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umiid hai ki sher kuch thik thak hoga
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merii mohbbat ko unhone dosti naam de diyaa
shayad ye bhii ek ada thi unki mujhe satane kii.....

Darta hun naye dost banane se....
Bahut Zakhm khaye hain dosti ke bahane se........ NM

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10th May 2007, 05:29 PM
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Darta hun naye dost banane se....
Bahut Zakhm khaye hain dosti ke bahane se........ NM

"Dosti kudha ka ek nayaab tohfa hai,
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"Dosti kudha ka ek nayaab tohfa hai,
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thaam le tu haath dosti ka,
mil jayegi janaat esi bahane se"
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Har lehar ko kinaara mat samjho..
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Har nazar ko ishara mat samjho..

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10th May 2007, 06:44 PM
Thanks friends, aap sab waqaii meiN bohat achchha kar rahe haiN.. aap ek ke baad ek Sher ko paRhenge to bohat mazza aayega... aisa lagegaa kya khuub silsila chal raha hai..

Priya, aap ke Sher

Har lehar ko kinaara mat samjho..
Har dost ko dost pyara mat samjho..
Nazar nazar me bhi farak hota hai..
Har nazar ko ishara mat samjho..

ess ke jawaab meiN:

Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se
dhonaa hii pa.Daa haath mujhe qalb-o-jigar se

qalb-o-jigar: jaaN aur dil

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10th May 2007, 07:07 PM
Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se
dhonaa hii pa.Daa haath mujhe qalb-o-jigar se

-mayank

jawaab arz hai,

han,kuch pane ke liye kuch khona to padta hai,
tune to bas khoya hai dil,woh apne qaraar ko tarasta hai.

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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10th May 2007, 07:15 PM
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Takaraa hii ga_ii merii nazar un kii nazar se
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-mayank

jawaab arz hai,

han,kuch pane ke liye kuch khona to padta hai,
tune to bas khoya hai dil,woh apne qaraar ko tarasta hai.
sara jee wel come...ess anjuman meiN post kiye huye mere lagbhag sabhii Sher ustaadoN ke haiN.. aap ke sher ka jawaab arz hai..

shaayad aa jaayegaa saaqii ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paayaa hai un aa.Nkho.n ka ras ab ke baras




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sara jee wel come...ess anjuman meiN post kiye huye mere lagbhag sabhii Sher ustaadoN ke haiN.. aap ke sher ka jawaab arz hai..

shaayad aa jaayegaa saaqii ko taras ab ke baras
mil na paayaa hai un aa.Nkho.n ka ras ab ke baras




yeh baras beete jaaye hai,
na taras kisi ko aaye hai,
kis daur se guzar rahe hain hum,
ye poochne bhi na koi aaye hai!!!

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yeh baras beete jaaye hai,
na taras kisi ko aaye hai,
kis daur se guzar rahe hain hum,
ye poochne bhi na koi aaye hai!!!
Guzar jaati hain yunhi umar saari
Kisiko dhundhte hain hum kisime........nida fazli

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Guzar jaati hain yunhi umar saari
Kisiko dhundhte hain hum kisime........nida fazli

Guzar jaati hain yunhi umar saari
Kisiko dhundhte hain hum kisime



har waqt ek anjana sa khwab bunte rahte hain
bekas nigaho.n mian bhii pyar doondte rahte hain.

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Guzar jaati hain yunhi umar saari
Kisiko dhundhte hain hum kisime



har waqt ek anjana sa khwab bunte rahte hain
bekas nigaho.n mian bhii pyar doondte rahte hain.

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gujar to jayegi eh dost bin tere,
par badi udhas beqarar gujregi.....NM

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11th May 2007, 11:53 AM


Sunita jee,

gujar to jayegi eh dost bin tere,
par badi udhas beqarar gujregi.....

aap ke sher ka jawaab

phuul Khushbuu jhiil mausam dhuup titalii aur havaa
sab ke cheharo.n par udaasii tere jaane ke baad
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apni ankhon ke samander mein utar jaanae de mujhe
tera mujrim hon dub ke mar janae de mujhe

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khumari se shoukiyo se dekh ke dil jala jate hai
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Aayey na tum sau sau dafa, aayey gayey mausam
Yeh shaam kii tanhaiyaN, aisey meiN taira Gham

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