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Ab koi zimmedaari NIBHANI nahi hai...!
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Ab koi zimmedaari NIBHANI nahi hai...! - 30th March 2006, 01:30 AM

Adaab sabhi ko...

Tum samjhoge ki maiN akela hi jee raha huN ... tumse bichad ke sach hai aaNsouN pee raha huN.. par main akela huN kahaN .. teri yaden hai sath mere jauN jahaN... par haN aaj maiN juda ho jana chahta huN,... yadoN ke andheroN se nikal jana chahta huN... kyuN ki rO rO ke jhakhm apne maiN see raha huN... ye na samajhna maiN akele hi jee raha hun.. chahe kitne hi aansuN maiN pee raha huN.. haN main akele nahi Jee raha huN....





Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

Bohat hua, ab na giruNga raahoN pe
Zindgi ab jaamoN se takrani nahi hai

Har aalam maiN fanah hue armaaN
Aur koi lash ab mujhe jalani nahi hai

Andhero se lada ujaale se haar gaya
Chubhti ye ruswayi ab uthani nahi hai

Adhura sach zindgi ka, saccha_pyaar
Maan liya wo meri deewaani nahi hai

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai

Sath abka nahi,kabka chooth gaya yaar...
Socha tha dil ko ye baat, batani nahi hai

Khud ki tasalli ke liye kehta phirta huN
Ki Sath tumhare zindgi bitaani nahi hai..

Aur Ab koi zimmedaari nibhani nahi hai



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30th March 2006, 02:06 AM

Dear KuNal,

How are you? hope you are fine... well, tumne bahut achha likha hain. I like it, yeh kalam hamensha se kuch alag sa laga. meri daad kubul karna. and I am extremly sorry for such a decison I made. apna achhe se khyaal rakhna aur khush rehna.


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wah - 30th March 2006, 07:23 AM

wah kunal bahut achha hai har bara kee tarah kamal is baar pana hee dard liye ho is ghazal man sab sher achhe hain aur aghaz hee kamal ka hai

Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

bahut khoob soorat ek sher bas aisa hai jo main smajh nahee paya rply doge to explain karana

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai

dard sachha hai pyar sachha hai kunal sachha hai tabhee is ghzal ak kamal sachha hai
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30th March 2006, 07:58 AM

hey kunal bhai...
as always...mast...its wonderful
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry
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30th March 2006, 08:43 AM

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aapki taarif karne layak nahi hai abhi hum bus aapko padha hai kuch baaten aur seekhi hai ehsaas achhe lage
ghare hai dil ko chu lene wale

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30th March 2006, 09:23 AM

kunal,
in life sorrows n happiness are part n parcel but cum wat may we have to move on. sumtimes regrets n pains kills us n pulls us back but jitna kismat mein likha hai jeena, woh jiye bina mukti bhi kahan milti hai. so try to find happiness in small small things.as usual u hv expressed ur thoughts in a efficient way n each n every word is expressed in such a way ki dil ko cheer deta hai tumhara likha hua har alfaas. its awesome. well agar mein koi yahan aake gustakhi ki ho to teh dil se mauffi chahti hoon. just cudnt stop myself replying u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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Re: Ab koi zimmedaari NIBHANI nahi hai...! - 30th March 2006, 09:27 AM

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Adaab sabhi ko...

Tum samjhoge ki maiN akela hi jee raha huN ... tumse bichad ke sach hai aaNsouN pee raha huN.. par main akela huN kahaN .. teri yaden hai sath mere jauN jahaN... par haN aaj maiN juda ho jana chahta huN,... yadoN ke andheroN se nikal jana chahta huN... kyuN ki rO rO ke jhakhm apne maiN see raha huN... ye na samajhna maiN akele hi jee raha hun.. chahe kitne hi aansuN maiN pee raha huN.. haN main akele nahi Jee raha huN....





Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

Bohat hua, ab na giruNga raahoN pe
Zindgi ab jaamoN se takrani nahi hai

Har aalam maiN fanah hue armaaN
Aur koi lash ab mujhe jalani nahi hai

Andhero se lada ujaale se haar gaya
Chubhti ye ruswayi ab uthani nahi hai

Adhura sach zindgi ka, saccha_pyaar
Maan liya wo meri deewaani nahi hai

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai

Sath abka nahi,kabka chooth gaya yaar...
Socha tha dil ko ye baat, batani nahi hai

Khud ki tasalli ke liye kehta phirta huN
Ki Sath tumhare zindgi bitaani nahi hai..

Aur Ab koi zimmedaari nibhani nahi hai



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30th March 2006, 11:27 AM

Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

Bohat hua, ab na giruNga raahoN pe
Zindgi ab jaamoN se takrani nahi hai

Bahut khoob... Life is to move on...

Kunaal,

Asshaar tumhaare humesha acche hote hain... is baar for a change... approach bhi accha laga... be positive in life and keep moving ahead.... Take good care...


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Bade bhai ko chote ka aadaab,

mere bhai ek baar fir se apne dil ke ehshashon ko khangaal kar ek kalaam likh gaye.aapke apne ehshashon se bahut mel khata hai ye kalaam.bas kuch ehshas hain jo aapke apne nahi.par haan dil me kahin kasmakas to hai.jo aaj ubhar aayi hai.bas wo hasmukh chehre ke piche chupe us dard ki jhalak dikhi.ek baar fir ehsash hua ki saccha_pyar kitna gehra hota hai.bas yahi guzarish hai ki ye gehrai yunhi kayam rahe.aur saccha_pyar yunhi humesha hansta khilkhilata aur apne me sare zamane ko samete rahe.

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Re: Ab koi zimmedaari NIBHANI nahi hai...! - 31st March 2006, 09:19 AM

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Adaab sabhi ko...

Tum samjhoge ki maiN akela hi jee raha huN ... tumse bichad ke sach hai aaNsouN pee raha huN.. par main akela huN kahaN .. teri yaden hai sath mere jauN jahaN... par haN aaj maiN juda ho jana chahta huN,... yadoN ke andheroN se nikal jana chahta huN... kyuN ki rO rO ke jhakhm apne maiN see raha huN... ye na samajhna maiN akele hi jee raha hun.. chahe kitne hi aansuN maiN pee raha huN.. haN main akele nahi Jee raha huN....





Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

Bohat hua, ab na giruNga raahoN pe
Zindgi ab jaamoN se takrani nahi hai

Har aalam maiN fanah hue armaaN
Aur koi lash ab mujhe jalani nahi hai

Andhero se lada ujaale se haar gaya
Chubhti ye ruswayi ab uthani nahi hai

Adhura sach zindgi ka, saccha_pyaar
Maan liya wo meri deewaani nahi hai

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai

Sath abka nahi,kabka chooth gaya yaar...
Socha tha dil ko ye baat, batani nahi hai

Khud ki tasalli ke liye kehta phirta huN
Ki Sath tumhare zindgi bitaani nahi hai..

Aur Ab koi zimmedaari nibhani nahi hai



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31st March 2006, 11:35 AM

hmmmmmmm...........

kunnu bhaiya.....

what i felt is apki poetry ka standard is above all !

really outsatanding......

apko pata hai na main sirf observe karti rehti hooN is site par......jaisa maine pehli baar padha tha aur jo aaj padh rahi hooN....its entirely different......and i believe ki aap aane wale waqt me hume bahut kuch sikhaaoge......

hmmm......bahut dinoN k baad reply kar rahi hooN apko......
ab to aap khush ho na!
khair.....aati rahungi......

nahi bhi aayi to meri dua aap tak pahunchti rahegi......

good bye,
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31st March 2006, 08:17 PM

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai


Hello my sweet brother

Kaise ho kunal .....Arrey my sweet brother yeh kya koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai.......don't say like this...nahin to main gussa ho jaongi.......Zimmedaari se duur nahin jana chahiye......accept the responsibilities and one day world will be urs......and I know u can reach to the skies....bas kabhi Aashaon ka sath mat chodna......waqt bura hay ager kal hoga kushion ka jahaan.....keep smiling

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1st April 2006, 04:35 PM

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Dear KuNal,

How are you? hope you are fine... well, tumne bahut achha likha hain. I like it, yeh kalam hamensha se kuch alag sa laga. meri daad kubul karna. and I am extremly sorry for such a decison I made. apna achhe se khyaal rakhna aur khush rehna.


Yours,
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Priye Parul....

Aage ka samachaar ye hai ki mujhe tumhe yahaN dekh ke atyant prasannta ka aabhaas hua hai... aur kshama maaNgne ki koi avasyakta nahi hai ...mitroN ke madhya is shabd naam ka koi arth hi nahi balika ... bas yuN hi mere sath bani raho ...

Tumhaara param mitra

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wah kunal bahut achha hai har bara kee tarah kamal is baar pana hee dard liye ho is ghazal man sab sher achhe hain aur aghaz hee kamal ka hai

Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

bahut khoob soorat ek sher bas aisa hai jo main smajh nahee paya rply doge to explain karana

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai

dard sachha hai pyar sachha hai kunal sachha hai tabhee is ghzal ak kamal sachha hai
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apna khayal rakhiye aur sath dete rahiye yuN hi ..

Aapka apna

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hey kunal bhai...
as always...mast...its wonderful
take care
Mere chotu ...

Shukriya tumhara bhi aane ke liye .. aur mujh khaksaar ko padhne ke liye...

aise hi sath dete rehna ...

tumhara apna

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ghare hai dil ko chu lene wale

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in life sorrows n happiness are part n parcel but cum wat may we have to move on. sumtimes regrets n pains kills us n pulls us back but jitna kismat mein likha hai jeena, woh jiye bina mukti bhi kahan milti hai. so try to find happiness in small small things.as usual u hv expressed ur thoughts in a efficient way n each n every word is expressed in such a way ki dil ko cheer deta hai tumhara likha hua har alfaas. its awesome. well agar mein koi yahan aake gustakhi ki ho to teh dil se mauffi chahti hoon. just cudnt stop myself replying u. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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Shkriya aane ke liye ...

Mere ashiyane maine aaj tak kisi ka anaadar nahi kiya .. tumhara bhi swagat karta hun... but jo khyal tumne mujhe diye .. manta huN mujhe unki jaroorat ho.. par tumhe mujhse jyada hai ... khair tum aayi shukriya .. aur ek baat .. be baat ke muafi ki ilteza kaayar log karte hai .. veer bano .. ye chota word leke apne muhn ko chota mat karo .. khuda tumhari khair kare ... dua humesha hai .. rishtoN ka kya hai .. badalna inki fitrat hai .. aur .....

apna khayaal rakho

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mere bhai ek baar fir se apne dil ke ehshashon ko khangaal kar ek kalaam likh gaye.aapke apne ehshashon se bahut mel khata hai ye kalaam.bas kuch ehshas hain jo aapke apne nahi.par haan dil me kahin kasmakas to hai.jo aaj ubhar aayi hai.bas wo hasmukh chehre ke piche chupe us dard ki jhalak dikhi.ek baar fir ehsash hua ki saccha_pyar kitna gehra hota hai.bas yahi guzarish hai ki ye gehrai yunhi kayam rahe.aur saccha_pyar yunhi humesha hansta khilkhilata aur apne me sare zamane ko samete rahe.

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kunnu bhaiya.....

what i felt is apki poetry ka standard is above all !

really outsatanding......

apko pata hai na main sirf observe karti rehti hooN is site par......jaisa maine pehli baar padha tha aur jo aaj padh rahi hooN....its entirely different......and i believe ki aap aane wale waqt me hume bahut kuch sikhaaoge......

hmmm......bahut dinoN k baad reply kar rahi hooN apko......
ab to aap khush ho na!
khair.....aati rahungi......

nahi bhi aayi to meri dua aap tak pahunchti rahegi......

good bye,
KasaK........
Hmm

Kasak beta ....

Tumm aa hi gayi ye hi kaafi hai mere liye ... aur maiN wakai koi hasti nahi rakhta jo kisi ko kuch sikhauN ... par tumne mere changes mehsoos kiye unhe saraha .. dil manmoon hai ye maan paakar ... apna khayal rakhna

aur aati rehna

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Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai


Hello my sweet brother

Kaise ho kunal .....Arrey my sweet brother yeh kya koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai.......don't say like this...nahin to main gussa ho jaongi.......Zimmedaari se duur nahin jana chahiye......accept the responsibilities and one day world will be urs......and I know u can reach to the skies....bas kabhi Aashaon ka sath mat chodna......waqt bura hay ager kal hoga kushion ka jahaan.....keep smiling

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Par sach maiN dua upar wale se ye karta huN .. ki mujhme ye feelings aa hi jayeN .. par na jane wo waqt kab aayega ab ... par aap gussa na hoOiyega .. bhai ko behan ki naarajgi bardast na hogi ... aap aayi mujhe accha laga humesha ki tarah ..

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Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

Bohat hua, ab na giruNga raahoN pe
Zindgi ab jaamoN se takrani nahi hai

Bahut khoob... Life is to move on...

Kunaal,

Asshaar tumhaare humesha acche hote hain... is baar for a change... approach bhi accha laga... be positive in life and keep moving ahead.... Take good care...
Sorry Pullu bhai...

aapke remark pe dhayan hi nahi gaya .. abhi dekha .. shukriya aapke aane ke liye .. aur muafi mere deri ke reply ke liye ...

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Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

Bohat hua, ab na giruNga raahoN pe
Zindgi ab jaamoN se takrani nahi hai

Har aalam maiN fanah hue armaaN
Aur koi lash ab mujhe jalani nahi hai

Andhero se lada ujaale se haar gaya
Chubhti ye ruswayi ab uthani nahi hai

Adhura sach zindgi ka, saccha_pyaar
Maan liya wo meri deewaani nahi hai

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai

Sath abka nahi,kabka chooth gaya yaar...
Socha tha dil ko ye baat, batani nahi hai

Khud ki tasalli ke liye kehta phirta huN
Ki Sath tumhare zindgi bitaani nahi hai..

Aur Ab koi zimmedaari nibhani nahi hai

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kunaal .............jii
kya taareef karoo aapki.bas itna hi
ki........bahoot khoob likha hai apne.
take care.
bye bye


tum badle sambodhan badle
lekin man ki bat wahi hai
jane kyu mausam ke peeche
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Re: Ab koi zimmedaari NIBHANI nahi hai...! - 5th April 2006, 06:46 PM

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Adaab sabhi ko...

Tum samjhoge ki maiN akela hi jee raha huN ... tumse bichad ke sach hai aaNsouN pee raha huN.. par main akela huN kahaN .. teri yaden hai sath mere jauN jahaN... par haN aaj maiN juda ho jana chahta huN,... yadoN ke andheroN se nikal jana chahta huN... kyuN ki rO rO ke jhakhm apne maiN see raha huN... ye na samajhna maiN akele hi jee raha hun.. chahe kitne hi aansuN maiN pee raha huN.. haN main akele nahi Jee raha huN....





Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

Bohat hua, ab na giruNga raahoN pe
Zindgi ab jaamoN se takrani nahi hai

Har aalam maiN fanah hue armaaN
Aur koi lash ab mujhe jalani nahi hai

Andhero se lada ujaale se haar gaya
Chubhti ye ruswayi ab uthani nahi hai

Adhura sach zindgi ka, saccha_pyaar
Maan liya wo meri deewaani nahi hai

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai

Sath abka nahi,kabka chooth gaya yaar...
Socha tha dil ko ye baat, batani nahi hai

Khud ki tasalli ke liye kehta phirta huN
Ki Sath tumhare zindgi bitaani nahi hai..

Aur Ab koi zimmedaari nibhani nahi hai



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oye chalo kisi ki jimmedari mat nibhana par meri dosti jaroor nibhana .
hamesha ki tarah acha likha hai dear.
aur mujhe saari baate bhi bata dena ok
bye tc
sakhi with love


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kunaal .............jii
kya taareef karoo aapki.bas itna hi
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take care.
bye bye
Hi ji

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Re: Re: Ab koi zimmedaari NIBHANI nahi hai...! - 6th April 2006, 07:34 PM

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oye chalo kisi ki jimmedari mat nibhana par meri dosti jaroor nibhana .
hamesha ki tarah acha likha hai dear.
aur mujhe saari baate bhi bata dena ok
bye tc
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hello kunal

aje bhoate dino bade yeh aye hoo lakine tume hara likha pade ke bhaote hi aacha laga dil ko jaise chu gaya. kuache aise sachi hia jo bhaote kame logo ko samje maie ati hia lakine tume nae bhaote hi aache se baya ki hia apni bate very nice keep it looking forward to see more.

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Re: Ab koi zimmedaari NIBHANI nahi hai...! - 13th April 2006, 09:01 PM

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Adaab sabhi ko...

Tum samjhoge ki maiN akela hi jee raha huN ... tumse bichad ke sach hai aaNsouN pee raha huN.. par main akela huN kahaN .. teri yaden hai sath mere jauN jahaN... par haN aaj maiN juda ho jana chahta huN,... yadoN ke andheroN se nikal jana chahta huN... kyuN ki rO rO ke jhakhm apne maiN see raha huN... ye na samajhna maiN akele hi jee raha hun.. chahe kitne hi aansuN maiN pee raha huN.. haN main akele nahi Jee raha huN....





Sath tumhaare zindgi bitani nahi hai..
Ab koi zimmedaari nibhaani nahi hai

Bohat hua, ab na giruNga raahoN pe
Zindgi ab jaamoN se takrani nahi hai

Har aalam maiN fanah hue armaaN
Aur koi lash ab mujhe jalani nahi hai

Andhero se lada ujaale se haar gaya
Chubhti ye ruswayi ab uthani nahi hai

Adhura sach zindgi ka, saccha_pyaar
Maan liya wo meri deewaani nahi hai

Chalo juda ho jayeN, par tum thi kab
YaadoN ka bhi bacha, ab pani nahi hai

Sath abka nahi,kabka chooth gaya yaar...
Socha tha dil ko ye baat, batani nahi hai

Khud ki tasalli ke liye kehta phirta huN
Ki Sath tumhare zindgi bitaani nahi hai..

Aur Ab koi zimmedaari nibhani nahi hai



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humein aasra tha adhure kuch vaadon ka "wafa"
fanna kar do yaadein abb koi bachani nahin hai

dil ko chho gaya aapka kalam...daad kabool kijiyega
apna khayal rakhiyega


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Re: Hello - 26th April 2006, 08:57 PM

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hello kunal

aje bhoate dino bade yeh aye hoo lakine tume hara likha pade ke bhaote hi aacha laga dil ko jaise chu gaya. kuache aise sachi hia jo bhaote kame logo ko samje maie ati hia lakine tume nae bhaote hi aache se baya ki hia apni bate very nice keep it looking forward to see more.

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Re: Re: Ab koi zimmedaari NIBHANI nahi hai...! - 26th April 2006, 09:00 PM

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humein aasra tha adhure kuch vaadon ka "wafa"
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dil ko chho gaya aapka kalam...daad kabool kijiyega
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Wafa ji ...

shukriya .....................

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