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Q----Ghubaar
R---- hai

Tere Mere Beech Jo Deewar Hai
Dil Men Uthata Woh Ghubaar Hai



Q-----Sitam
R-----Kar Gaye


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Tere Mere Beech Jo Deewar Hai
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Q-----Sitam
R-----Kar Gaye
" Jab Jee Chaaha Unkaa Karam Kar Gaye
Kya Maaloom Thaa Sau Sitam Kar Gaye ... "

Qaafiya ... Aayaa
Radeef ... Naa Gayaa



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Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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Iss Matle Ko Aap Aise PaDheN .... Unkaa Word Ki Jagah Woh Lagakar ... !

" Jab Jee Chaaha Woh Karam Kar Gaye
Kya Maaloom Thaa Sau Sitam Kar Gaye ... "

Qaafiya ... Aayaa
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Iss Matle Ko Aap Aise PaDheN .... Unkaa Word Ki Jagah Woh Lagakar ... !

" Jab Jee Chaaha Woh Karam Kar Gaye
Kya Maaloom Thaa Sau Sitam Kar Gaye ... "

Qaafiya ... Aayaa
Radeef ... Naa Gayaa
Kho Ke Pyaar Jahaa MeN Paayaa Naa Gayaa
Laut Ke Iss Veeraane Se Phir Aaayaa Naa Gayaa

Kaafiya - Saawan
Radeef - Use Bujhaaye


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Kaafiya - Saawan
Radeef - Use Bujhaaye
AnkhoN meiN pyaas ho to darpan use bujhay
Tan mein agar agan ho saawan use bujhaye

Hunar...Q
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AnkhoN meiN pyaas ho to darpan use bujhay
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Hunar...Q
Dekha gaya......R
ji nice one ..............

Shahar MeN Aisaa Ek Nagar Dekha Gaya
Be-Morabbat Unn Kaa Hunar Dekha Gaya

Qafiya - Udaasi
Radeef - Rahti Hai


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ji nice one ..............

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Be-Morabbat Unn Kaa Hunar Dekha Gaya

Qafiya - Udaasi
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Ummid jo pyaasi rehti hai
Ankhon mein udaasi rehti hai......

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Ummid jo pyaasi rehti hai
Ankhon mein udaasi rehti hai......

Q-dariya
R-nazar me hai
aj bhi teri yaaden asar me hai
ashqon ki dariya nazar me hai

Qafiya ~ sanam
Radeef ~ mar gaye

Matla ~ ??

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aj bhi teri yaaden asar me hai
ashqon ki dariya nazar me hai

Qafiya ~ sanam
Radeef ~ mar gaye

Matla ~ ??
wafaon ki khakar qasam mar gaye
mohabbat mein kitne sanam mar gaye...............

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wafaon ki khakar qasam mar gaye
mohabbat mein kitne sanam mar gaye...............

Q...duniya
R....paagal
kahete hai sab mujhe main hun piya paagal
meri nazron se dekh to hai ye duniya paagal

Qafiya ~ amir
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kahete hai sab mujhe main hun piya paagal
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Qafiya ~ amir
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DostoN !

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Aaj Se Ek Naya Silsilaa Shuru KarteN Hai ... Shaayad Aaapko Pasand Aaye ... !

Is Khel Men Karnaa Yeh Hai Ki SDC Ka Koi Bhi Member Ek Qaafiya Aur Radeef Dega ... Next Member Uspar Matlaa Banaayega ... Yaad Rakhe ... Matlaa Khud Kaa Taiyaar Kiyaa Honaa Chaahiye ... Kisi Dusre Shayar Kaa Nahi ... !

Matlaa Banaakar Next Member Ke Liye Qaafiya Aur Radeef DeNaa Naa BhuleN ... ! Aise Hii Yeh Kram Aage BaDhtaa Rahega ... !



Jaise .........

Qaafiya ... Guzar
Radeef ... Jaayegii Tanhaa

Matlaa .......

Shaam Intezaar MeN Guzar Jaayegii Tanhaa
Aaj Phir Woh Laut Ke Ghar Jaayegii Tanhaa ...

Next .......

Qaafiya .... Bikhar
Radeef .... Jaayen
Mehra Ji: adaab


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My first attempt

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jo muflis the woh to amir ban gaye
Bade aadmi sab faqir ban gaye

Q....Aadmi
R....Nikle
Tum Toh Yaar Kamaal Ke Aadmi Nikle
Jo Sochaa NahiN Woh Hii Aadmi Nikle ...

Next :-

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Radeef : Jaaoge



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Tum Toh Yaar Kamaal Ke Aadmi Nikle
Jo Sochaa NahiN Woh Hii Aadmi Nikle ...

Next :-

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Ye na socha tha ki tum yun badal jaaoge,
zindagi ki raah me hume tanha chhod jaaoge.
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Tum Toh Yaar Kamaal Ke Aadmi Nikle
Jo Sochaa NahiN Woh Hii Aadmi Nikle ...

Next :-

Qaafiya : Badal
Radeef : Jaaoge
Iss Qadar Tum Badal Jaaoge
Bahak Ke Bhi Sambhal Jaaoge

Next :-

Qaafiya : Jalaa
Radeef : HooN MaiN


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Bahak Ke Bhi Sambhal Jaaoge

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Radeef : HooN MaiN
Lijiye bade shayroN ki mehfil mein humne bhi apna jaam utha liya hai.

Tha jalna farz, jalaa hooN maiN
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wo badi jinda dili se milta hai sabhi se
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bahot bahot shukriya naresh jee ... dheere dheere aap logo ke sath sab seekh jaaunga ... :-)
Thanks once again !!

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Shukriya Naresh ji. Deep ji aap in sab baatoN par thhoda gaur karein.

Aaj-jo bhatke-qadam to eemaaN se jaungaa
Gir jo nazroN se-gaya fir jaaN se jaungaa

Qaafiya- maseehaa
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Qaafia aur Radeef bhool Gaye

regards

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AnjaaN Ji Ke Diye Qaafia Aur Radeef Ki Tarap Sanket Thaa Mera ... Ashk JI !

Lijiye Unka Diya Qaafia Aur Radeef Par Matlaa Banaaiye ...........


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