5th January 2005, 07:25 PM
hi samridh. well ur first attempt was awesom buddy. it was really nice to read it. thats true tht while reading it i remembered sumone who is really close to me. shayri cheez hi aisi hai. u can well express urself in it. and ur first attempt was fantastic. aur waise bhi shayri ka mazza tabhi aata hai jab shayar jo kehna chahta hai, u feel the same way. its true tht ur shayri made me remember sumone so close to me n i want to reply this for him. raat yu dil mein teri, khoi hui yaad aaye, jaise virane mein chupke se bahaar aa jaye, jaise sehra mein haule se chale bade naseeb, jaise bimaar ko bewajah karaar aa jaye. i hope u liked my words. they r specially for u buddy. all the best n wud luv to read ur shayri ahead too. so keep it up.
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