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23rd March 2008, 04:15 PM
Dosto.N...aaj ek arse ke baad ek ghazal likhi hai...ummid hai hamesha ki tarha aapka saath milega....
*Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N *Ahaal-e-duniya ka *Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N Asraa-e-aalam = Whole world Ahaal-e-duniya = People of the world Gam-gusaar = Sympathizer Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N Har lehaaza *tajribaah hue hai.N *zaat-e-ushshaaq se Mere mehboob sa logo.N me.N *khiraam-e-naaz kaha.N Tajribaah = Experience Zaat-e-ushshaaq = Personality of lovers Khiraam-e-naaz = Coquettish Way Of Walking Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N Niyaaz = Desir Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja'' kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N Harzah = Nonsense Pabandi-e-parvaaz = Restrictions On Flight Grazie Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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23rd March 2008, 04:56 PM
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wah wah wah pooja her sher be misaal hai bohat arse baad parrhne ka moqa mila tumhe .... itna acha aur itna dilkash andaz hai ke tareef ke liye mujhe alfaz nahi mil rahe aur alfaz ka chunao bohat khoobi se kiya hai dili daad qubool karo yunhi likhti raho dear sweeeti humesha khush raho ameen apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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23rd March 2008, 11:29 PM
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hi Pooja bahut accha likkha hai...padhkar bahut accha laga umeed hai aise hi padhne ka mauqa dubara dogi Ye ashq hee gustaakh rahe lamha-e-judaai ke dauraan Didaar-e-yaar ke siva ankho.N ko kisi ki *niyaaz kaha.N yeh sher dil ke kareeb raha likhtee raho aise hi taek caer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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24th March 2008, 07:40 PM
Pooja jee :
Namaste!! taveel arse ke baad bazm meiN aapkii taazaah Ghazal paRhne ko milii.. be-had KhuShii hu'ii.. aur aisaa beHteriN aNdaaz aapka pehle maiNe kabhee deKhaa nah Thaa.. urdu lafzoN kaa bhee ba-Khuubee iStemaal kiYaa hai aapne apnii Ghazal meiN.. aap ki sabhee GhazaloN meiN sey mujHe yeh Ghazal sab sey beHteriN lagii.. aur beHteriN to honi hi thee.. aapne itani meHnat jo kee hay.. Khudaa sey eezaab yahi hay kii wo aapko har kadam par kaamyaabee dete raheN.. ees nafeez Ghazal par merii dilii daad-o-mubaaraQbaad ko qabUl keejiyeNgaa.. YuuNhi liKhate raheN aur bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte rahiYe..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka dost ~ Dhaval |
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24th March 2008, 07:55 PM
namaste chirkut ma,m..........
 koi urdu ki mahaan dictionary haath lag gayi hain kya???haan meri 2 din pehle hi chori ho gayi hain heeeeeee......chal chal meri aur se itni acchi kavvish par tarif kubool karle....tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi ki maine teri ulti sidhi kavvish ki tarif kar di............ gussa aaya na thanda paani peele..........main to mazaak kar rahin thi...........bahut hi acccha likha hain tumne...dil se daad kubool karna meri chirkut.........meanings dene ka shukriya madamji.............. Dar pe pehare lagaa diye *harzah zamaane ne ''Pooja'' kon samjhaye khwaabo.N pe *paabandi-e-parvaaz kaha.N tumhari di... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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25th March 2008, 06:43 PM
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26th March 2008, 12:27 AM
Mani dii,
Aapko yahaa paa'kar behad khushi hui...aapki daad sar'aankhoN pe mohatarmaa.... bahot bahot shukriya saraahane ke liye.. saath deti rahiyega.... Grazie Ur sweeti ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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28th March 2008, 11:03 AM
hmmmmmmm..........yeh gazal pooja ki hi likhi hue hai kaya....sach kahuN matko mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha, ki aaltu faaltu ki gappe ladane wali pooja etni badiya shayri bhi karti hai....
just kidding  sach mein ek nayaab gazal padne ka mokka diya hai tumne humey....har sher kabiley tareef tha....aur meanings dekar bahut accha kiya warna samaj hi nahi aata ki kaya likha hai vaise yeh dedicate kis ko hi hai matko rani yoon hi badiya kalaam likhti raho kush raho tumhari punjabi kudi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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15th April 2008, 12:57 PM
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17th April 2008, 08:27 AM
Hi Pooja
apki ghazal padhi. bahot khoob hai. ghazal padhte huye chand ek baat zehn men aayiN so puch raha hu.n plz jawab dijiega. apki ghazal ki urdu qadre baland paaye kii he jis men apne farsi ki tarakeeb musta'mil kii hen aor apki is gahzal men ek kohna mashq shayara nazar aati he jiska kalam ustadanah he. share karne ke lie shukrya. ASRAA-E-AALAM = whole world yeh murakkab lafz men ne na hi kabhi suna aor na hi kabhi padha. ap kia bata sakti hen k is lafz ke kia yehi mani he jo apne likha he. mera khayal he k apne lafz ka durust istemal nahin kiya he. aapne apne dusre sher men "chain-o-sukoon" qalamband kiya he jis men chain Hindi kaa lafz he aur sukoon farsi ka. iski ijazat nahin he shairi men ku k "vao ataf" men donon alfaz ya to Farsi zaban ke hone chahiye ya phir arabi ke hone lazmi hen. apke teesre sher men lafz aya he "lehaaza". is lafz ke mani mujhe nahin pata plz bata dijie. thank you. kia matlab he is shabd ka? aapne apne chauthe sher men "lamha-e-judai ke dauran" likha hai. chun k apne "lamha" ko segha e wahid meN use kiya he is lie "dauran" ka lafz be-mani ho gaya hai. agar, "lamhaat-e-judai ke dauran" likhtin to saheeh hotaa. nazr-e-sani lar lijie apne apne maqte men "harzah zamane" musta'mil kiya he air uske matlab "nonsense" bataya he. agar ye meaning liye jayen to sher ka matlab hii bhang ho jata he. r u sure k ye "harzah" hii word he jo ap use karna chahti thin? ye koi aor lafz to nahin? is post men maiN ne urdu zara mushkil si likhi he ye soch kar k masha Allah apki urdu to bahot achhi he aor apko samajhne men koi mushkil nahin hogi. PLEASE MERE SAWALAAT KAA KHAATIR kHOWAAH JAWAAB BIL-ZAROOR DIJIEGA. shukrya. faqat MuKhlis Quote:
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23rd April 2008, 07:04 PM
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Jee, sacch, bahot lambe antraal ke baad kuch likha...ghazal likhne baitthi to laga jaise likhna bhool gai hu...lekin yahaa ghazal ke saath haziree dene ke baad achhaa lagaa...or jab aap sabhi ka saath milta hai to khushi me izaafa ho jaata hai..aapki honsla'hafzaai ke liye tah'e'dil se shukriya.. saath dete rahiyega.. Ijaazat!! grazie pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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24th April 2008, 05:02 PM
Hi Pooja,
kesi ho? aap ne mere sawaloN ka jawab abhi tak nahiN diya he. i'm still waiting.  plz reply. thank you tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz |
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24th April 2008, 05:08 PM
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kyaa karuN yaar, dictionary hii churaa lii....lekin vo aapki nahiN...balki meri thhi jo aapne churaai thhi...maangne pe mili nahN to churaanee hee paree....uff..... Aapkaa bahoot bahoot shukriiyaah iss koshish ko pasand karne ke liye...or honsla'hafzaaii ke liye...or mujhe aapki kisee bhii baat par kabhee bhee gussa nahiN aataa...jaanti huN jock maarne ki aadat hai aapki Saath detiN rahiyegaah... ijaazat!! Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th April 2008, 05:27 AM
hello miss pooja
agar aapne ghalthi ki hai,aur koi aapse savaal kar raha hai to aap uska javab kyon nahin de rahi hai? Mr. Mukhlis ne aapse kuch reply maangi hai. Kya apki ghazal ka explanation aap nahin de sakthi? many people are waiting for your reply. very funny. Why dont you dare to answer such people? SANAASH |
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27th April 2008, 09:36 AM
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Silence speaks louder than words! .......................................... "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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27th April 2008, 12:31 PM
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Mohataram, main Mukhils jee se kahe chuki huN kii, jab unke javaab kaa no. aayegaa, main unheN javaab dedungi..dusri baat himmat ki apne kee..to aap khud hi andaazaa lagaa lijiye..jisne itne nukhs ke saath ek ghazal is anjuman meN rakhi ho..usmeN kitnee himmat hogi...nanana ye himmat nahiN gustaakhi huii..hmm... waise mere paas Mukhlis jee ke har savaal kaa javaab hai janaab, agar aapse intezaar nahiN hotaa to Mukhlis jee ke savaaloN ka main aaj hii javaab dedungi.. Ijaazat!! grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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27th April 2008, 05:14 PM
uffo!
Sanaash sahib aur Pooja Ji, aap log kyuN ladne lage bhai? muddayi sust aor gawah chust shayad isi ko kahte heN. yes! Pooja Ji ne mujhe PM kar ke yeh baat kahi thi. mujhe koi jaldi nahiN, meri Train to nahiN chhuTi ja rahi hai!!! Pooja Ji, take ur time 'coz i'm in no hurry! thank you. regards MuKhlis tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz |
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Iss pooree duniyaa meN muhabbat saa badaa raaz nahiN hai..lekin jab ye raaz faash hotaa hai to apne bhi begaane ban jaate haiN..ye baat aap bhi jaante haiN or main bhi..{maine dekhaa hai apno ko paraayoN saa sulooQ karte hue}.. isii liye dusrii line meN likhaa ke duniyaa ke logoN kaa ek dost jaisaa andaaz kahaaN?...Sahii kahaa naa Mukhlis jee? Quote:
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Is lafz ko maine apni ghazal meN jaghNaa dee..kyuki mujhe yahii achhaa lagaa..agar aap iss lafz ke saath sher ka matlab main bataau to kuch yuN hoga: Main apni zindagii meN bahot chaahne waaloN se roo'b'roo hui huN, lekin jise maine chaaha uske mukaable meN sab haar gayeN haiN..main jise chaahti huN uskaa har andaaz baakiyoN se jooda hai..har andaaz ko baNyaa karne ke liye maine '' khiraam-e-naaz '' ka example diya hai.. Quote:
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Harzah = nonsense = na'samajh Ye zamaanaa sacch meN naa'samajh hai..be'shaQ do pyaar karne waaloN ko tan se joodaa kar diyaa jaaye, lekin Mann, dil, dimmaag to ek dusre ke paas hii rahataa hai naa..zamaanaa chaahne waaloN ko joodaa karte waqt ye kyuN bhool jaataa hai ke pyaar mitaane se nahi mit'taa..pyaar tan se nahiN Mann se hotaa hai..bhale hi milne ki ijaazat naa ho, lein apne pyaar ke baare meN soch to sakte hi haiN naa..jab tak do pyaar karne waale khud apni marzi se alag nahi ho jaate tab tak duniyaa unhe alag nahiN kar saktii..chaahe jitnii bhii koshisheN kar leN log, lekin jab tak dil hai, tab tak apne pyaar kaa khayaal zahan meN haiN.. NA'SAMAJH ZAMAANE KO KOUN SAMJHAAYE KE PAHARE DARR PE LAGAAYE JAATE HAIN..DIL'O'DIMMAG PE NAHIn..SOCH TO AISII HOTI HAI JO HAR PAHARE KO PAAR KARKE KAHIn BHII PAHONCH JAATI HAI.. Ji haaN maine iss lafz ka ek dam durust istemaal kiya hai.. Quote:
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27th April 2008, 08:07 PM
Yu.N bikhre bistar pe sadiyo.N ke ho thhake haare jaise
warna Ishq ki raah pe chain-o-sukoon sa alfaaz kaha.N bhut hii khub.....kaisii ho meri gudia? kahan gaye wo haseen din jab ye bazam mehkti thii lakhon phoolo.n se abaad thaa ye chaman....teri gazal bhut achi laggi...khush raho......raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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}Wah wah..itne time se mujhe padh rahi hain..or aaj kaha ke yakeen nahi hua...great haa... .....waise likhi to maine hi hai..lekin likh sakoo, uske kabil aapne banaaya hai.....aapke saath chalte chalte bahot kuch sikha hai......Shukriya shukriya mohtarmaa jii ...saraahaane ke liye, aane ke liye..wah wah kya line hai ....Dedicate kise ho sakti hai.....aapko pata hai ke kise kiya hoga Saath deti rahiyegaa... Grazie Aapki Matko gudiya rani ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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Matko....teri es gazal par aaj phir reply karne ko dil kar rha hai, kyuki wo beeta waqt yaad aa rha hai...kitna haseen tha wo daur...tu aa jaye to shayad wo daur phir se lout aaye. bahuttttt saare pyar ke saath dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th May 2015, 10:16 PM
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kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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14th May 2015, 10:38 PM
Dear Pooja
Main aaj bhi yahee kahuunga urdu lafzon ka behterin istemaal..khushii huii ees Ghaza ko paDh kar...sister ki baaton se sehmat huun fir se liKhnaa shuru kar do.... aik baar fir se dil se daad Grazie tumhara dost Dhaval |
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15th May 2015, 12:32 PM
Asraa-e-aalam me.N muhabbat sa azeem raaz kaha.N
Ahaal-e-duniya ka Gam-gusaar sa andaaz kaha.N waaaaaaaaaaaaah... Pooja jee waaaaaaaaaaaaah... Tamaam ki tamaam ghazal kisi mussawwir ki mussawwiri ki tasveer sii lagi... daad qaabol kejiye! likhte rahiye.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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15th May 2015, 04:14 PM
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main agar or kuch din yaha naa au to aap shayad meri purani saari posts ko highlight kar doge hahahahasach me bada maza aata hai apki pyari pyari bate padhke..jab ap mujhe yaad karte ho tb to waaaahhhhh :* kissshhhii apke liye or di..thanku so muchhhh wapas ise front page pe lane ke liye... aati rahungi ab to... apki matko pooja grazie ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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15th May 2015, 04:15 PM
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pooja grazie ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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15th May 2015, 04:17 PM
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 ..... wese sach batau.. mujhe khud ko yakiin nahi ho raha ke ye main likhi hai hihihihi...shoooooo  jaa jaa faafda dhokla khaa.. grazie sirf mera hai gujju  GRAZIE pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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15th May 2015, 04:18 PM
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grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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18th May 2015, 12:29 AM
Pooja ji, Namaskar ...!
Bohot achha laga aapka kalaam. Pehli dafeh paDh raha huuN aapko. Andaaz-e-bayaaN bhi lajawaab hai. Nacheez ki taraf se daad qubool farmaayeiN.. Aate raheiN..Likhte raheiN. Khair andesh **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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18th May 2015, 08:49 AM
Hi pooja...
kya kamaal likhti hain aap waaaah! Shukraguzar hoon di ki meharbani se ham ise padh paye.....aage bhi hamare sath apne thoughts share kijiye..intzaar rahega.... Aati rahiye.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th June 2015, 08:37 PM
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Mujhe to khud ko yad nhi ke maine kon kon si ghazal nazam likhi hai.. Ye to sunita di hain jo bas mujhe pdhti rahti hain or purani post highlight kaerti rahti hain hehehehe.... Thanku so much for coming reading and liking... Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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16th June 2015, 08:41 PM
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Mujhe bhi bahot achha laga purani koshish ko wapas pdh kar or aap sab se fir se taarif sunn kar ... So your compliment is accepted Thanku so much Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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16th June 2015, 08:51 PM
Pooja ji ....hum moderator forum meiN charcha ker rahe the ki , purane shayroN ki ghaziN doond ker dobara post ki jaye under the head Yadon ke Zharokhon se........
Taaki ane wale naye shayron ko pata chale ki unke buzurg (sorry seniors) ke jamane mein kaise shayri hoti thi aur ye lo aapki 7 years old purani ghazal padne ka mauka mila..aur bhari bharkam urdu aur farsee ke lazon ke mayne pad ke ehsaas hua ki hum logon ko bahut kuch seekhna hai apbe buzurgon se .......... Rahi aap ki ghazal ki baat tau ye apne aap meiN mukammal thi aur sabse acha mujhe makta laga . Bahut khushi hui aapko per ke aur umeed karte haiN ki aap apna keemti waqt humein deti rahaeingi aur apni kavishon se sdc pe raunak badati rahengi. ShubhkamnaoN sahit , Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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16th June 2015, 09:07 PM
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Yun to khud ko buzurg kehlawana kisiko pasand nhi par aaj apne kuch is tarha se mujhe buzurgo ki list me daal diya k bas khushi horahi hai vo bhi bahot zyada... Aapki taarif k shabd padh k lag raha hai maano main bahot achha likhti hu ...jabki mujhe itna zyada likhna aata nhi... Bas kabhi kabhi man me aajata to likh leti thi... Ab aadat chhoot si gai hai... Par chu.n kiii aapne itni izzat bakshi hai to mera bhi farz banta hai ki main pahle ki tarha writing resume karu .... Koshish karungi jald hi kuch naaya laane ki ... Taaki aap ko salo purani ghazal na search karni pde ... Saraahne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya... Or meri purani ghazal ko highlight karne ke layak samajhne ke liye or bhi zyada shukriya... Milte rahenge... Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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17th June 2015, 12:32 PM
wah bahut khoob......................................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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