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Bewafai ki misaal! -
2nd February 2005, 06:25 PM
Hi readers!
I was just sitting one night and suddenly a friend of mine came in my mind. This poet is all about his sad love ending...not about me. Please read it carefully. Concentrate on the words. And if you understand the real meaning of the words, it will surly touch your heart.... Na chahte the hum yu apna dard baantna magar, aapki bewafai hume ye mauka de gayi. Laakh chhupaye apne aansu yu baarish me bhigkar, Kambakht humari aankhen bhi hume dhokha de gayi. Kaheti hai duniya ki hume aap se bichhadne ka gam hai, Kar lo "MOHABBAT" kisi aur se ki tumhe humari kasam hai. Hum ne bhi bahut soch samaj ke yahi faisla kiya hai, Aakhir pyar karne wale is duniya me kya kam hai! Aaj humne bhi kisi aur se mohabbat nibhayi hai, Apni "BEWAFAI ki MISAAL" is duniya me banayi hai. Kari hai aapne jis se wafa yu hum se daman chhuda kar, Usi maut ko aaj humne, apne sine se lagayi hai. |
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2nd February 2005, 07:34 PM
Hi Nacheez,
Bahut hi sundar rachna hai aapki. Yunhi likhte raha karein. Sach mein isn mere dil ko chu liya. Bahut ache. Thanks Rohin |
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*~~fantastic |
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*~~fantastic -
2nd February 2005, 07:55 PM
the lines doesn't show any sign that you are a nacheez
really its terrific very very touching ap ne sach much bahut acha likha hae thanks for this nice contibution to shayri.com |
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3rd February 2005, 09:28 AM
Thank you Rohin and Shoaib ji.
I am just an new member on this site. I admire your wishes for me whole heartedly. |
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3rd February 2005, 11:36 AM
Na chahte the hum yu apna dard baantna magar,
aapki bewafai hume ye mauka de gayi. Laakh chhupaye apne aansu yu baarish me bhigkar, Kambakht humari aankhen bhi hume dhokha de gayi. Hi! Very nice Words.. the above sher for me was the best... Doo keep it Up!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd February 2005, 12:09 PM
Hi pulkeet ji!
Thanks for appreciating this "NACHEEZ". And your signature words are really impressive... Thanks. |
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4th February 2005, 05:46 PM
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