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khone laga hai hosh abto bahke hain kadam wabadstoor magar jari raha hai jindgi ka safar........ 'dilip' 8th share ta umar yu he dhondhta raha zindagi ko main, tere pyar ki rah main mujhe mila hai zindagi ka safar....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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19th August 2006, 01:45 PM
chalo nai gazal shuru karte hai.......lakin gayr se .....har cheez ka dhiyaan rahe......
1st share..... teri khuli zulfon tale ek shaam chhahta hoon, teri mast nazron se ek jaam chhahta hoon...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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mai bhi khuli julffo mai tera haath chahti hoon, madhooshi se bahri aise hi ek shaam chahti hoon... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st August 2006, 10:44 AM
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mai bhi khuli julffo mai tera haath chahti hoon, madhooshi se bahri aise hi ek shaam chahti hoon... -sunita virender wah wah sunita ji kaya andaaz hai bhut khub..... 5th share tu agar mere dil main bass jaye sada ke liye, main bhee taumar tere dil main qyaam chahta hoon...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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mai bhi khuli julffo mai tera haath chahti hoon, madhooshi se bahri aise hi ek shaam chahti hoon... -sunita virender 5th share tu agar mere dil main bass jaye sada ke liye, main bhee taumar tere dil main qyaam chahta hoon...... 'veer' [/B][/QUOTE] 6th sher thak gaya hoon karte karte intzaar tera teri taraf se pyar ka ek paigaam chahta hoon... dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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21st August 2006, 11:09 AM
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thak gaya hoon karte karte intzaar tera teri taraf se pyar ka ek paigaam chahta hoon... dilip 7th share chhip chhipke kab tak karta rahounga mohabat, apni chhahat ka izhaar main sare aam chhahta hoon..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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21st August 2006, 11:34 AM
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chhip chhipke kab tak karta rahounga mohabat, apni chhahat ka izhaar main sare aam chhahta hoon..... 'veer' 8th sher- qaid kabse kar rakha hain muje zamane ne teri zulfon main lipti hui bas ek shaam chahta hu. -Deep marane kii duaaye.n kyuu.N maa.Nguu.N jiine kii tamaannaa kaun kare ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare jo aag lagaaii thii tum ne us ko to bujhaayaa ashko.n ne jo ashko.n ke bha.Dakaaii hai us aag ko Tha.nDaa kaun kare jab kashtii saabit-o-saalib thii, saahil kii tamannaa kisako thii ab aisii shikastaa kashtii me.n saahil kii tamannaa kaun kare duniyaa ne hame.n chho.Daa ai dil, ham chho.D na de kyo.n duniyaa ko duniyaa ko samajh kar baiThe hai.n ab duniyaa duniyaa kaun kare -Moen Ahsan Jazbi |
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21st August 2006, 12:29 PM
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21st August 2006, 12:36 PM
qaid kabse kar rakha hain muje zamane ne
teri zulfon main lipti hui bas ek shaam chahta hu. is ke baad kcuh kahate hain ashaq ab bane hain sukoon-e-zakham ka sabab kuch lamaha rone do mujh ko aram chahta hoon Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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21st August 2006, 12:43 PM
barso beet gaye yu chip chip kar miltey huey,
ab es benaam rishtey ka koi naam chahti hoon.... -sunita virender zindgee jis ke liye nam us ke kar do tum jo meree ho faqat bas ek sham chahtee hoon... Anil parashar kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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ab naye gazal shuru karty hai jiska phela share appki gazal ka hi hai. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st August 2006, 12:49 PM
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Teree masoom baten jinda tajmahal hain Agara kaun jaye ek majar ke peeche........ .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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shukriya -
21st August 2006, 12:54 PM
shukriya sunita mere sher ko itne ekeemat dene ke liye
Anil Teree masoom baten jinda tajmahal hain Agara kaun jaye ek majar ke peeche........ teree hawayon main har phool ghula hai bhagte the yoon hee bahar ke peeche Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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hi -
21st August 2006, 01:43 PM
Teree masoom baten jinda tajmahal hain
Agara kaun jaye ek majar ke peeche........ teree hawayon main har phool ghula hai bhagte the yoon hee bahar ke peeche Anil ab is se barkar khushnaseebi kaya hogi, unka aashiana abaad hai meri mazaar ke peeche..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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21st August 2006, 01:44 PM
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Teree masoom baten jinda tajmahal hain Agara kaun jaye ek majar ke peeche........ sunita 2nd sher teree hawayon main har phool ghula hai bhagte the yoon hee bahar ke peeche Anil [/B][/QUOTE] 3rd sher tera hushn hai damkte hue aaftab ki tarah yu.n hee firta tha main shringar ke peeche dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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21st August 2006, 03:04 PM
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tera hushn hai damkte hue aaftab ki tarah yu.n hee firta tha main shringar ke peeche dilip 5th share tamaam umar meri isee soach main guzri, kaya wajha rahi hogi tere inkaar ke peeche....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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21st August 2006, 03:21 PM
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tamaam umar meri isee soach main guzri, kaya wajha rahi hogi tere inkaar ke peeche....... 'veer' 6th sher tum ne hee nazar barhatee nahee kabhee ikrara bhee khara tha us inkar ke peeche Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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21st August 2006, 03:26 PM
6th sher
tum ne hee nazar barhatee nahee kabhee ikrara bhee khara tha us inkar ke peeche Anil 7th share isee kashamkash main doob gaye hum, sahil ki tarf bhaagain ya majhdhaar ke peeche....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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21st August 2006, 04:18 PM
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21st August 2006, 04:22 PM
1st sher
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tum se thi yeh zindgi tum se hi tha yeh jahan........ har kushi hum se chin gaye mangi jo humne ek dua... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st August 2006, 04:35 PM
1st sher
humsafar na mila to tham gaya tha karwan.. ek tara bhi humse chin gaya,manga jo humne aasmaan nisha 2nd share tum se thi yeh zindgi tum se hi tha yeh jahan........ har kushi hum se chin gaye mangi jo humne ek dua... -sunita virender 3rd sher socha tha ki tu jo mil gaya, hogi haseen ye fiza.. par aaj hi nam hai meri ankhein,aaj hi hoon main tanha.. nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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21st August 2006, 05:12 PM
3rd sher
socha tha ki tu jo mil gaya, hogi haseen ye fiza.. par aaj hi nam hai meri ankhein,aaj hi hoon main tanha.. nisha nisha bhut ache... 4th share kisi ko chhahte rehna gar khatta nahi to phir, kiyon tujhse juda hoon kis baat ki hai ye saza...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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21st August 2006, 05:48 PM
Dearest members....
It seems it is about time that I did say something....this thread is not to be used lightly...i would like each of you to go and read Maikash Sahib's thread.....The Technical Aspects,Terms And Rules of Ghazal Writing..... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...&threadid=2125 aur phir aa kar dekhiye aap kaise be-parwaah ho kar ek ke baad ek sher post karte jaa rahe hain...i want everyone to seriously think of improving what they are doing...please maintain the integrity of the thread... take time to write a sher...do not post it until you are sure of the content...and its validity as a properly executed sher... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Hi all,
Main Paras ki baat se sehmat hoon... Dekhiye is kooche ke shuru kiye jaane kaa maksad yehi thha ke hum sab saath milkar apni technical knowledge badhaayen... aur Maikash ji ki post se behtar guide kucch nahi... mere jaise naa jaane kitno ne jo kucch seekha hai usi se seekha hai.... Chaliye main ek ghazal shuru kiye deta hoon...Radeef aur kaafiya explain karke... Ise aage badhaiyega.... ============================================ Ist Sher Ki jab bhii dostii humne, dil se use nibhaaya hai pyaaraa ek ehsaas sang apne harpal paaya hai ============================================ Is Sher me... Radeef - hai Kaafiya - aaya (nibhaaya, paaya) Ek baat aur dhyaan rakhiye....ghazal ke pehle sher yaani ki matle ke dono misron me radeef kaafiya hona zaroori hai...iske baad har shere ke dossre misre me (Dono misron me bhi kaafiya aa sakta hai)... So jab bhi nayi ghazal shhuru hogi...pehle sher ke dono misron me radeef kaafiya hoga jaise ke mere sher me hai.... Bass yehi chhoti si baatein dhyaan rakhkar ise aage badhaiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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21st August 2006, 06:48 PM
Ist Sher
Ki jab bhii dostii humne, dil se use nibhaaya hai pyaaraa ek ehsaas sang apne harpal paaya hai bhut ache pulkit ji....nice one...lakin kush kami khatak rahi hai..batana chhaunga.......agar yeh aise hota to or acha lagta... Ist Sher jab bhii ki dostii humne, dil se use nibhaaya hai, pyara sa ek ehsaas apne sang harpal paaya hai...... maaf kijiye....jiyada samajh to nahi phir bhee himakat ki hai....raj... 2nd share kaya samjhe dard-e-dil ko kaya dawa kare koi, apno se he apne dil ka har ik dard chhupaya hai...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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21st August 2006, 06:59 PM
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jab bhii ki dostii humne, dil se use nibhaaya hai, pyara sa ek ehsaas apne sang harpal paaya hai...... pulkit 2nd share kaya samjhe dard-e-dil ko kaya dawa kare koi, apno se he apne dil ka har ik dard chhupaya hai...... 'veer' 3rd share diya saath har mod pe,har ranj-o-gham mai phir bhi, kyon har bar anjaam-e-dosti ne hume itna rulayaa hai... akelijaan gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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21st August 2006, 07:10 PM
Hi Rajveer,
Maafi jaisi koi baat hi nahi hai...Main abhi seekh hi raha hoon... and I am always open to suggestions aapne jo modify kiya mujhe usme ek kami lagi... ab yeh aisa lag raha hai jaise hum vaakya bol rahe hain... poetic flow kam ho gaya hai.... Dono ko gunguna ke dekhiye... mujhe fark lagta hai khair...aise healthy arguments bahut hi acche hote hain.... isse seekhne ko bahut milta hai.... Likhte rahiyega... aur aage bhi bina jhijhak tokiyega.... apna khayal rakhiye.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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21st August 2006, 11:36 PM
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jab bhii ki dostii humne, dil se use nibhaaya hai, pyara sa ek ehsaas apne sang harpal paaya hai...... pulkit 2nd share kaya samjhe dard-e-dil ko kaya dawa kare koi, apno se he apne dil ka har ik dard chhupaya hai...... 'veer' 3rd share diya saath har mod pe,har ranj-o-gham mai phir bhi, kyon har bar anjaam-e-dosti ne hume itna rulayaa hai... akelijaan 4th sher Jaane kyon kehte ho baar baar ki hum ne sataaya hai Ansoo hum ne peeya aur humin ne dhoka khaaya hai...! Mushkil Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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22nd August 2006, 10:26 AM
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har gum mai har mushkil main hum tere saath chaley, phir kyu rahey mohabat mai tumney humey thukraya hai.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd August 2006, 10:47 AM
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6th sher thoonth si ho gayi jindgi ko tune fir se samhala hai........ aayi jo khushi jeevan me kismat ne hame sataya hai dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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22nd August 2006, 10:52 AM
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har gum mai har mushkil main hum tere saath chaley, phir kyu rahey mohabat mai tumney humey thukraya hai.... -sunita virender sunita ji acha kaha..... 6th share rishton ki bheer main wo shaksh kiyon kho gaya hai, har rishte ki garima ko jisne jaan se barker nibhaiya hai..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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22nd August 2006, 10:55 AM
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tere khabbo ko ek din sach mujhe karna hai, es liye to humne tere pyar ko gale lagaya hai.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd August 2006, 10:59 AM
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tabhi to rahe mohhabt me maine hath tumhe thamaya hai.... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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22nd August 2006, 11:00 AM
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tere khabbo ko ek din sach mujhe karna hai, es liye to humne tere pyar ko gale lagaya hai.... -sunita virender 8th share tere qadmo ki khakh bhe meri liye khushnaseebi thee, ab main sona ban gaya hoon jab se tune aang lagaiya hai..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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22nd August 2006, 11:06 AM
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jab bhii ki dostii humne, dil se use nibhaaya hai, pyara sa ek ehsaas apne sang harpal paaya hai...... pulkit 2nd share kaya samjhe dard-e-dil ko kaya dawa kare koi, apno se he apne dil ka har ik dard chhupaya hai...... 'veer' 3rd share diya saath har mod pe,har ranj-o-gham mai phir bhi, kyon har bar anjaam-e-dosti ne hume itna rulayaa hai... akelijaan 4th sher Jaane kyon kehte ho baar baar ki hum ne sataaya hai Ansoo hum ne peeya aur humin ne dhoka khaaya hai...! Mushkil 5th share har gum mai har mushkil main hum tere saath chaley, phir kyu rahey mohabat mai tumney humey thukraya hai.... -sunita virender 6th share rishton ki bheer main wo shaksh kiyon kho gaya hai, har rishte ki garima ko jisne jaan se barker nibhaiya hai..... 'veer' 7th share tere khabbo ko ek din sach mujhe karna hai, es liye to humne tere pyar ko gale lagaya hai.... -sunita virender 8th share tere qadmo ki khakh bhe meri liye khushnaseebi thee, ab main sona ban gaya hoon jab se tune aang lagaiya hai..... 'veer' yeh gazal puri ho gaye hai ab naye shuru kijiye , .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd August 2006, 11:47 AM
chaliye dosto ek nai gazal shuru karta hoon koshish karounga ki aasaan c ho taa ki app sab ape share post kar sake.....
1st share saaz-e dil ko chhero chhahat ka mausam hai, dil ki dharkano main koi dharak raha har dam hai....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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