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miri rait meN phuul khilaa, saa'iiN! - 13th November 2014, 01:04 AM

dosto,

aaj se kuch saat-aaTh saal pehle yahaaN ke ik local mushaa'ire meN ik naujavaan shaa'ir jisay ham ne nah kabhi dekhaa thaa aur nah sunaa thaa, ik aisi jaan-daar Nazm sunaa gayaa kih aaj tak us ki dhun aur us kaa taGhazzul dimaaGh meN bar-qaraar reh gayaa hai.
Leejiye aap bhi paRhiye aur sar dhuniye

Nazm

miri rait meN phuul khilaa saa'iiN!


Mire Haq meN ko`ii du`aa, Saa`iiN!
be-raNg huuN, raNg chaRhaa, Saa`iiN!

maiN kaun huuN, kyaa huuN, kaisaa huuN
maiN kuchh bhi nahiiN samjhaa, Saa`iiN!

miri raat tau thii taariik bahot
mira din be-noor huvaa, Saa`iiN!

thaa chhed piyaale ke aNdar
nahiiN aaNkh meN ashk bachaa, Saa`iiN!

wohi tashna-labii, wohi khastaa-tanii
mira Haal nahiiN badlaa, Saa`iiN!

gum-karda raah musaafir huuN
mujhe ko`ii raah dikhaa, Saa`iiN!

mire dil meN noor zuhuur kare
mire mann meN diyaa jalaa, Saa`iiN!

miri jholii meN phal-phuul gireN
ko`ii shaaKh-e-sabz hilaa, Saa`iiN!

mire tann kaa SaiHraa mehek uThay
miri ret meN phuul ugaa, Saa`iiN!

mujhe lafzoN ki Khairaat milay
mira ho mazmuun judaa, Saa`iiN!

mire dil meN teraa dard rahay
ho jaaye dil dariyaa, Saa`iiN!

ko`ii nahiiN faqeer mire jaisaa
kahaaN dahar meN tujh jaisaa, Saa`iiN!

miri aaNkh meN eik sitaaraa ho
mire haath meN gul-dastaa, Saa`iiN!

tiri jaanib baRhtaa jaauuN maiN
aur Khatm nah ho rastaa, Saa`iiN!

tire phuul mehakte raheN sadaa
tira jaltaa rahay diyaa, Saa`iiN!

mire Haq meN ko`ii du`aa, Saa`iiN!


~Mehmud Akram
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13th November 2014, 09:40 AM

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dosto,

aaj se kuch saat-aaTh saal pehle yahaaN ke ik local mushaa'ire meN ik naujavaan shaa'ir jisay ham ne nah kabhi dekhaa thaa aur nah sunaa thaa, ik aisi jaan-daar Nazm sunaa gayaa kih aaj tak us ki dhun aur us kaa taGhazzul dimaaGh meN bar-qaraar reh gayaa hai.
Leejiye aap bhi paRhiye aur sar dhuniye

Nazm

miri rait meN phuul khilaa saa'iiN!


Mire Haq meN ko`ii du`aa, Saa`iiN!
be-raNg huuN, raNg chaRhaa, Saa`iiN!

maiN kaun huuN, kyaa huuN, kaisaa huuN
maiN kuchh bhi nahiiN samjhaa, Saa`iiN!

miri raat tau thii taariik bahot
mira din be-noor huvaa, Saa`iiN!

thaa chhed piyaale ke aNdar
nahiiN aaNkh meN ashk bachaa, Saa`iiN!

wohi tashna-labii, wohi khastaa-tanii
mira Haal nahiiN badlaa, Saa`iiN!

gum-karda raah musaafir huuN
mujhe ko`ii raah dikhaa, Saa`iiN!

mire dil meN noor zuhuur kare
mire mann meN diyaa jalaa, Saa`iiN!

miri jholii meN phal-phuul gireN
ko`ii shaaKh-e-sabz hilaa, Saa`iiN!

mire tann kaa SaiHraa mehek uThay
miri ret meN phuul ugaa, Saa`iiN!

mujhe lafzoN ki Khairaat milay
mira ho mazmuun judaa, Saa`iiN!

mire dil meN teraa dard rahay
ho jaaye dil dariyaa, Saa`iiN!

ko`ii nahiiN faqeer mire jaisaa
kahaaN dahar meN tujh jaisaa, Saa`iiN!

miri aaNkh meN eik sitaaraa ho
mire haath meN gul-dastaa, Saa`iiN!

tiri jaanib baRhtaa jaauuN maiN
aur Khatm nah ho rastaa, Saa`iiN!

tire phuul mehakte raheN sadaa
tira jaltaa rahay diyaa, Saa`iiN!

mire Haq meN ko`ii du`aa, Saa`iiN!


~Mehmud Akram
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17th November 2014, 10:31 PM

waaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaah behad khoobsoorat, nice sharing B.G.M. jee.


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WAAH SAAIIN......waaaaaah.....kya likha hain........

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