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tera mera rishta - 2nd August 2014, 11:41 AM

tera mera rishta hai jo shabaab ki tarha
hamesha mahekta rahai gulaab ki tarha

muhabbat ka paimana bharlo chahe kitna bhi
muhabbat chalakti nahin sharaab ki tarha

bhatakta hai shamma ki justujoo men parwana
samajhta hai is kaam ko sawaab ki tarha

hamesha muhabbat men ilteja hi jamti hai
kabhi hukm mat kijiye nawaab ki tarha

liya hoga tujhko banane men bohut waqt
banaya tujhe rab ne mahtaab ki tarha

usi cheez ki aap humse kijiye maang
hamare liye jo nahin hai khwaab ki tarha

kaha jata hai bewafa usi ko parwaaz
bana de tera jeena jo azaab ki tarha


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2nd August 2014, 02:12 PM

Waah Waah Janab Har afaz Dil Ko Chu Gaya...
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4th August 2014, 11:46 AM

Aap ka teh dil se shukriya ada karta hun.
main apne mejaaz ke mutabiq likhta hun.
Aur koshish karta hun ke nayi nayi beher men likhun.
   
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4th August 2014, 06:58 PM

waah mujibb g kya baat hai....har aashaar dil ko choo gaye.....



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5th August 2014, 11:24 AM

Shukriya Aruji

Aap ke kalam bhi bade asardar hote hain
main aap ki shayeri ki purzor sarahana karta hun.
   
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5th August 2014, 11:30 AM

PLZ PLZ PLZ... muje ye shaaair pura kardo.. is ka 2nd verse ata hy koi muje 1st bta de plz...



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4th September 2014, 01:08 PM

Bohut bohut shukriya Nazneen ji....badi nawazish hai aap ki.

Aap bhi kisi good poetess se kam nahin....khaas kar aap ke apne kalam men lofzon ka intekhaab bohut sahi hota hai..aur rawani bhi.

Hum likhen aap padhen..aap likhen hum padhen.....bas yun hi eh silsila chalta rahe..

It is always nice of you.
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