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Dedicated to Earthquake in Gujarat - 31st January 2003, 06:12 PM

Koi kya sunayega maut ka silsilaa
Khudaa ke is kadam se sabhi ka dil hila
Lashon ke dher makaano ke bich the
Wahan se taiyar maut ka saamaan milaa
Hindu Musalmaan aur Isai sab ki lashe padi thi
Dekha to , khuda, sab ka ek hi kaatil milaa
Maa-e duaye dengi, bacche pujenge tuje
Bhulja vahem, sabko tujme ek shaytan milaa
Koi baap, koi betaa aur koi maa puchegi tuje
Dharti ko maar ke kya tuje pura aasmaan mila?
Jis pathhar ko puja tha vo maut ka saamaan banaa
Khush nasib hei tu e khuda,tuje pathhar ke badle insaan milaa
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31st January 2003, 08:48 PM

bahot hi khub likha hai naim bhai!!!!

bachha bola dekh kar masjib aalishan,
Allah tere ek k liye itna bada makaan...


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Post 31st January 2003, 10:49 PM

Asad ji,

Namaskar.

Jo kuch bhi aapne likha hai, usse mehsoos karne ke liye ek saccha dil chahiye. Sach mein...aapne duniya ko abhi bhi samajhne ka mauka diya hai. Upar wala kare aapki iss baat ko dharti ka har insaan samajh sake, tabhi shayad kursi per baithe Safedposh neta neeche utar sakenge. Ghinoni rajneeti iss desh ko maut ke kareeb laa rahi hai.
Dekhte hain safedposh jaanwar kab apni kursi se neeche giren aur iss desh ka naya janm ho.

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hi - 25th February 2003, 07:37 PM

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bhut acha likha hain aapne

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