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17th February 2013, 03:20 PM
Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...
Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...
Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...
ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....
Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....
Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....
Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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19th February 2013, 12:41 PM
very nice Aru bhai.............................................. .......
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19th February 2013, 12:45 PM
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Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...
Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...
Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...
ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....
Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....
Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....
Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....
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Touching.....................................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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20th February 2013, 11:42 PM
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very nice Aru bhai.............................................. .......
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Thanx a lot sameer bhai..................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Touching.....................................
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Thanx zainy jee......................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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16th March 2013, 10:28 AM
Khoobsurat Takhaiyul, behad masoom andaaz, aur kamal ka izhaar,
meri daad gubool karein.
God bless you.
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16th March 2013, 12:32 PM
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Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...
Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...
Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...
ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....
Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....
Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....
Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....
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wahhhh....behad nazuk ahsaas...................!
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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31st March 2013, 04:26 PM
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Khoobsurat Takhaiyul, behad masoom andaaz, aur kamal ka izhaar,
meri daad gubool karein.
God bless you.
musharrafhusain
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Thanx musharraf jee.....................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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1st April 2013, 12:56 PM
Aru Jee Aadaab!
Waah janab waah kia kahuN janab ahsaas O khayaal haiN ke haal e dil ka bayaaN... gazab kar diyaa janab behad dilfareb ahsaas rahe waaH...
Is khoobsurat kalaam par meri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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3rd April 2013, 11:13 AM
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wahhhh....behad nazuk ahsaas...................!
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Thanx sunita diii......................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Aru Jee Aadaab!
Waah janab waah kia kahuN janab ahsaas O khayaal haiN ke haal e dil ka bayaaN... gazab kar diyaa janab behad dilfareb ahsaas rahe waaH...
Is khoobsurat kalaam par meri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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Thanx khwaish jee....aapki daad sar aankhon pe...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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13th November 2013, 11:00 AM
Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....
Wah aru ji bahut khoob .. ye lines dil ko chu gayi.. aapko hajaro mubarakbaad..
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7th February 2014, 07:40 AM
thanw a lot tabaah jee....aapka sneh yun hee bana rahe....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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7th February 2014, 06:01 PM
bahut hi ache ehsas hai
aru jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii super
daaaaaaaaad
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14th July 2014, 08:31 PM
thanx a lot shakir bhai.....................................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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14th July 2014, 08:59 PM
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Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...
Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...
Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...
ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....
Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....
Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....
Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....
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Bahut sunder peshkash aru ji.....ek oomda nazm..........
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14th July 2014, 10:08 PM
dil ko chhoone waalee aur aaNkhon ko nam karne waali nazm hai Aru ji !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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14th July 2014, 10:28 PM
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Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...
Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...
Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...
ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....
Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....
Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....
Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....
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Bahut sunder peshkash aru ji.....ek oomda nazm.............।........
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15th July 2014, 04:02 PM
Arvid sahab bhut shaandaar nazm se nawaaza hai aapne, yuN hi likhte rahiye daad paish e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye
aslam
zindagi ke haseen lamhe ka
Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum
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16th July 2014, 11:19 AM
Aru Ji..... Khubsurat Ahsasaat Se Saji Achi Nazm Hai....
DAAAAAAAD qabool Farmaayen..
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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19th July 2014, 11:37 PM
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Bahut sunder peshkash aru ji.....ek oomda nazm..........
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thanx harash jee.......aapka sneh yun hee bana rahe....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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thanx zarra jee...aapki daad sar aankhon pe.........
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Bahut sunder peshkash aru ji.....ek oomda nazm.............।........
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thanx harash jee......bahut bahut aabhaar aapka....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Band ek kamre me... -
27th July 2014, 11:21 AM
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Aaj fir akele mein,
Band ek kamre mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi...
Do baatein uski sun,
Do apni kahin thi,
Us raat aankhon mein,
Neend hee nahin thi...
Haal to purane the,
Tabiyat bhi vahi thi,
Aansuon ne mere fir,
Baat apni kahi thi...
ek purani yaad pe,
Fir vo hansi thi,
Zindagi jaise meri,
Usi mein basi thi....
Main bhi tanha tha,
Vo bhi akeli thi,
Kismat bhi khoob,
Hamare saath kheli thi....
Aansuon se mere to,
Tasveer mein nami thi,
Koi bata de kahan,
Pyaar mein kami thi....
Tanhayee ke aalam mein,
Bhar ke baahon mein,
Tasveer se uski,
Baatein kari thi....
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Bahut khoob. .....like always. I can feel ur emotions.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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