sadiyaan gujri hai tinka-tinka aashiyana banane mein
do kadam badhe the ke peeche fasaad ho gaye



Dear Manoj bhai

Bohat sachhi baat kahi hai aapne 1st sher mein...


doodh ki nadiyan thi jahan aaj khoon behta hai
siyaasatdaan jabse mulq mein jallaad ho gaye.



Jallaad hi hai wo sach mein..


Jazbaato se bhari aapki ye khoobsurat rachna bohat kuch keh gayi ...


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Re: ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye - 14th August 2006, 12:33 PM

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ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye
ghulaam hai aaj apnon ke jo aazaad ho gaye

bijli,sadak,paani bhi mayassar nahin aaj tak
jhoothe sapne dekh kar ham to barbaad ho gaye

doodh ki nadiyan thi jahan aaj khoon behta hai
siyaasatdaan jabse mulq mein jallaad ho gaye.

sadiyaan gujri hai tinka-tinka aashiyana banane mein
do kadam badhe the ke peeche fasaad ho gaye

-MANOJ kUREEL
bahut khoob manoj ji ......bahut hi sunder likha hai aapne aur sach bhi ........


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Re: ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye - 14th August 2006, 12:35 PM

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Originally posted by manoj kureel
ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye
ghulaam hai aaj apnon ke jo aazaad ho gaye

bijli,sadak,paani bhi mayassar nahin aaj tak
jhoothe sapne dekh kar ham to barbaad ho gaye

doodh ki nadiyan thi jahan aaj khoon behta hai
siyaasatdaan jabse mulq mein jallaad ho gaye.

sadiyaan gujri hai tinka-tinka aashiyana banane mein
do kadam badhe the ke peeche fasaad ho gaye

-MANOJ kUREEL

wah manoj ji,,

dil ko chhoo liya,

sadiyaan gujri hai tinka-tinka aashiyana banane mein,
do kadam badhe the ke peeche fasaad ho gaye..

wah, tareef ke kabil hai..

jari rakhiye meri dua hai aur likhe.

apaaka mitra.
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15th August 2006, 07:28 PM

well said manoj ji,bahut khoob.har sher sacchayi se bharpoor.yeh sher bahut acha laga.

sadiyaan gujri hai tinka-tinka aashiyana banane mein
do kadam badhe the ke peeche fasaad ho gaye

likhte rahiye


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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Re: ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye - 16th August 2006, 10:05 AM

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Originally posted by manoj kureel
ujda hai chaman na samjhiye aabaad ho gaye
ghulaam hai aaj apnon ke jo aazaad ho gaye

bijli,sadak,paani bhi mayassar nahin aaj tak
jhoothe sapne dekh kar ham to barbaad ho gaye

doodh ki nadiyan thi jahan aaj khoon behta hai
siyaasatdaan jabse mulq mein jallaad ho gaye.

sadiyaan gujri hai tinka-tinka aashiyana banane mein
do kadam badhe the ke peeche fasaad ho gaye

-MANOJ kUREEL
manoj ji bahut khoob likha hai appney, sachai ko bahut acchi tarah bayaan kiya hai. har share asliyat batta raha hai. appka kalaam dil ko chu gaya. yu hi sachai bayaan kartey rahna es ko pad kar sab ki nahi to kum se kum kisi 1-2 ki ankhey to kulleygi.

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16th August 2006, 12:43 PM

Namaskaar Manoj ji
Bahuat hee khubsoorti se aapne jo shabd buney hain woh bemisaal hain. Ek ek shabd ko parhna bahaut accha raha.

Isi tarah likhtey rahiyega aur humey aapko parhney ka awsar dete rahiyega.

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