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Thokar - 24th August 2015, 12:15 AM
Ek naii paishkash, shayed pasand aaey aap logo.N ko

Teri aankho.N ka ishara na mila mujhko tou kya
In andhero.N mei.N jalaya hai faqat tera diya
Teri baaho.N ka sahara jo mujhe milta kabhi
In samaajo.N ke ravajo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N ne ik baar tere pyar ko jana tha khuda
Tu ne ik baar mere pyar ki puja ki thi
Tu you.N hi gar mujhe rakhti tere man mandir mei.N
In zamaano.N ke Usoolo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Tu ne thaama tha gale apne laga ker aisey
Mai.N tou soya teri zulfo.N ki ghani chaao mei.N tha
Tu agar deti mera saath you.N hi shaam-o-sahar
Tou saharo.N ko mai.N dunya ke bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N ne ik baar tere dar pe kiye they sajdey
Apni ankho.N mei.N basaya tha kabhi tu ne mujhe
Tu agar you.N hi mujhe dil mei.N chupa ker rakhti
Tou mai.N dunya ke nazaaro.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N chaha tha mera saath you.N hi deti raho
Tum raho saamne her dum aur kuch bhi na kaho
Jo tu khwabo.N ko mere you.N hi sajaati rehti
Tou savero.N ke ujaalo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Tu ne choDa hai sar-e-raah magar ab tou mujhe
Tu ne toDa hai mera dil kahu.N kya ab mai.N tujhe
Teri chahat ki haqeeqat ko samajh leta agar
Teri nazro.N ke ishaaro.N ko bhi Thukra deta

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24th August 2015, 08:57 AM
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Ek naii paishkash, shayed pasand aaey aap logo.N ko

Teri aankho.N ka ishara na mila mujhko tou kya
In andhero.N mei.N jalaya hai faqat tera diya
Teri baaho.N ka sahara jo mujhe milta kabhi
In samaajo.N ke ravajo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N ne ik baar tere pyar ko jana tha khuda
Tu ne ik baar mere pyar ki puja ki thi
Tu you.N hi gar mujhe rakhti tere man mandir mei.N
In zamaano.N ke Usoolo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Tu ne thaama tha gale apne laga ker aisey
Mai.N tou soya teri zulfo.N ki ghani chaao mei.N tha
Tu agar deti mera saath you.N hi shaam-o-sahar
Tou saharo.N ko mai.N dunya ke bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N ne ik baar tere dar pe kiye they sajdey
Apni ankho.N mei.N basaya tha kabhi tu ne mujhe
Tu agar you.N hi mujhe dil mei.N chupa ker rakhti
Tou mai.N dunya ke nazaaro.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N chaha tha mera saath you.N hi deti raho
Tum raho saamne her dum aur kuch bhi na kaho
Jo tu khwabo.N ko mere you.N hi sajaati rehti
Tou savero.N ke ujaalo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Tu ne choDa hai sar-e-raah magar ab tou mujhe
Tu ne toDa hai mera dil kahu.N kya ab mai.N tujhe
Teri chahat ki haqeeqat ko samajh leta agar
Teri nazro.N ke ishaaro.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Fakhri
Meri Jaanib se dheeron Daad aapko sahab pur zor kalam hua hai bazm mein ehsaas umdaa, alfaazon ki chadar mein lapet kar jo aapne dil par chot ki hai, saamne hote to kai bar har sher par muqarrar lafz sunaai deta....

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24th August 2015, 11:22 AM
waah waah waah...fakhri ji....ehsaas bahut hee khoobsoorati se bayaan huye hain...
asar daar kalaam par dAad kubool karein....

likhte rahein.....
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24th August 2015, 06:28 PM
Himmat afzaii ka bahut shukria Mastji aur Madhuji. Lekin meri ek iltijah hai woh yeh ke agar aap sahebo.N ko koii sher vazan se baaher lage ya kuch alfaaz tabdeel ker ke behtar banaya ja sake to please islah ker li jiyega. Is se likhne waley ko hi nahi.N bulke padhne walo.N ko bhi maza aaega aur himmat milegi. Shukria.
   
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24th August 2015, 09:59 PM
bahut khoob fakhri jee aapke ehsaas pasnad aaye
likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath

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25th August 2015, 07:02 AM
Bohut khoob....apke ehsaas bohut pasand aaye.

Aur apka presentation style bhi thoda hatkar raha, jo ki pasand aaya.

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25th August 2015, 08:35 AM
Kya baat hai waaaaaaaaah

Behad asardaar likhte hai aap

Bohot khoib kalam hua hai....bubarkbad

Dheroon daad

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25th August 2015, 08:38 AM
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Ek naii paishkash, shayed pasand aaey aap logo.N ko

Teri aankho.N ka ishara na mila mujhko tou kya
In andhero.N mei.N jalaya hai faqat tera diya
Teri baaho.N ka sahara jo mujhe milta kabhi
In samaajo.N ke ravajo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N ne ik baar tere pyar ko jana tha khuda
Tu ne ik baar mere pyar ki puja ki thi
Tu you.N hi gar mujhe rakhti tere man mandir mei.N
In zamaano.N ke Usoolo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Tu ne thaama tha gale apne laga ker aisey
Mai.N tou soya teri zulfo.N ki ghani chaao mei.N tha
Tu agar deti mera saath you.N hi shaam-o-sahar
Tou saharo.N ko mai.N dunya ke bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N ne ik baar tere dar pe kiye they sajdey
Apni ankho.N mei.N basaya tha kabhi tu ne mujhe
Tu agar you.N hi mujhe dil mei.N chupa ker rakhti
Tou mai.N dunya ke nazaaro.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N chaha tha mera saath you.N hi deti raho
Tum raho saamne her dum aur kuch bhi na kaho
Jo tu khwabo.N ko mere you.N hi sajaati rehti
Tou savero.N ke ujaalo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Tu ne choDa hai sar-e-raah magar ab tou mujhe
Tu ne toDa hai mera dil kahu.N kya ab mai.N tujhe
Teri chahat ki haqeeqat ko samajh leta agar
Teri nazro.N ke ishaaro.N ko bhi Thukra deta

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25th August 2015, 12:07 PM
bahot khub.... dheroN daad... hamari jaanibse... qbul kijiye...


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Himmat afzaii ka bahut shukria Mastji aur Madhuji. Lekin meri ek iltijah hai woh yeh ke agar aap sahebo.N ko koii sher vazan se baaher lage ya kuch alfaaz tabdeel ker ke behtar banaya ja sake to please islah ker li jiyega. Is se likhne waley ko hi nahi.N bulke padhne walo.N ko bhi maza aaega aur himmat milegi. Shukria.
Fakhri sahab - Bahut aacha laga aapki baat sun kar...bahut kam log hai jo sach mein khule dimaag se seekhne ka ilm rakhte hai aur aapki is soch ko mera salaam, fihaal is kalaam mein mujhe aisi koi dikkat nazar nahi aa rahi hai....yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa


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Ek naii paishkash, shayed pasand aaey aap logo.N ko

Teri aankho.N ka ishara na mila mujhko tou kya
In andhero.N mei.N jalaya hai faqat tera diya
Teri baaho.N ka sahara jo mujhe milta kabhi
In samaajo.N ke ravajo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N ne ik baar tere pyar ko jana tha khuda
Tu ne ik baar mere pyar ki puja ki thi
Tu you.N hi gar mujhe rakhti tere man mandir mei.N
In zamaano.N ke Usoolo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Tu ne thaama tha gale apne laga ker aisey
Mai.N tou soya teri zulfo.N ki ghani chaao mei.N tha
Tu agar deti mera saath you.N hi shaam-o-sahar
Tou saharo.N ko mai.N dunya ke bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N ne ik baar tere dar pe kiye they sajdey
Apni ankho.N mei.N basaya tha kabhi tu ne mujhe
Tu agar you.N hi mujhe dil mei.N chupa ker rakhti
Tou mai.N dunya ke nazaaro.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Mai.N chaha tha mera saath you.N hi deti raho
Tum raho saamne her dum aur kuch bhi na kaho
Jo tu khwabo.N ko mere you.N hi sajaati rehti
Tou savero.N ke ujaalo.N ko bhi Thukra deta

Tu ne choDa hai sar-e-raah magar ab tou mujhe
Tu ne toDa hai mera dil kahu.N kya ab mai.N tujhe
Teri chahat ki haqeeqat ko samajh leta agar
Teri nazro.N ke ishaaro.N ko bhi Thukra deta

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Fakhri ji..........kya tareef karu aapke enehsaasoN ki, likha to bahut khoobsurat hai par dard par daad kya doon.

duaa karti hu ki dard kam ho aapka.

khush rhiye

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26th August 2015, 08:05 AM
Sarikaji, Sunitaji, Aadeilji, Mastji, Bhushanji, Shaadsaheb - Himmat afzaii ke liye behad shukria. Khushi hui ke aap sahebo.N ne pasand ki meri tehreer ko.
   
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