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Neetu Bala
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13th January 2013, 04:28 PM
jab likhti hoon ghazal main
lafz lagti hoon ghazal main
zulf lehrane ko jab tab
ghata kehti hoon ghazal main
aaeene ke nazdik aate hee
sharm bharti hoon ghazal main
phool tod kar judhe men kyon
laga dekhti hoon ghazal main
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13th January 2013, 09:44 PM
bahot khoob likha aapne.... neetu ji.
bahot acchi lagi ghazal aapki......
Shaad...
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14th January 2013, 11:20 PM
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bahot khoob likha aapne.... neetu ji.
bahot acchi lagi ghazal aapki......
Shaad...
shukriya
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15th January 2013, 04:23 AM
good one.....keep it up
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17th January 2013, 04:07 AM
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bahut khubbbbbbbb........................
shukriya
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17th January 2013, 11:46 AM
Khubsoorat juzbaat
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17th January 2013, 12:32 PM
nice one..................................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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20th January 2013, 06:10 PM
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jab likhti hoon ghazal main
lafz lagti hoon ghazal main
zulf lehrane ko jab tab
ghata kehti hoon ghazal main
aaeene ke nazdik aate hee
sharm bharti hoon ghazal main
phool tod kar judhe men kyon
laga dekhti hoon ghazal main
WaaH ! Nice One
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Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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2nd February 2013, 06:42 AM
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good one.....keep it up
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1st August 2013, 11:16 AM
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thnx a lot
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1st August 2013, 12:39 PM
Neetu jee bahot hi achha likhti hain aap ...
Achha laga aapko padh kar ...
Keep sharing your writings ...
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6th August 2013, 05:26 PM
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jab likhti hoon ghazal main
lafz lagti hoon ghazal main
zulf lehrane ko jab tab
ghata kehti hoon ghazal main
aaeene ke nazdik aate hee
sharm bharti hoon ghazal main
phool tod kar judhe men kyon
laga dekhti hoon ghazal main
bahot sundar neetu ji
very well ..................................
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13th August 2013, 04:33 AM
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jab likhti hoon ghazal main
lafz lagti hoon ghazal main
zulf lehrane ko jab tab
ghata kehti hoon ghazal main
aaeene ke nazdik aate hee
sharm bharti hoon ghazal main
phool tod kar judhe men kyon
laga dekhti hoon ghazal main
Bahut hi sunder, dhero daad kabool farmaye
Zid uski mera wazood hi mita dene ki,
aur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki.
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21st August 2013, 09:18 AM
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thnx a lot
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