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ik kudi.... - 22nd February 2009, 07:36 PM
ik kudi meri zindgi ch aayi.
chahundi c oh maitho haq ch gwaahi.
par kuj v nai ohde lyi mere kolo hoia.
ohnu v rwaiya nale aap bda roiya.

oh khiji-2 rehndi c,khud to udaas.
oh c khushiyaan udeekdi,ik zindgi be-aas.
de k dilaase ohnu.main aap piche hoia.
ohnu v rwaiya nale aap bda roiya...

sochda haan main,k oh sochdi ki hou.
haal jdo mera eh hai,halat osdi ki hou.
oh v hou taare gindi,janda mere to v nai jdo soiya.
ohnu v rwaiya,nale aap bda roiya..

akheer hath jod aakh dita,ohnu zindgi cho jaan lyi.
bs yaad ohdi rakh lyi,geet j bnaun lyi.
pad'di ta hou mainu oh,krke chit admoya.
ohnu v rwaiya nale aap bda roiya...

chup reh "deep" hun tu kuj kehn joga nai.
khushi v na bhaal,j tu khushi den joga nai.
meri majboori ne,jion da hi maksad maitho khoia.
ohnu v rwaiya nale aap bda roia...
   
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mera dard - 28th February 2009, 01:08 AM
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ik kudi meri zindgi ch aayi.
chahundi c oh maitho haq ch gwaahi.
par kuj v nai ohde lyi mere kolo hoia.
ohnu v rwaiya nale aap bda roiya.

oh khiji-2 rehndi c,khud to udaas.
oh c khushiyaan udeekdi,ik zindgi be-aas.
de k dilaase ohnu.main aap piche hoia.
ohnu v rwaiya nale aap bda roiya...

sochda haan main,k oh sochdi ki hou.
haal jdo mera eh hai,halat osdi ki hou.
oh v hou taare gindi,janda mere to v nai jdo soiya.
ohnu v rwaiya,nale aap bda roiya..

akheer hath jod aakh dita,ohnu zindgi cho jaan lyi.
bs yaad ohdi rakh lyi,geet j bnaun lyi.
pad'di ta hou mainu oh,krke chit admoya.
ohnu v rwaiya nale aap bda roiya...

chup reh "deep" hun tu kuj kehn joga nai.
khushi v na bhaal,j tu khushi den joga nai.
meri majboori ne,jion da hi maksad maitho khoia.
ohnu v rwaiya nale aap bda roia...

bahut accha likhde ho tusi d33p ji .... rab kare kise da yaAr usto na bichare ...



MERE DIL DA HAAL SUNNAWE KOI USNU MERE WANG RO KE ...
KI HANDAWAN KHUSHIYAN PYAAR APPNE NU KHO KE ....
KITE OH VI SOCHDA HOU KI KEHAR OH KAMA GAYA
AJJ FER OH MAINU YAAD AA KE ROUA GAYA ...
AJJ FER OH MAINU YAAD A KE ROUA GAYA ...
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28th February 2009, 02:24 PM
thanx malika g.. rabb tuhanu nsab khushiyaan deve...
   
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2nd May 2009, 12:28 PM
Awesome bai ji.. cant imagine .. ki koi ehna vadiya vi likh sakda hai.
   
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2nd May 2009, 02:35 PM
Tuhade naina de hanju vehk ke,
Ohde naina chon v hanju vagde ne,
Duhk hove tuhanu vichore di par,
Ohnu v zhakam lagde ne...

Sat sri akal D33P ji,
Tuhadi shayri mainu bohat hi vadiya lagdi hai...
I hope you keep writing for years to come...
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4th May 2009, 01:17 PM
thanx amrjeet ji n ria ji..thanx alot..te ria ji thanx tsi bht vadia post kita ..
   
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13th May 2009, 03:32 AM
bahoot khoob deep ji. tuvadi kalam che vakai bahot jaan hegi aah. tuvade eh ehsaas saade dil nu chu gaye. janab umeed karde haa k aage be tuvaanu padan da mocka milda rahuga...

Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
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one drop at a time....
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thanx musafir ji aina maan den lyi..........................................
   
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15th August 2009, 05:58 PM
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thanx malika g.. rabb tuhanu nsab khushiyaan deve...
MENU CHAD KE JAAN WALIYA ,,, MERA KASOOR KI AE
MERA NAAL PA KE KAMLI DA DIL CHURA KE ,
NAZRA CHURAN WALIYA MERA KASOOR KI AE....

APPNA BANAYA TEINU,,SINNE MAIN LAYA TEINU
AJJ TERE KOL BEH KE DUKHRA SUNAYA TEINU..
DIL DE KAREEB HO KE,BULIYAN DE HASSE KHO KE ..
MUKHRA LUKAAN WALIYA .. MERA KASOOR KI AE

BHUL GAYE NE TEINU WADE ,DUKH DE GAYAN AIE DADHE
KIHRI GALTI HOI HAI SATHON ,,BADLE TERE IRADE ,,,
MIL KE BICHAR GAYAN AE, HER GAL TO FHIR GAYAN AE,
JOOTHI JOOBAN WALIYA MERA KASOOR KI AE

MANGIYA ASAN DUAWAN, TEINU MILAN THANDIYA CHAWAN,,
ASAN PAYAR TEINU KITA ,, DITIYA NE TU SAJAWAN
GERAN DE NAAL WAS KE ,,HUN DOORON DOORON HASS KE
SANNU RULAN WALIYA , MERA KASOOR KI AE
   
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16th August 2009, 01:14 PM
awesome koi shabad nahi mere kol

ਮੌਤ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕ ਵਿੱਚ
ਸਾਡੇ ਕੱਫਨ ਮੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ....
ਗਮ ਖਾ ਖਾ ਕੇ ਸੱਜਣਾ
ਸਾਡੇ ਗੀਤ ਕੁਸੈਲੇ ਹੋ ਗਏ...

   
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16th August 2009, 05:36 PM
thanx bangerdeep ji..............................................
   
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16th August 2009, 05:41 PM
Deep ji...........................bas el lafz tuhadi poetry laye.....SUPERB.

keep writing

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17th August 2009, 10:57 AM
Deep bahut wadhiyaa likhiyaa hai. Kujh gallaaN wich bahut asar laggaa. essey hi zameen da geet main ajj saverey jalandhar toN aundey aundey raastey wich sun rihaa si...

Tor ke maiN tainu kinnaa royeyaa kadey puch laeeN...
Kaaljey ch chek(hole) kiddaa hoyeaa kadey puch laeeN...

haukaa asmaan jiddaa lai ke jis pal tooN......
Changaa fer chalaaN keh ke laggi merey gal tooN...
othey kinni muddat khaloyaa kadey puch laeeN....

mehak terey tan di ne keetaa pareshaan kinnaa....
Khud te sharam kinni, terey uttey maan kinnaa...
Kinni waaree taithoN jo lakoyeyaa kadey puch laeeN...

Debi fatt laaun waaley, uttoN loon paun waaley....
terey pichoN kinney miley mallmaaN lagaaun waaley....
Marney toN pehlaaN mel hoyeyaa kadey puch laeeN....
Kaaljey ch chek(hole) kiddaa hoyeaa kadey puch laeeN...

(Debi Makhsoospuri)

Es geet de mukhdey ne mainu onna impress nahi keetaa jinna antriaaN ne. Par kisey shayar nu puch ke dekho ki mukhdey laee antraa atey antrey laee mukhdaa paidaa karnaa kinaa mushkil hundaa hai... sach much kisey pehley shiley jihaa.... sikhar dupehar wich kisey rukhoN vohooney tapdey raah jihaa.... bhukhey baalaaN (kids) nu roti da bhulekhaa de ke salaaundee maaN diaaN aandraaN wich waj-dey sall jihaaaa......

jeondey raho kalam de jaadugaro.....

Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
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17th August 2009, 06:41 PM
thanx ji.........tsi pad lea..aina e bht a..... and m also a fan of debi makhsoospuri.. ohna wrga bannnna mushkil hai..
   
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