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Post peedaa de sirnave - 26th April 2008, 07:34 PM
dosto main tuhada aapna deep ...kuj lok mere bare jannana chaunde ne..i hv completed my engg. and now on job hunting....main basically bathinde to...and now in chandigarh,,,,,main sheyers de ilava songs v likhda,,,bt i m not professional yet....mere kol recorded songs v han mere ,j koi intreted hai ta dase plz..i'll send him...


safed kagzaa te meri peed de sirnave pye reh jaange.
bukal vich sjna kde aauna nai,khaali glaave reh jaange
na usne kde padna "deep" nu,na kise gauna kde,
dhup nai milni vsllaa di,mere gille geet shaave pye reh jaange....
   
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26th April 2008, 07:59 PM
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dosto main tuhada aapna deep ...kuj lok mere bare jannana chaunde ne..i hv completed my engg. and now on job hunting....main basically bathinde to...and now in chandigarh,,,,,main sheyers de ilava songs v likhda,,,bt i m not professional yet....mere kol recorded songs v han mere ,j koi intreted hai ta dase plz..i'll send him...



safed kagzaa te meri peed de
sirnave pye reh jaange.
bukal vich sjna kde aauna nai,
khaali glaave reh jaange
na usne kde padna "deep" nu,
na kise gauna kde,
dhup nai milni vsllaa di,
mere gille geet shaave pye reh jaange....


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bahut hi pyara likhiya hai, last line ta bahut hi sohni hai, Goood

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27th April 2008, 12:38 AM
thanx ji ...........thanx 4 reading me.
   
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thanx preet ji..and tilkji....yes i m sending my resume to u
   
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Post For D33p - 2nd May 2008, 02:29 PM
Hanju kushi de uttare main kagaz utte
"Deep" sirnave vajo a tera naa likhia
Dil karda a pucha main tere kolo
ena sohna likhna a tu kithho sikhia
Tere geeta nu padan layi ta a dunia ve bekrar a
Bas kujh kadma di doori te
vasslla di dhup nu tere gille geeta da intzaar a
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6th May 2008, 07:28 PM
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safed kagzaa te meri peed de sirnave pye reh jaange.
bukal vich sjna kde aauna nai,khaali glaave reh jaange
na usne kde padna "deep" nu,na kise gauna kde,
dhup nai milni vsllaa di,mere gille geet shaave pye reh jaange....

Deep veere, ena vadhiya hai ke vaar vaar parr chuka hai

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6th May 2008, 08:16 PM
thanx a deep ji...and sandeep ji tuhade agge main kuj v nai.........mehrabaani k tusi mainu padia
   
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8th May 2008, 11:18 AM
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dosto main tuhada aapna deep ...kuj lok mere bare jannana chaunde ne..i hv completed my engg. and now on job hunting....main basically bathinde to...and now in chandigarh,,,,,main sheyers de ilava songs v likhda,,,bt i m not professional yet....mere kol recorded songs v han mere ,j koi intreted hai ta dase plz..i'll send him...


safed kagzaa te meri peed de sirnave pye reh jaange.
bukal vich sjna kde aauna nai,khaali glaave reh jaange
na usne kde padna "deep" nu,na kise gauna kde,
dhup nai milni vsllaa di,mere gille geet shaave pye reh jaange....

its too heart touching, thnx for sharing wid us, tk cr,

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bass dil dian doongain tak choo jaan wali gl kahi a....(safed kaagaj te meri peerh de sirnawein paye reh jange)....really it hurts.....heart touching...........n veer j tuhadi shayri ch kalm eho jehi hai ta geet ch v umaran de parchawein....ja dil...nu hoo-ba-hoo karwayeya hona....rabb ne j chaheya ta jaroor sunan da mouka milega....ehi aas rakhda eh chahal chandra....jo rul reha watno door bt tuhade warge yaara kar k hi zindi handa reha.......hoping to get reply
   
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26th June 2008, 06:22 PM
Deep ji

Bahut Bahut Bahut Sohna sohana sohna likhea tusi.

Tuhada Andaz pasand aaya.

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hiii deep g..main tuhanu bahut der ton padhda aa reha ...main tuhada FAN han g bahut takda...bt mera kayi waar ethe acc ni baneya...hun finally ban geya..main tuhade sare shayar padhe hai..really touching hai....ki tusi mainu apne shayar ya recordings post kar skde ho..?
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16th November 2010, 09:59 PM
thanx balraj,kamal and arsh..................srry arsh g...i hv quit writing..........jo v hai ethe e post kita hoia.. and thanx for reading me,and liking my poetry
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25th November 2010, 09:22 AM
safed kagzaa te meri peed de
sirnave pye reh jaange.
bukal vich sjna kde aauna nai,
khaali glaave reh jaange
na usne kde padna "deep" nu,
na kise gauna kde,
dhup nai milni vsllaa di,
mere gille geet shaave pye reh jaange....

bahut vadia deep ji......ultimate likhya hai tusi...........
   
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its a nice post. keep it up. and thanks for sharing........................................

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bahut khoob bai ji...last line bahut hi sohni laggi....te main ik vari tuhade songs jarooor sun-na chahuna,,ho sakeya ta pls bhej deo...reply kardeyo

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thnx arsh,lovleen ,mittal...........te chahal 22 g.......hun shad ta eh sb kuj....1-2 singers nu song dite c..jo jaldi e release honge....... may be ese saal..... so hor kuj ni sade kol..i hv quit poetry ..
   
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safed kagzaa te meri peed de sirnave pye reh jaange.
bukal vich sjna kde aauna nai,khaali glaave reh jaange
na usne kde padna "deep" nu,na kise gauna kde,
dhup nai milni vsllaa di,mere gille geet shaave pye reh jaange....

Deep jii, tuhade eh ahsaas dil de bahuttttttttt kareeb rhe, bahut vadiya likhde ho tusi....par aj-kal nazar nahi aa rahe tusi SDC te, tuhadi kalam tuhanu kuj likhan nu majboor nahi kardi

umeed hai jaldi hi tuhadi navi poetry padan nu milegi.

rabb raakha

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