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teri yaad aisee aayee - 5th January 2005, 06:18 PM

Muje yaad teri aisee aayee,….
seh na paya teri kuch palon ki judaai
. ab tumhi sekya kehnaaa
dil yadon me roya aur palo me sanjoya..
par phir bhi yaad teri aayee…………
ab tumhi sekya kehnaaa

Tuje kya khushi dedi..
tanhayeeon ki hansii dedi
khawbon me palke lehrayee
Pegaam wafa ke layee
Tune door rehkar bhi preet nibhayee
Na kari koyee ruswaii
Ab tumhi se kya kehna…………

Wo jaldi mere ghar aayeega
mere soone is waqt ko bhar jayega
Tune sari kasme nibhayee
Tune saare to vaade nibhaye.
ab tumhi sekya kehnaaa


kuch Khata shayad ho gayee mujse
Kaha kuch bhi nahi tumse………
Inkaar jo tumhe kar pate
Yakin hainTum door kabhi na jate…
maine samje dard paraye
maine samje dard paraye
ab tumhi se kya kehna …….
muje yaad teri har pal aayee
tuji se ab kya kehna
ki ab kya kehna………..



umid hai ye jo meri ek choti si koshish thi , ye shayad aapko kahin kuch yaad dila de , kabhi jab koyee apna juda hua ho ....
   
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5th January 2005, 07:25 PM

hi samridh. well ur first attempt was awesom buddy. it was really nice to read it. thats true tht while reading it i remembered sumone who is really close to me. shayri cheez hi aisi hai. u can well express urself in it. and ur first attempt was fantastic. aur waise bhi shayri ka mazza tabhi aata hai jab shayar jo kehna chahta hai, u feel the same way. its true tht ur shayri made me remember sumone so close to me n i want to reply this for him. raat yu dil mein teri, khoi hui yaad aaye, jaise virane mein chupke se bahaar aa jaye, jaise sehra mein haule se chale bade naseeb, jaise bimaar ko bewajah karaar aa jaye. i hope u liked my words. they r specially for u buddy. all the best n wud luv to read ur shayri ahead too. so keep it up.
   
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5th January 2005, 07:31 PM

hi samridh. well ur first attempt was awesom buddy. it was really nice to read it. thats true tht while reading it i remembered sumone who is really close to me. shayri cheez hi aisi hai. u can well express urself in it. and ur first attempt was fantastic. aur waise bhi shayri ka mazza tabhi aata hai jab shayar jo kehna chahta hai, u feel the same way. its true tht ur shayri made me remember sumone so close to me n i want to reply this for him. raat yu dil mein teri, khoi hui yaad aaye, jaise virane mein chupke se bahaar aa jaye, jaise sehra mein haule se chale bade naseeb, jaise bimaar ko bewajah karaar aa jaye. i hope u liked my words. they r specially for u buddy. all the best n wud luv to read ur shayri ahead too. so keep it up.
   
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