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Ehsaas Us Sukhad Pal Ka -
21st August 2010, 11:30 AM
Ehsaas us sukhad pal ka,
Dil me taaza sa lagta hai
Aahat hai tumhare kadmo ki,
Kyu ye andaza sa lagta hai
Chah kar bhi bhula nahi paate,
Dil ka pakka iraada sa lagta hai
Jo kabhi diya hi nahi tumko,
Kyu ab vo vaada sa lagta hai
chand lamhe bitaaye jo sath me,
unka asar kuch jayada sa lagta hai
Kyun samjh ke bhi nasamjh banta hai,
Ye dil bhi ab nada.n sa lagta hai
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22nd August 2010, 08:53 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by r_singla95
Ehsaas us sukhad pal ka,
Dil me taaza sa lagta hai
Aahat hai tumhare kadmo ki,
Kyu ye andaza sa lagta hai
Chah kar bhi bhula nahi paate,
Dil ka pakka iraada sa lagta hai
Jo kabhi diya hi nahi tumko,
Kyu ab vo vaada sa lagta hai
chand lamhe bitaaye jo sath me,
unka asar kuch jayada sa lagta hai
Kyun samjh ke bhi nasamjh banta hai,
Ye dil bhi ab nada.n sa lagta hai
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Nice Poetry......Singla Ji ! Ehsaas bahut khoob rahe.. yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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22nd August 2010, 09:44 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by r_singla95
Ehsaas us sukhad pal ka,
Dil me taaza sa lagta hai
Aahat hai tumhare kadmo ki,
Kyu ye andaza sa lagta hai
Chah kar bhi bhula nahi paate,
Dil ka pakka iraada sa lagta hai
Jo kabhi diya hi nahi tumko,
Kyu ab vo vaada sa lagta hai
chand lamhe bitaaye jo sath me,
unka asar kuch jayada sa lagta hai
Kyun samjh ke bhi nasamjh banta hai,
Ye dil bhi ab nada.n sa lagta hai
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achha laga padhkar likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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24th August 2010, 01:53 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Nice Poetry......Singla Ji ! Ehsaas bahut khoob rahe.. yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi... !
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Dhanyawad Naresh Ji,
Isi trah sath dete rahiye.! Mujhe padhne ka bahut bahut shukriya.!
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24th August 2010, 02:08 PM
[QUOTE=r_singla95;406850]Ehsaas us sukhad pal ka,
Dil me taaza sa lagta hai
Aahat hai tumhare kadmo ki,
Kyu ye andaza sa lagta hai
Chah kar bhi bhula nahi paate,
Dil ka pakka iraada sa lagta hai
Jo kabhi diya hi nahi tumko,
Kyu ab vo vaada sa lagta hai
chand lamhe bitaaye jo sath me,
unka asar kuch jayada sa lagta hai
Kyun samjh ke bhi nasamjh banta hai,
Ye dil bhi ab nada.n sa lagta hai
[/QUOTE
bhot acha likha hain bhot sunder
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25th August 2010, 10:57 AM
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achha laga padhkar likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath
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Ishk Ji,
Bahut Bahut dhanyawaad mujhe padhne ke liye .....
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25th August 2010, 11:02 AM
masha allah . kya khoobsoorat baat kahi hai aapne .. dil se daad
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25th August 2010, 02:22 PM
[QUOTE=shayari;407195]
Quote:
Originally Posted by r_singla95
Ehsaas us sukhad pal ka,
Dil me taaza sa lagta hai
Aahat hai tumhare kadmo ki,
Kyu ye andaza sa lagta hai
Chah kar bhi bhula nahi paate,
Dil ka pakka iraada sa lagta hai
Jo kabhi diya hi nahi tumko,
Kyu ab vo vaada sa lagta hai
chand lamhe bitaaye jo sath me,
unka asar kuch jayada sa lagta hai
Kyun samjh ke bhi nasamjh banta hai,
Ye dil bhi ab nada.n sa lagta hai
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bhot acha likha hain bhot sunder
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Shukriya Pawan....
Aise hi sath dete rahiyega....
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25th August 2010, 03:10 PM
Aahat hai tumhare kadmo ki,
Kyu ye andaza sa lagta hai
chand lamhe bitaaye jo sath me,
unka asar kuch jayada sa lagta hai
Kya kahne , janaab kya kahne
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26th August 2010, 11:31 AM
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masha allah . kya khoobsoorat baat kahi hai aapne .. dil se daad
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Shukriya Parveen Ji,
Aise hi sath dete rahiye....
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26th August 2010, 11:32 AM
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Aahat hai tumhare kadmo ki,
Kyu ye andaza sa lagta hai
chand lamhe bitaaye jo sath me,
unka asar kuch jayada sa lagta hai
Kya kahne , janaab kya kahne
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Shukriya JanuManu bhai,
Aapne mujhe padha aur saraha uske liye dil se shukargujaar hu....Aise hi sath dete rahiyega...
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26th August 2010, 02:08 PM
Hello singla jee, sorry i dont know ur name. Bahut hee khoobsoorat ehsaas hain aapke aur use utne hee khoobsoorat lafzon mein piroya hai aapne, dil se daad deta høon kubool kijiyega, yun hee likhte rahiye khush rahiye.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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26th August 2010, 03:43 PM
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Hello singla jee, sorry i dont know ur name. Bahut hee khoobsoorat ehsaas hain aapke aur use utne hee khoobsoorat lafzon mein piroya hai aapne, dil se daad deta høon kubool kijiyega, yun hee likhte rahiye khush rahiye.
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shukriya Arvind ji,
Mujhe padhne aur sarhaane ke liye bahot bahot shukriya.....
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