Yaddan

[ashu_akash]

ssa dosto, ik navi rachna tohade sab sahmne pesh hai, umeed hai tohanu pasand avegi, is rachna vich bacpan te javani dian yaddan nu ik shararti jehe andaz ch pesh karan di koshish kiti hai.....kyonki ghaberta nal hasna hasuna v bahut zarori hunda hai..... koi galti hoyi hove te nimana samaj ke maff karna.....jag jeondean de mele ....aakash




YADDAN RANG BIRANGIAN YADDAN

yaddan rang birangian yaddan,
mithian-bholian, hasdian yaddan,
anginat dina de anginat palan dian,
kuj ginian-chunian, piyarian yaddan...............


bachpan de anjan saroor dian,
javani de bekhoof magroor dian,
sard rattan dian thandian battan,
kuj ginian-chunian, piyarian yaddan...............

kache ghar da kacha vehda,
bina motor de chalda rehda,
niani umar de siane sathi,
o jhoothe raje, jhoothe hathi.....
bin angreji dian oh jamatan,
kuj ginian-chunian, piyarian yaddan...............

maa di jhidkan, pio dian gallan,
hun kisnu das ro ke vikhava,
ma de hatthan de sab pakwan,
khoe di panjiri, dudh te badam......
rotian ginnda mein thak na java,
bina gine bas khanda java,
pizze, burger da ayia bazar....
sab visria, hun hoye lachar,
shakar, gud te choori dian battan,
kuj ginian-chunian, piyarian yaddan...............

mohale dian o val khandian gallian,
khed, khidone, rijhan pallian.
vagde samey de vagde panni,
us umar de sab mitar hani,
patanga, charakdian te bantian di zubani....
suni c kade asin v dosti di kahani,
nike hathan dian vadian sugattan,
tutte hoe shishe te gend dian battan,
kuj ginian-chunian, piyarian yaddan...............

mukea bachpan, na hoyea man sangeen,
mil gayi mitro college di canteen,
jagdian c rattan, din c rangeen,
7 sur kad di c, sadi tutti futti been...

6 ruppee di coffee, 3 ruppee samosa,
udhar vali kapi, yarro rab da c tohfa,
palethan vali roti te behi jehi dal....
tari vali gobi, sadi mess da kamal,
10-12 beli sada rehnde c jo nal,
sab layi anjan san, o pepran de sawal.....
HOT SHOPPE di cha, bangali de kulche,
GRAND di lassi, te gill de pranthe.....
PRTC te SYNDICATE dian sugattan,
kuj ginian-chunian, piyarian yaddan...............

kisnu kehnde ne padai,
ki hundi hai kamai,
sadi tohar ta hundi c .... bai, mull di ladai...

kaun c principal, kade dekhi ni LIBRARY....
sikhi c asin ta totte, patole te purje di VACCABOLURY,
din chade PURPOSE c,
shan nu AFSOOS c,
ratt nu CONSOL c,
agle din fir to ohi josh c,
kache piyaran , pake yarran dian battan.....
kuj ginian-chunian, piyarian yaddan...............

awaz mare sab jud de c yar,
tutt gaye hun ta har ik pyar vale tarr,
akar khud to majboor ho chale,
asin v hun "ashu" kamzoor ho chale,
kuj paiddan dian yaddan sade palle,
tutian vangan te tutte chale....

fir milan, jion te khindan dian assan......
bhuldian nahi,
kuj ginian-chunian, piyarian yaddan...............

[ricky judge]

Veere bahut sohna likhiya...jionde raho...

[D33P]

hmm.. bt kuj chnga c,te bht kuj kise 2nd class wali poem wangu j lagia... material bht c,sahi utilise nai kita.. thats wht i think.. baki keep it up ji

[vajinder singh]

v. good bro i love the way of expressing keep it up

[ashu_akash]

rachna pasand karan layi bahut bahut dhanwad dosto........ koi galti hoi hove ta maff karna D33P g...age to hor sudharan di koshish karanga..... vasde raho ....