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~*BaN gAyI kAhIn MeRi KaBaRr*~ -
13th October 2007, 04:50 PM
ik post daali thi (last One) jab I was happy because of someone especiall per shayad khushi palbhar ki hi hoti hai.... back to pavillion now
pasand napasand se nawaaziyega.... tc ji sabko na duniya ko meri fikr mein is duniya se bekhabar na saath hi koi saheli na koi saathi mera humsafar akele akele rehna aur daant khana mera ik hunarr zindagi ko jeena markar ban gayi kahin meri kabarr na duniya ko meri fikr mein is duniya se bekhabar jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
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13th October 2007, 05:00 PM
Adaab Khulika ji.................
wah bahut umda khayal apne pesh kiye hain bilkul sahi farmaya ki yeh dunia kisi ki bhi fiker nahi karti hai jo dard kisi ko milta hai wo usi ke liye hota hai bahut khoob dil ko chu gaya apka kalaam daad hazir hai kubool ho............. Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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14th October 2007, 01:06 PM
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Befikr rahiye, aap ka yaha parivaar aap ki fikr rakhti hai...!  Keep smiling, ok...? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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15th October 2007, 06:25 AM
namaskaar shweta ji
aapka dard-e-dil is gazal mein saaf jhalakta hai. har lafz mein dard nazar aata hai. aapka likha yeh sher humein bahut acha laga: zindagi ko jeena markar ban gayi kahin meri kabarr hum to bass yehi dhua karenge k aap humesha khush rahein. aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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15th October 2007, 11:47 AM
Dear shweta.......chotti c umr mein etna dard kaha se aa gaya, aur aise kyu kahti ho ki na kisi ko meri fikar, hum sab hai na, aur hum to yehi dua kartey haiN ki hamarey es pariwaar meiN koi dukhi na ho, kisi ko koi dard na rahey, khuda sabke dard mujhe de de, taki mera yeh pariwaar hansta muskurata rahey.
kush raho, har kushi tumhe naseeb ho duao.n ke saath tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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15th October 2007, 06:38 PM
kuhulika ji....vaie to hum yahan kafi puraane hain....par shayri se naata toota to phir juda nahin....
par aaj yahan aaye..aapki shayri padhi to khud par hansi aa gayi.... kaafi kacche alfazon main gehre ehsaas bayaan kar die aapne.... khuda aapko salaamat rakhe....aur akela kabhi na rakhe... duaon ke saath izzazat sanam(ruchika jain) aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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15th October 2007, 10:13 PM
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hello ji Kashif ji apko meri rachna pasand aayi mujhe khushi hai sahi kaha yeh duniya kisi fikr nahi karti aate rahiyega tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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15th October 2007, 10:19 PM
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hello ji Danny ji kafi tym baad dekha apko apni post per accha laga jaankar apko meri post pasand aayi aap logon ke sahare hi ab tak hai padhte rahiyega tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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15th October 2007, 10:24 PM
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hello ji Manish ji kaise hai aap, umeed hai acchey honge apko meri yeh post bhi pasand aayi mujhe khushi huyi jaankar aapki dua kabool ho or mujhe khushiyaan naseeb ho.... sher pasand aaya... accha laga mujhe ye jaankar bas aap yuhi padhte rahiye tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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pass love on and on...
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17th October 2007, 07:58 PM
kya baat hai kuhu jaisa lag raha hai shayri nahi likha ek ghana likha hai,aur mano tum ghun ghuna rahi ho.................
see i read ur shayri............lolz(just kidding) gr8 as always simple language but gr8 thoughts keep writting..... passionate.... pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra" -------------------Brizesh_kol_------------------------------------- 
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18th October 2007, 10:45 PM
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hello ji Didi ji ab itna dard jahan se aaya hai na wahin wapis bhej dungi mein bhi thakk gayi hu iska bhoja utha kar khikhikhi or aap aise kyun kehte ho ki sabka dard apko mile aap kya specialist ho ismein  jiska hai usi ke paas rehne dijiye take care ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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18th October 2007, 10:48 PM
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hello ji Sanam ji meri khushkismati ki aap meri post per aaye wo bhi itne tym baad ya kaha jaaye apko meri post ne yahan ane ka nyota diya apko post pasand aayi mujhe accha laga bas aage bhi u hin aate rahiyega ok ji tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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18th October 2007, 10:50 PM
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hello ji Passionate ji aakhir apke darshann ho hi gaye aapko agar yeh gaana lagta hai to ismein sur taal daal kar gaa lijiye na khikhikhikhikhikhi  as usual apko post acchi lagi... uske liye no thnx khikhikhikhikhikhi aate rahiyega tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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