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tera ruthna -
13th May 2004, 11:47 AM
"TERE RUTHNE KI VAJAH MAIN SAMAJ NA PAYA,
KOI RAAZ HAI JO TUMNE MUJHSE ABTAK CHHUPAYA, KYON DIKHAYE TUMNE WOH KHWAAB MUJHE, JINE MAIN HAQEEKAT MEIN BADAL NA PAYA" "RUTH KAR TUM MUJHE BHULANE LAGE, ITNE DOOR HUEY KI BAHUT YAAD AANE LAGE, KAISE BHULADU TUMHE EK PAL MEIN, JAB TUMHE PAANE MEIN MUJHE ZAMANE LAGE" |
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Re: tera ruthna -
13th May 2004, 11:55 AM
Hi Raj!
Pehli baar aapki shayri padhi, aur pehli baar main aapki shayri ke "fan" ban gaye  Bahut achcha likha hai! Meri favorite lines hain: KAISE BHULADU TUMHE EK PAL MEIN, JAB TUMHE PAANE MEIN MUJHE ZAMANE LAGE Beautiful! Jahaan bhi ho, khushiyan hameshaa tumhaara peecha karen --Anu Quote:
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hi -
14th May 2004, 06:09 PM
DEAR RAJ BHAI , ADAB
aap ki postin sach much kafi achi hain you have written great lekin last ki para to pochie mat killer keep it on bahut khoob |
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Raj Sahab Bahut Khub -
14th May 2004, 08:20 PM
Hi Raj Sahab Bahut Khub Hu to Aapke es sher ke kayal ho Gaye, Mujhe Darr Hai ki Main jishe Phyar Karta Hoon Kanhi wo aapke sher se na pyar kar baithe. Khai Bahut Accha
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