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Re: .....yea pyar nahi to aur kya -
23rd June 2005, 03:37 PM
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Originally posted by akant
der raat ko tera aana
aake kuchh meethi baate kah jana
phir sath mein khil-khilana
mere dil ko lubhana
yea pyaar nahi to aur kya..
bechain rahati hai baahe teri
dhudhati hai mujhako nigahe teri
yaado mein hervakt main hi rahata hoon
tumse shararti baate kerta hoon
tu hashti hai mushkuraati hai
phir mujhmein hi kho jaati hai
bolo yea pyaar nahi to aur kya..
ek din gar mulakaat na ho
mujhase tumhari baat na ho
uljhane badh jaati hain
din to gujar nahi paat
raat tham jaati hai
bolo yea pyaar nahi to aur kya..
man ke gulshan mein
titali bane tum firati ho
her kali ke paas se gujarti huyi
tum kitani baate kerti ho
kaliya tumhe chhupana chahati hai
per tum to meri talaash kerti ho
tumhi bolo yea pyar nahi to aur kya..
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shayad sabko pyaar aisa hi lagta hoga akant jii.... but usko words me leke aa pana har kisi ke bass ki baat nahi... bahut cutely kaha hai aapne ki pyaar kaisa hota hai,,,,
nicely written
take care'
Pallavi...
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23rd June 2005, 05:11 PM
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Originally posted by niral
Akantji,
Yeh pyaar hi hai..
bahoot achha likha hai aapne..
likhte rahiye
Best Wishes
Niral
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Niral ji,
sach mein yah pyaar hi hai..
tabhi to shabdo mein ubhar aaya hai..
thank you very much for liking my words..
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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23rd June 2005, 05:15 PM
Pulkit kaise ho???
well ummid hai ki achchhe hi hoge.. tumhara reply padh ke man bahut pasann hua.. aur haa yah rachana maine bahut pahale likhi thi.. shayad esi liye ese padh nahi paaye hoge..tab meri shaadi bhi nahi huyi thi.. vaise es 25 june ko meri marriage anniversary hai.. aur ummid kerta hoon ki apani shayri ka khubsurat tohafa mujhe jarror pesh keroge.. es baar tumhari shayri ka entjaar rahega..
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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23rd June 2005, 05:26 PM
Akant bhai!
Yeh to aapka pyaar hai... aapne apne bhai ko is kaabil samjha...Humari Anshi ke mom-dad ki anniversay hai...hum to celebrate karnge hi naa... accha hua apane remind karaya.. meri informer... meri Didi zara busy hain aajkal...
Aise hi apnaa pyaar banaaye rakhiye... TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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hi! -
23rd June 2005, 05:27 PM
Akant ji apko bahot wqt baad padha...!
ek kahaani khushbu se bhari..
sunane ka shukriya!
...magar ek baat kahu ye font jo apne use kiya hai ...is poem ki nazakat ko suit nahi kar raha!...khair
look ki baat alag hai...i luved the feel!
tc
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24th June 2005, 09:17 AM
Akant Bhai......
Bahut khoob likha hai.....Kashmakash.....aur use suljhaane ke liye saau-saau tahreerien.......
yunhi likhte rahoo.....
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*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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Re: Re: .....yea pyar nahi to aur kya -
24th June 2005, 04:12 PM
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Originally posted by pallavi_here
shayad sabko pyaar aisa hi lagta hoga akant jii.... but usko words me leke aa pana har kisi ke bass ki baat nahi... bahut cutely kaha hai aapne ki pyaar kaisa hota hai,,,,
nicely written
take care'
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Pallo ji,
mujhe jo pyar mein laga vo hi maine shbdsah kerne ki koshis ki.. well aapko achchha laga.. abhari hoon aapka...
kabhi kabhi jajbaat ke liye hi satik samay aur sabd milet hain.. samajh lijiye ki jab main likh raha tha us samy dono sath rahe the.. es vajah se yah rachana ban gayi...
once agin thank for liking it..
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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24th June 2005, 04:17 PM
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Akant bhai!
Yeh to aapka pyaar hai... aapne apne bhai ko is kaabil samjha...Humari Anshi ke mom-dad ki anniversay hai...hum to celebrate karnge hi naa... accha hua apane remind karaya.. meri informer... meri Didi zara busy hain aajkal...
Aise hi apnaa pyaar banaaye rakhiye... TC
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Sach mein pulkit... ek kahavat jab bete ka paav baap ke jute mein fit hone lage tab beta.. bete se dost ki category mein aa jata hai... aur jab bhai likhata ho achchha aur badhiya to usse ummid kyo na keru... ??? ummid kerne ka pura adhikaar hai mera... meena ji ko namaste... filhaal kaha busy hain..
?? ho sake to batana..ok
with best wihses,
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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Re: hi! -
24th June 2005, 04:25 PM
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Originally posted by komal5
Akant ji apko bahot wqt baad padha...!
ek kahaani khushbu se bhari..
sunane ka shukriya!
...magar ek baat kahu ye font jo apne use kiya hai ...is poem ki nazakat ko suit nahi kar raha!...khair
look ki baat alag hai...i luved the feel!
tc
komal
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Komal ji,
bahut bahut dhanyvaad jo aapko rachana pasand aayi.. well main aapki baat " ...magar ek baat kahu ye font jo apne use kiya hai ...is poem ki nazakat ko suit nahi kar raha!" jab maine ese post kiya tha tab mera lakshya bas etana tha ki adhikatam logo ki najaro tak jaay esi vajah se kuchh yah font aur colour use kiya tha..
vaise mera aapse aagrah hai ki jo baat aap es message ke dvara kahan chah rahe the.. uske liye suitable font mein set kerke mere pass bhej de to ati kripa hogi.. vaise mere paas es racahana ki Devnagari lipi mein black & white print copy hai..
shubhkamnao sahit,
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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24th June 2005, 04:28 PM
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Akant Bhai......
Bahut khoob likha hai.....Kashmakash.....aur use suljhaane ke liye saau-saau tahreerien.......
yunhi likhte rahoo.....
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Aman ji,
aapko yaha dekh ker dil behad shukragujar hua..
bahut hi achchha laga...
aur lekhani ki baat jaha tak hai to.. vah chalti rahegi...
shubhkamnao sahit,
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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24th June 2005, 04:31 PM
Akant sir.. achha likha hai pyaara likha hai.. words are really very good.. abt feelings I m confused.. pata nahi sach kya hai..
Garima
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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27th June 2005, 12:00 PM
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Akant sir.. achha likha hai pyaara likha hai.. words are really very good.. abt feelings I m confused.. pata nahi sach kya hai..
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Thanks garima ji,
jaha tak feeling ki baat hai... vo to.. feel kerne vaale hi jaanenge..
aap to confuge hain..esliye... kya kaha jaay..??? vaise ese jab dobara padhenge to shayd feeling ki reality ka pata chal jaayega aapko...
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
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8th November 2005, 12:17 PM
its very good Akant ji,
the deepness of the real love.....
very good...
A human...
To understand me... its better to understand yourself...
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Re: hi -
9th November 2005, 02:59 PM
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its very good Akant ji,
the deepness of the real love.....
very good...
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Thank you very much...
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
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12th September 2006, 06:41 PM
yea pyar nahi to aur kya hai....???
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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