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Tu maaro chako, ne hu taari chaki! (guj) -
3rd April 2006, 04:00 PM
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3rd April 2006, 04:07 PM
hi komal ,
kharekhar majaa aavi gai vaanchi ne ] ketlu sundar geet lakhyu chhe, jo tame lakhyu hoy to abhinandan lakhvaa badal ane tamaari kruti naa hoy to share kaevaa bada khub khub aabhaar Ahi ghana ochha gujju loko joya chhe sachej tamne jaanine ane vaanchi ne anand thayo mane, tamne samay male to kyaarek amaari mehfil maa aavsho to maja aavshe, ahij aaj site par. pahela paarul hati pan hamnaa thi teno sampark pan bahu thato nathi wid regards take care manu |
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3rd April 2006, 04:08 PM
Hi Komal,
su baat chhe... tu etlo saras lakhyo.. mane khabar naa thi... vaise thhii bhi  Lolzz...toota foota...but i guess u wud understand... iska hindi translaton kab post kar rahi ho... this looks very sweet from what i cud understand.... will be waiting... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd April 2006, 04:09 PM
Komal,
Really cute... very sweet... kuch to tumne khushi bhara likha... and all i will say is.... sutho che...  Tc Rohin |
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3rd April 2006, 04:48 PM
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Hello Acharya ji.... Mane pan lakhta khub j maja aavi..ghana vakhate gujrati ma lakhyu....ane aawu halku fulku kavya ...pan ghana wqte lakhayu maara thi....m glad tht u 2 liked it so much... thx a lot...4 it.han u'r right guj lakhva vada ocha che ahi...jyare bane tyare hu lakhi ne post karti rahu chu...ha chhela ghana wakhat thi awatu na hatu..karaan...lakhatu na hatu.. tc komal |
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3rd April 2006, 05:11 PM
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ya its very sweet....hindi mai itna sweet lage ya nahi nahi pata...bt i wd post a hindi version soon...tc komal |
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3rd April 2006, 05:15 PM
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HI rohin... thankyu so much... ......han achha lag raha hai likh k kuch halka fulka....tc komal |
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3rd April 2006, 05:23 PM
It wud... essence wud be the same naa baba... but yeah.. its always more beautiful in the language its written orignially...
Do post.. meanwhile... I'll check out my gujju dictionary when i reach home... remember.. didi gifted it to me.... hehe... I did one stupid thing naa then... abhi bhi hansi aati hai sochke... but still didi sent it to me afterwards.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd April 2006, 07:00 PM
Komal Ji!
Kharekhar khuba j saras rachna! Gujarati maa bahu occhu vanchvanu madey chey pan jyarey koi guj maa lakhey chey toh vanchvamaa ek anero anand avey chey! Farithi lakhta rehsho tevi asha sahit, Rajan!! |
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4th April 2006, 12:38 PM
mari priy komal,
hu mari abhivyakti vyakt nathi kari sakti . lollaughing , laughing and only laughing. it is very sweet and cute one di |
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4th April 2006, 03:15 PM
Its not that Cute....but here is the translation!
Bas aaj se teri meri baat pakki tu mera chaka mai teri chaki! apna nanha sa ek ghar hoga niche garden, tarrace upar hoga apne do honge, ek bachha ek bachhi tu mera chaka mai teri chaki! subah tiffin de dungi har roz jate wqt ek pappi lungi har roz shaam ko fone karna mai utha lungi jaldi tu mera chaka mai teri chaki! mai tera dhyan rakhungi tu mera rakhna baad mai "Aap" bulaungi tuje! thik hai na! tu kam chidna, mai kam karungi baka baki (bak-bak) tu mera chaka mai teri chaki! Ab koi shaq nahi hume humdum rahenge yunhi pyaar se hardam mera dil keh raha hai "Oh i am so lucky..! tu mera chaka mai teri chaki! Bas aaj se teri meri baat pakki! -komal |
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5th April 2006, 12:51 PM
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Heloo rajan ji....... khub aabhaar....! sachu che...guj maa vanchva ni alag maja hoy che...tamne e aanaand madyo....m glad! tc komal |
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5th April 2006, 12:53 PM
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Hey di.... Awu karvanu!....hasaay jaaye to....abhivyakti aapjo...ok!? tc komal |
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5th April 2006, 01:04 PM
Komal,
this is sooooooooooooooooo cute... sach me... too too good... loved it... hehe... Likhne jaisa asaan ho jaaye sab kucch to baat hi kya hai naa.... really very sweet.... hehe... bahut hi cute hai... sachhi... It brought such a biggg smile on my face... seems easy... but its difficult to write thse thoughts and even more to share them... I am still smiling... this will remain as one of my favs... written with such a pure heart naa...Jus Keep sharing them with us... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th April 2006, 01:16 PM
Hi...pulkit!
Tumhe hindi version bhi itana cute laga jaane k bahot achha laga! u'r right...its leaves a smile for long time even on my face..after i read it...infact i read it again n again...2 smile!..  heheheh..............just hope life goes this smooth 4 evryone...N This will remain dearest 2 me 2....4 all my life perhaps!! tc komal |
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5th April 2006, 04:56 PM
yeahh Komal... this is special coz it comes from the innocent soul... Seedha dil se aaya hai... Roz-marra ki bhaag daud me yeh saadgi kahin kho jaati hai... to be able to maintain it is difficult....
Wish one always can write so pure.... Actually after reading this... i feel like writing too... which doesnt happen often now a days.... hehe... mazaa aa gaya yaar... too good Lol...imagine u showing it ur kids... hehe... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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6th April 2006, 05:21 PM
Mujhe Gujraati nahi aati...lekin iska hindi version padh ke bahut acha laga....Yaaar tum toh bilkul professional shayar ho gayee ho....good hai....Keep it up
Khaksaar :"A Smile can change your World so KEEP SMILING": |
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6th April 2006, 05:32 PM
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Hey....after such a long time...hope u r fine!...gud 2 have ur reply afte a long time...hindi version...pasnd karne k lye thanks...so much!............professional... hmm gud joke!tc komal |
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6th April 2006, 10:14 PM
lol..thanx for the translation...now cld u also do it in english?
juss kidding.this was sooooooo cute! filled with the love and laughter one always desires...but ek baat hai...wht is chaka nd chaki???  plz tell me take care bye »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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6th April 2006, 10:15 PM
Hi Komal
I thought this was a really heart felt poem! with real life meaning and feelings. Such a sweet composition....ek chota sa ghar, do pyar karne wale, jatey same tiffin dena, ye choti choti cheezain makes life so beautiful na, though thi sis in guj, i could still understand, and kyu na samajhti kyuki, this has such hrtfelt emotions of love, simple and sweet! i loved it immensly keep writing Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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7th April 2006, 11:13 AM
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Thanks so much for liking it... Actually in Gujrati, female sparrow is called "Chakli" and the male is called "Chaklo". .....well "chako chaki" are a words derived from nursery tales in gujrati ...U can called them names given to any story characters, just to add flavour of cuteness in it! ......so chaklo-chakli has got transformed in to..."chako- chaki" that way!..........ek chideeya....aur ek chida! hope i cd make it clear.....!! thanks ..n tc komal |
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7th April 2006, 11:16 AM
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Hiee Priya! u r right...choti choti baateiN hi life ko sundar matlab de jati hain...har kisi k dil mai palti hain...har koi inhe jeeta hai....! I am so glad ki Guj mai hote hue...u njoyed it ...............thanks a lot....sweety!tc komal |
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10th April 2006, 11:09 AM
Dearest Komal,
Bahu j saras kavita lakhi chhe, vaanchi ne saaru laagyu. it's so cute. keep writting dear. take care! |
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14th February 2007, 10:08 AM
komal ji nice one su vaat chhe
bahu j saras kavita chhe |
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12th May 2007, 05:35 PM
hi komal
bahuj sari kavita chhe maja aavi gai mane aanand thase jo mane reply karsho to Email -ashutosh_gor@yahoo.com |
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21st June 2007, 11:39 AM
hi komal ghanij saras kavita lakhi ne post kari chhe... aavij rite gujrati ma post chalu rakhjo. bye
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9th November 2007, 05:23 PM
Hi, Komal
i m new in this shayri family, from East Africa, basicly from Gujarat. Are vachi ne khare khar jamo padi gyo, Em kevay che ke gujju o ne sher shayri akrta sher market ma vadhu dimag chale che, pan te aa vat akhoti sabit kari didhi me ek thread shayri e dard ma lakhi che vachje me college time ma lakhi hati koi mate (I know sav bhangar che) Raj |
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9th November 2007, 08:14 PM
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felt gud 2 read ur comments..thanks for liking it...apdi guj chej sweet language. ane ..ok wil try n find ur post.tc Komal |
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12th November 2007, 01:00 PM
Hi Komal
Aapni Gujrati TALPADI bhasama lakhayelu kai tara collection ma hoy to post karje ne PLEASE. kem ke ahi videshma aapni talpadi (Basic) bhasa ma kai vachvanu maltu nathi, chata ghani vakhat tahuko.com ma kaik navu mali jay che " E jone kathiyawad ma kokdi bhulo pad bhagvan tane monghero karu meman, ne tane swarag bhulavu shayamda. Raj Teiro mat........... Baho (Dont Sweem..... Just Flow) |
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30th November 2007, 11:45 AM
Har koyi har kisi ka yaar nahi hota,
Har dost wafadaar nahin hota... ye to dil milne ki baat hain, warna saat feron main bhi pyaar nahi hota... |
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3rd December 2007, 11:06 PM
Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,
sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai, Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar, To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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4th December 2007, 09:42 PM
Kyun pyaar karne ki hadein hoti hein,
Kyun dil dene ki waje hoti hein, Kyun jazbaaton ko dabana padta hai, Kyun iss dil ko samjana padta hai, Kyun har dil ko ye mehsoos nahin hota, Kyun sabko ye manzoor nahin hota, Kyun dil se dil nahin milta, Kyun pyaar ka phool nahin khilta, Kyun dil ke naghme dil nahin gaata, Dil mein kya hai ye keh nahin pata, Kya dil dene ki yahi saza hai, Kya pyaar karne mein yahi mazaa hai? AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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