sambandh..

[D33P]

meri rooh da sabandh nal tere judia rhega.
es jag te koi taiho vad k poora nai,par mera kuj na kuj thuddia rhega.
main ik nu vekh k bhul baitha,aapna ghar baar,thikana.
main bda keha k mud chaliye,dil maniya na marjana.
khabre kina chir eh raah khwaabi turia rhega.
aapni shakal to vad k yaad hai tasveer teri.
tera zikar hoiya meri zindgi vich,taahi manzoor hai mainu taqdeer meri.
"deep" de dil te naam tera ,aakhri saah tak ukria rhega.
meri rooh da sambandh nal tere judia rhega....

[ADHURI HEER]

Deep ji bahut hi sohna likhiya hai,
kuch k lines ta bahut hi best ne

meri rooh da sabandh nal tere judia rhega.
es jag te koi taiho vad k poora nai,
par mera kuj na kuj thuddia rhega

tera zikar hoiya meri zindgi vich,
taahi manzoor hai mainu taqdeer meri.

[balraj chahal]

bahut hi sohna likheya bai g.......har ik line ch bahut dard..te dil de bahut nazdeek......eh lines ta kuj jyada hi sohnian laggian...sach ik gl hor bai g tussi jo v likhde o...kamaal ho nibad-da....intezaar rahega next poem da....
tera zikar hoiya meri zindgi vich,taahi manzoor hai mainu taqdeer meri.

[D33P]

thanx ji mehrbaani...bas tuhada hi aasara hai...nai ta main kuj v nai......