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kisey maaluum hai manzil kahaaN hai -
11th July 2002, 09:55 AM
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ek arsaa bejaan sii paDii rahney ke baad ek din qalam ne hauslaa kiyaa to ek ghazal kahii... aap kii nazr hai.. islaah, tanqeed se ghurez na kiijiyegaaa. nashe meiN choor meer e kaarvaaN hai kisey maaluum hai manzil kahaaN hai uThaayaa tumney bhii jis zindagii ko mere kandhey pe bhii us kaa nishaaN hai ghaDii ke haath ik duujey se puuchcheiN "jo lamhaa jaa chukaa hai wo kahaaN hai?" tu shaakhoN kii taraf naa pheiNk pathar phaloN ke paas hii ik aashiiyaaN hai. jo bikney meiN madad kartii hai aksar mere sheroN meiN wo khushboo kahaaN hai!! zabaaN kaTney ke Dar se chup hai shaayad mujhey lagtaa nahiiN wo bezabaaN hai. samaa'at ko zaraa mahfuuz rakhnaa har ik insaan ke muuNh meiN zabaaN hai. feroz uskii jahaaN se kyaa nibhegii khud apney aap se jo bad_gumaaN hai aap kii aaraa kaa intezaar raheygaa. Feroz |
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khuoob kahi janab ...! |
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khuoob kahi janab ...! -
11th July 2002, 09:38 PM
aadab feroz ji ....
aapki nai ghazal padhi , kamal kae ashaar heN , khoob hae andaz-e bayaN aapka ! aate jata raha kijeye , oraainda aapki nai ghazal ka intizaar rahe ga ........acha ab ghazal par lete heN ...... nashe meiN dhutt meer e kaarvaaN hai kisey maaluum hai manzil kahaaN hai aaha !....khuoo uThaayaa tumney bhii jis zindagii ko mere kandhey pe bhii us kaa nishaaN hai ha-e ferozji ! ... khoob kaha .. ghaDii ke haath ik duujey se puuchcheiN "jo lamhaa jaa chukaa hai wo kahaaN hai?" nice1 ...... tu shaakhoN kii taraf naa pheiNk pathar phaloN ke paas hii ik aashiiyaaN hai. ha-e ha-e ..... zabardast ! ... jo bikney meiN madad kartii hai aksar mere sheroN meiN wo khushboo kahaaN hai!! wah wah ! ... zabaaN kaTney ke Dar se chup hai shaayad mujhey lagtaa nahiiN wo bezabaaN hai. khoob ..... samaa'at ko zaraa mahfuuz rakhnaa har ik insaan ke muuNh meiN zabaaN hai. aafreen feroz aafreen ....wah feroz uskii jahaaN se kyaa nibhegii khud apney aap se jo bad_gumaaN hai zabardast hae ....... wah ... plz feroz ji ...... aaindakoighazal jaldi post karna ....plz ok, bye sagar hamiN khum heN hamiN saghar hamiN maikash hamiN saqi ( majzoob ) |
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11th July 2002, 09:40 PM
adaab feroz ji.....bahut khoob likha hain aapne....
nashe meiN dhutt meer e kaarvaaN hai kisey maaluum hai manzil kahaaN hai uThaayaa tumney bhii jis zindagii ko mere kandhey pe bhii us kaa nishaaN hai tu shaakhoN kii taraf naa pheiNk pathar phaloN ke paas hii ik aashiiyaaN hai. zabaaN kaTney ke Dar se chup hai shaayad mujhey lagtaa nahiiN wo bezabaaN hai. ....wah wah.... kabhee saba ko kabhee naamaabar ko dekhte haiN woh aaye ghar meiN hamaare KHuda ki kudrat hai kabhee ham unko, kabhee apane ghar ko dekhte haiN nazar lage na kaheeN uske dast-o-baazoo ko ye log kyoN mere zaKHm-e-jigar ko dekhtaiN haiN ? |
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Bahut khoob..! |
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Bahut khoob..! -
15th July 2002, 06:55 PM
Adaab Feroz ji!!
Bahut arse baad aapka kalaam paRhna naseeb huya hai..aur hamesha ki tarah ye ghazal bhi aapka ek alag andaz liye huye hai...  Poori ghazal qabeel-e-taareef hai.....bas Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum sab ko apne umda kalamoN se navazte rahiye!!nashe meiN choor meer e kaarvaaN hai kisey maaluum hai manzil kahaaN hai uThaayaa tumney bhii jis zindagii ko mere kandhey pe bhii us kaa nishaaN hai ghaDii ke haath ik duujey se puuchcheiN "jo lamhaa jaa chukaa hai wo kahaaN hai?" tu shaakhoN kii taraf naa pheiNk pathar phaloN ke paas hii ik aashiiyaaN hai. jo bikney meiN madad kartii hai aksar mere sheroN meiN wo khushboo kahaaN hai!! zabaaN kaTney ke Dar se chup hai shaayad mujhey lagtaa nahiiN wo bezabaaN hai. samaa'at ko zaraa mahfuuz rakhnaa har ik insaan ke muuNh meiN zabaaN hai. feroz uskii jahaaN se kyaa nibhegii khud apney aap se jo bad_gumaaN hai Wah Wah...bahut hi khoob!!! DuaooN ke saath, Shumaila kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!! |
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15th July 2002, 08:40 PM
ustaad jee
SSA aur aadaab ek arsey baad mehrbaan hue haiN aap.....ghazal paDhii aur khoob pasaNd aayi...... jo bikney meiN madad kartii hai aksar mere sheroN meiN wo khushboo kahaaN hai!! ye she'r khaaskar pasaNd aaya.....aapka ishaara kis taraf hai shayad maiN samajh gaya....isliye...dil se "aah" pehle aur "waah" baad meiN nikli.....!! aur mere khayaal se aap apne sheroN ko kam kar ke aaNk rahe haiN......apne chahne vaaloN se puucHiye ki unki nigaahoN meiN aapka kya muqaam hai....!! aur aapke sheroN ke asar ki baabat aik misaal duuN to voh ye hai ke aapke aNdaaz-e-bayaaN aur aapki khayaaloN se mutaasir ho kar aapke is adney se shaagird ne bhi isii mauzoo par ek ghazal kahi hai jo ki mera aapse vaada hai ke manzir-e-aam par tab tak nahiiN aayegi jab tak aap na suneNgey aapka mureed maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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shukria -
20th July 2002, 03:17 AM
kashmiri sahab
aadaab aap ka mashkuur huuN... aap ne jis andaaz meiN daad dii hai us ke qaabil merii ghazal kahaaN... aap ne jo hausla afzaai ke liiye waqt nikaalaa hai us ke liyee maiN aap kaa ahsaan maNd huuN. shukria sahab!!!! Feroz |
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23rd July 2002, 06:40 AM
anamika ji
aap ke comments to paDh liye they lekin jawaab dene meiN zaraa der ho gayii. aap kaa shukria ke aap ne meri ghazal paDhii aur usey apni rai se nawaazaa. aaindaa bhii aap se isii tarah se hausla afzai kii tawaqo hai.. Feroz |
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23rd July 2002, 06:31 PM
Feroz sahab..apki gazal dil ko chuu gayee specially ..
feroz uskii jahaaN se kyaa nibhegii khud apney aap se jo bad_gumaaN hai .....aap jaise ustadoon..se hee to ham jaise sikhete hain......umeed kartee hain aur bhi bahut kuch sikhne ko milega |
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Shukria shumaila -
25th July 2002, 04:24 AM
shumaila ji
aadaab aap ne merii ghazal pasaNd kii us ke liiye shukria... pichchley kuchh arsey meIN sher kam kahey haiN, lkein jo kaheiN haiN wo aap dostoN kii nazr kar diiye haiN... aap isii tarah se izzat afzai kartii raheiNgii to maiN aur sher kahney kii himmat kartaa rahuNgaa. Feroz |
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30th July 2002, 09:39 AM
Hello dastak
aap ko ghazal ke ashaar pasaNd aaye to mujhey lagaa ke merii mehnat ko phal lag gaye.. aap ne jo izzat afzaaii farmaayi hai us ke liiye maiN aap ka mamnuun huN.. shukria Feroz |
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Re: kisey maaluum hai manzil kahaaN hai -
4th August 2002, 12:48 AM
Feroz Saheb
adaab badi himmat juata kar is bazm meiN qadam rakha hai. YahaN jo shayri padhta raha hooN usne mujhe kaafi mutasir kiya hai. Aaj socha ke chalen apni daad bhi aap ke saamne rakhen apni hi zubani. Aapki ye ghazal khoobsoorat hai. Sach poochiye to sabhi ashaar bade pasand aaye isliye kisi ek ko khas pasand keh ke rakhna ghazal ke saath zyadti hogi. jald hi himmat karke apna adna sa kaam bhi aap logoN ki pesh-e-khidmat karoonga. Umeed ahi ke aapke mazeed ashaar bhi padhne ko milte rahenge. nacheez sahir |
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5th August 2002, 08:53 PM
sahir sahab
aadaab aaj pahlii dafaa aap se mukhaatib ho rahaa huN... aap se mil kar khushii huii... arey bhai, yahaaN aaney ke liiye himmat juTaaney waali kaun sii baat hai.. is mehfil kaa maahaul baDaa dostaanaa hai.. aap ko merii ghazal pasaNd aayiii to merii mehnat ko silaa mil gayaa.. shukria... aap ke kalaam kaa intezaar rahegaa. Feroz Feroz ye zindagi hai kya 'feroz' shayari hai kya kuchh haulnaak haadsey asha'ar ho gaye |
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22nd August 2002, 11:50 PM
maikash sahab
sab se pahley to maazrat chaahtaa huuN, ki aap ne rai dii aur mujh se shukria adaa karney mein der ho gayii.. behad sharmindaa huuN>> behad sharmindaa.. ummiid hai aap buraa nahiiN maaneiNgey.. aap kaa mashkuur huuN. ki aap waqt nikaal kar merii izzat afzaii kartey rahtey haiN.... ek bar phir maazrat ke saath... Feroz Feroz ye zindagi hai kya 'feroz' shayari hai kya kuchh haulnaak haadsey asha'ar ho gaye |
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