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Ranjhan bin adhuri -
24th March 2008, 10:10 PM
Ranjhan mera sab kuch jag te
ranjhan naal meri har reejh puri hai
ek ranjhan naal hazar khushiya jurriya
ranjhan naal hi mildi saroori hai
ranjhan khave ta mai raj java
nahi taa kis kam di eh churi hai
loke de torran naal kade tutani nahi
sadi yaari hi eni gurri hai
ranjhan dekha ta saah mere chalde
mere jion liye ranjhan jaroori hai
jina mai manga, tu ohna hi khove
das malik ki teri mazboori hai
Rabba mainu bheekh ch de de ranjhan mera
Mai Ranjhan bin adhuri hai
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25th March 2008, 02:48 PM
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. ek ranjhan naal hazar khushiya jurriya .
. ranjhan naal hi mildi saroori hai .
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hello HEER,
jo tu likhdi hai oh sachi aapne aap ch kahani hundi hai.hor ki likha lafaz nahi mee kol. bas likhde reha kar.
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25th March 2008, 05:42 PM
bhut hi khobsurt hai heer ji, bas ese tran likhde rho
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25th March 2008, 09:38 PM
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Originally Posted by A-BABBU;277225
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jo tu likhdi hai oh sachi aapne aap ch kahani hundi hai.hor ki likha lafaz nahi mee kol. bas likhde reha kar.
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Thanks Babbu ji ke iss poem nu like kita, isse karke iss poem di thorri jihi kadar ho gayi
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25th March 2008, 09:42 PM
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bhut hi khobsurt hai heer ji, bas ese tran likhde rho
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Hello Rahul ji,
sab to pehla ta tuhanu iss mehfil wich aaon liye welcome kehandi hai,
ate thanks ke tusi aapa time mere liye spend kita
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25th March 2008, 11:37 PM
Sukar hai rabba iss mehfil di ronak aayi hai, Heer ji ene dina baaad aaye ho,
tuhadi eh poem bahut hi jiada sohni hai, har line kamaal di hai ji
jina mai manga, tu ohna hi khove
das malik ki teri mazboori hai
Rabba mainu bheekh ch de de ranjhan mera
Mai Ranjhan bin adhuri hai
-------------------------------------------- Jihdi mitro bhaal ch dil oh na kuri labhdi,oh na kuri labhdi
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26th March 2008, 10:57 AM
Heer ji Kamaal kar dittaa. Kujh sattraaN ne taan jaan hi kadh laee. Bahut hi khoob likhiaa. For god sake tuhaanu eh guzaarish hai ki bas likhdey jaao. Thodaa hor time kadho. Tusi kamaal kar sakdey ho. Mainu nahi pataa ki tusi ki kardey ho, ya tuhaadiaaN ki engagements ne par likhan laee thodaa hor waqt kadho. Es tarah diaaN creations padhan laee asseN roz ethey aaeedaa hai. Ik choti jehi advice vi. Har band de end wich tusi Hai use keetaa hai. Is di jagah te agar "ae" use karo. Akhri band wal vi zaraa dhyaan deo
Rabba mainu bheekh ch de de ranjhan mera
Mai Ranjhan bin adhuri hai
Agar es nu es tarah kar lao
Rabba mainu bheekh ch de de ranjhan mera
Heer Ranjhan bin adhuri hai
Tuhadey ik band ne rooh nu cheer dittaa
ranjhan khave ta mai raj java
nahi taa kis kam di eh churi hai
Wasdey raho
tilak
Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
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27th March 2008, 10:18 PM
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Originally Posted by tilakji
Heer ji Kamaal kar dittaa. Kujh sattraaN ne taan jaan hi kadh laee. Bahut hi khoob likhiaa. For god sake tuhaanu eh guzaarish hai ki bas likhdey jaao. Thodaa hor time kadho. Tusi kamaal kar sakdey ho. Mainu nahi pataa ki tusi ki kardey ho, ya tuhaadiaaN ki engagements ne par likhan laee thodaa hor waqt kadho. Es tarah diaaN creations padhan laee asseN roz ethey aaeedaa hai. Ik choti jehi advice vi. Har band de end wich tusi Hai use keetaa hai. Is di jagah te agar "ae" use karo. Akhri band wal vi zaraa dhyaan deo
Rabba mainu bheekh ch de de ranjhan mera
Mai Ranjhan bin adhuri hai
Agar es nu es tarah kar lao
Rabba mainu bheekh ch de de ranjhan mera
Heer Ranjhan bin adhuri hai
Tuhadey ik band ne rooh nu cheer dittaa
ranjhan khave ta mai raj java
nahi taa kis kam di eh churi hai
Wasdey raho
tilak
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Thank u Tilak ji eni pyari reply den liye, mai try kiti hai ke eh poem Heer walo hi kahi gayi hove, iss karke hi mai sari poem wich "HEER" word kite use nahi kita os di tha"mai" word hi use kita hai, iss karke hi har line wich ate end wali line ch "mai" hi likhiya ke
"Mai Ranjhan bin adhuri hai"
mainu lagda hai ke tusi har kise di poem bahut hi dhiyan naal read karde ho, tusi theek kiha ke je "hai" di tha "ae" hunda jiada better si, thank u tilak ji meria kamiya bare dasan liye,
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29th March 2008, 03:14 AM
Heer ji tuhadi kini k tareef kara, je ek ek word di tareef vi kara ta bahut thorri hai, bahut hi shandaar ate kamaal da likhiya hai,
ranjhan dekha ta saah mere chalde
mere jion liye ranjhan jaroori hai
plz apniya poems jaldi pesh kariya karo
"Love is life So don't live ur life without love "
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30th March 2008, 01:48 AM
its amazing,heart touching,tk cr,
jass
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30th March 2008, 09:48 AM
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Heer ji tuhadi kini k tareef kara, je ek ek word di tareef vi kara ta bahut thorri hai, bahut hi shandaar ate kamaal da likhiya hai,
ranjhan dekha ta saah mere chalde
mere jion liye ranjhan jaroori hai
plz apniya poems jaldi pesh kariya karo
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Thx lovedeep, ene der baad vapsi kiti hai,
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30th March 2008, 10:11 AM
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its amazing,heart touching,tk cr,
jass
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Thank u Jass ji, aapna time iss poem liye spend karn liye
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31st March 2008, 12:17 AM
ssa ji bahut sohna likhiya..khaas karke churi wali line....bahut hi sohni hai...tusi kmaal da likhiya ji...nale tusi bahut chir magro kuj likhiya a..hna?..tusi mainu nai jaande hone..jdo tusi last poem submit kiti c main odo e nva nva aaya c...2 k maheene ya 3 k maheene ho gye.....tusi pehla v bahut sohna likhiya c ik ...gud keep it up
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31st March 2008, 07:42 PM
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ssa ji bahut sohna likhiya..khaas karke churi wali line....bahut hi sohni hai...tusi kmaal da likhiya ji...nale tusi bahut chir magro kuj likhiya a..hna?..tusi mainu nai jaande hone..jdo tusi last poem submit kiti c main odo e nva nva aaya c...2 k maheene ya 3 k maheene ho gye.....tusi pehla v bahut sohna likhiya c ik ...gud keep it up
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Thank u Deep ji, tusi mainu reply den liye aapna time spend kita, vese mai iss mehfil de har member nu jandi hai, tuhanu vi jandi hai, mainu yaad hai ke tusi 3 month pehla iss mehfil ch aaye si, tusi khud vi bahut hi sohna likh leinde ho, mai tuhadi sab di teh dilo dhanwadi hai ke tusi sab mainu ena maan de rahe ho, so thx again Deep
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22nd April 2008, 01:23 AM
SSA JI,,
aaj tuvadi aishi aah pesh kesh paddi. twade dard da ehsaas aihi samak sakde haan. bahut hi najuk yeh ehsaas tussi pesh keteh neh. naal tuvade likhan da andaaz b saanu bahut changa lagya. aakri line b bahut sonni tarah te vish dassi gayi aah. aishi tha aahi dhua karaana k, k raab tuvanu humesha khush rakkhe.
God Bless U
Manish
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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23rd April 2008, 12:52 AM
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SSA JI,,
aaj tuvadi aishi aah pesh kesh paddi. twade dard da ehsaas aihi samak sakde haan. bahut hi najuk yeh ehsaas tussi pesh keteh neh. naal tuvade likhan da andaaz b saanu bahut changa lagya. aakri line b bahut sonni tarah te vish dassi gayi aah. aishi tha aahi dhua karaana k, k raab tuvanu humesha khush rakkhe.
God Bless U
Manish
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Thx manish ji punjabi mehfil ch aaon liye, ate eni vadhiya reply liye,
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23rd April 2008, 12:55 AM
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Originally Posted by ADHURI HEER
Ranjhan mera sab kuch jag te
ranjhan naal meri har reejh puri hai
ek ranjhan naal hazar khushiya jurriya
ranjhan naal hi mildi saroori hai
ranjhan khave ta mai raj java
nahi taa kis kam di eh churi hai
loke de torran naal kade tutani nahi
sadi yaari hi eni gurri hai
ranjhan dekha ta saah mere chalde
mere jion liye ranjhan jaroori hai
jina mai manga, tu ohna hi khove
das malik ki teri mazboori hai
Rabba mainu bheekh ch de de ranjhan mera
Mai Ranjhan bin adhuri hai
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Tan tussi apna naa change kar hi litta SDC te.. changa ae..
Tussi boht hi dard para likheya ae.. inj lageya maine sheeshe mure khalo ditta..
Dil di tees te vaah vaah vi kiven karan...
Jiyonde Vasde raho! Jawaniyan maaro!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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23rd April 2008, 07:09 AM
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Tan tussi apna naa change kar hi litta SDC te.. changa ae..
Tussi boht hi dard para likheya ae.. inj lageya maine sheeshe mure khalo ditta..
Dil di tees te vaah vaah vi kiven karan...
Jiyonde Vasde raho! Jawaniyan maaro!
~Priya
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Thanks Priya ji, eni pyari reply den liye,
and also thx for helping me
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1st May 2008, 04:01 PM
heer ji tuhanu reed karke bahut hi ajeeb jahe khayal wich gawach gaya c te sochan lai majboor ho gaya k
ajj de time wich v tuhade warge sajan pak pyar bare likhde han mainu nahi pata os kuda ne tuhanu kuch khas sikhaya hai ja shyad tusi bahut hi gum handa ke dekh laya hai per phir vi kuch taan hai jo mere varge
pather nu sochan lai majboor kar dinda hai
kher asi taan sirf read karan lai hi bane haan te vah vah karan lai
tusi bahut hi kamal da likhde ho jo main bayan ni kar sakda
haan par je sanu vi kite sat lagi taan jaroor kuch likhan ge
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1st May 2008, 06:46 PM
Na main usnu ranja kehna
te na hi main ban na a heer
mai ta rab to likhvai a
sade dova di vakhri takdeer
Na main vas kheria de pena
te na hi sehni a main judai
main ta jani a bus usde piyar vich
aapni sari umar langahai
sandeep gill
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2nd May 2008, 08:31 AM
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heer ji tuhanu reed karke bahut hi ajeeb jahe khayal wich gawach gaya c te sochan lai majboor ho gaya k
ajj de time wich v tuhade warge sajan pak pyar bare likhde han mainu nahi pata os kuda ne tuhanu kuch khas sikhaya hai ja shyad tusi bahut hi gum handa ke dekh laya hai per phir vi kuch taan hai jo mere varge
pather nu sochan lai majboor kar dinda hai
kher asi taan sirf read karan lai hi bane haan te vah vah karan lai
tusi bahut hi kamal da likhde ho jo main bayan ni kar sakda
haan par je sanu vi kite sat lagi taan jaroor kuch likhan ge
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SSA JI
Sab to pehla mai tuhada Iss mehfil ch suwagat kardi hai,
Ji Aaya Nu
mainu iss gal di khushi hai ke tusi aapni pehli reply mainu kiti hai,
Thx iss poem nu ena like karan liye
plz tusi eda na kaho ke......
"haan par je sanu vi kite sat lagi taan
jaroor kuch likhan ge"
sirf dard hi likhan da karan nahi hunda, tuahdi khushi vi tuhanu likhan layi mazboor kardi hai, os Rabb age duya hai ke tuahanu kide vi koi dard na mile, hamesha hi khushiya ni milan, tuhadi kuch likhan di starting khushiya to hi hove,
Again thx for ur costly time to read me
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2nd May 2008, 08:59 AM
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Na main usnu ranja kehna
te na hi main ban na a heer
mai ta rab to likhvai a
sade dova di vakhri takdeer
Na main vas kheria de pena
te na hi sehni a main judai
main ta jani a bus usde piyar vich
aapni sari umar langahai
sandeep gill
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SSA Sandeep Ji
Sab to pehla mai tuhada Iss mehfil ch suwagat kardi hai,
Jee Aaya Nu
tuhadi eh rachna vi bahut hi payri hai, keep it up
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2nd May 2008, 01:21 PM
SSA Sandeep Ji
Sab to pehla mai tuhada Iss mehfil ch suwagat kardi hai,
Jee Aaya Nu
tuhadi eh rachna vi bahut hi payri hai, keep it up
Thanks Heer ji bus todha shaunk a likhne da so jo dil vich aaunda a oh sab tuhadi nazar a
Thanks again
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2nd May 2008, 01:49 PM
""maza aa gaya, aapki yeh doo layen parkey,
Dil bich halchl macha di, kuch or lekho pless,
Kabhi keshey sey jekrey judai mat karna,
In asuoo ko kabhi rosnai mat karna,
Jaha dil na lagey merey dost bahi sey lot aana,
Magar keshe sey bebafai mat karna'''
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gurdeep -
2nd May 2008, 04:09 PM
Jiker-a-judai hum kisi se karte nahi
Game-a-aansu bhi dil main chupa lete hai
Bewafai hum unse kar sakte nahi
Isliye mehfil main bhi khud ko tenha sa pa lete hai
sandeep gill
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3rd May 2008, 12:21 AM
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""maza aa gaya, aapki yeh doo layen parkey,
Dil bich halchl macha di, kuch or lekho pless,
Kabhi keshey sey jekrey judai mat karna,
In asuoo ko kabhi rosnai mat karna,
Jaha dil na lagey merey dost bahi sey lot aana,
Magar keshe sey bebafai mat karna'''
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Ssa Monu.Sagar ji
thx for ur reply, and thx to like this
ate tuhadi peshkash vi bahut hi sohni hai
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3rd May 2008, 12:23 AM
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Jiker-a-judai hum kisi se karte nahi
Game-a-aansu bhi dil main chupa lete hai
Bewafai hum unse kar sakte nahi
Isliye mehfil main bhi khud ko tenha sa pa lete hai
sandeep gill
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Hello Sandeep ji
thx for ur reply
tusi ta bahut hi khooooooooooooob likhiya hai, goood
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3rd May 2008, 08:17 AM
La jawaab likhiya ji.....
ki gal e maza aa gaya...
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6th May 2008, 07:53 AM
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La jawaab likhiya ji.....
ki gal e maza aa gaya...
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Thanks Yanky Gabru ji, reply den liye and iss poem nu like karan liye
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12th May 2008, 02:01 PM
""Uthege jab doli teri uthege arthi meri
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12th May 2008, 02:06 PM
""Uthege jab doli
Teri Uthege arthi meri,
Kapra dono ka lal hoga,
Pharak sirf itna hoga
Humhey kisi ka intezar hoga
Or Humara antim sanskar hoga""
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12th May 2008, 02:07 PM
<P>""Uthege jab doli teri </P>
<P>Uthege arthi meri, </P>
<P>Kapra dono ka lal hoga, </P>
<P>Pharak sirf itna hoga </P>
<P>Humhey kisi ka intezar hoga </P>
<P>Or Humara antim sanskar hoga""</P>
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12th May 2008, 02:19 PM
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Ranjhan mera sab kuch jag te
ranjhan naal meri har reejh puri hai
ek ranjhan naal hazar khushiya jurriya
ranjhan naal hi mildi saroori hai
ranjhan khave ta mai raj java
nahi taa kis kam di eh churi hai
loke de torran naal kade tutani nahi
sadi yaari hi eni gurri hai
ranjhan dekha ta saah mere chalde
mere jion liye ranjhan jaroori hai
jina mai manga, tu ohna hi khove
das malik ki teri mazboori hai
Rabba mainu bheekh ch de de ranjhan mera
Mai Ranjhan bin adhuri hai
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wah ji wah ki kaha rahe ho tussi ta phir te yaad dila dite heer aur ranjhan di bahut gahari hai ye poem
Inder
Din beet jate hain suhani yaadein bankar,
Baate rah jati hai kahani bankar,
Par chahat to humesha dil ke pass rehegi,
kabhi muskan to kabhi ankhon ka pani bankar.
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12th May 2008, 02:21 PM
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<P>""Uthege jab doli teri </P>
<P>Uthege arthi meri, </P>
<P>Kapra dono ka lal hoga, </P>
<P>Pharak sirf itna hoga </P>
<P>Humhey kisi ka intezar hoga </P>
<P>Or Humara antim sanskar hoga""</P>
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are kya ho gaya aisha bhi nahi dost
Inder
Din beet jate hain suhani yaadein bankar,
Baate rah jati hai kahani bankar,
Par chahat to humesha dil ke pass rehegi,
kabhi muskan to kabhi ankhon ka pani bankar.
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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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12th May 2008, 07:37 PM
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Originally Posted by monu.sagar
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"Uthege jab doli
Teri Uthege arthi meri,
Kapra dono ka lal hoga,
Pharak sirf itna hoga
Humhey kisi ka intezar hoga
Or Humara antim sanskar hoga""
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Hello Monu.sagar ji
bahut hi khoooooooooob likhiya hai, eda hi hor likhan di try karana
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12th May 2008, 07:39 PM
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Originally Posted by Lovely_yaadein
wah ji wah ki kaha rahe ho tussi ta phir te yaad dila dite heer aur ranjhan di bahut gahari hai ye poem
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Thank u ji, tusi aapna costly time sade liye use kita,and aslo thx to like this poem
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16th May 2008, 04:27 PM
""itfaq ki jindgi hum jeya nahi kartey
Dohka hum kesi ko deya nahi kartey
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16th May 2008, 04:29 PM
""Itfaq ki jindgi hum jeya nahi kartey
Dohka hum kesi ko deya nahi kartey
Na janey kaha sey aa gaya
Un tum per dil
Warna hum dil kesi ko deya nahi kertey""
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16th May 2008, 04:34 PM
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16th May 2008, 10:15 PM
monu sagar aapne belagam jazbaataN nu thodi lagaam dio,kise di ehsaas je tusi samajh nahi sakde ta ohna naal khilwaad karan di koshish na karo.
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