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Love BeeTa Sama jab Aankhon se guzra...... - 28th April 2017, 03:41 PM



Ek arse baad kuch ehsaas kaagaz par utaarne ki koshish kar rahi hu.....


Woh beeTa sama jab aankhon se ho ke guzra..
Ek sannaTTa dil ko choo ke guzra..

Woh hasi woh pyaar woh saari pyaari baaTein,
Sab haqeeqaT ke Taraazu se ho ke guzra..

Na bewafa hum hai, na bewafa wo hai..
Phir bhi dil se wo pyaar aah ban ke guzra..

Jii rahein hai zindagi, koi shikaayaT bhi Nahi..
BeeTa Sama Har baar dil pe vaar karke guzra..


~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

   
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28th April 2017, 07:01 PM

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Ek arse baad kuch ehsaas kaagaz par utaarne ki koshish kar rahi hu.....


Woh beeTa sama jab aankhon se ho ke guzra..
Ek sannaTTa dil ko choo ke guzra..

Woh hasi woh pyaar woh saari pyaari baaTein,
Sab haqeeqaT ke Taraazu se ho ke guzra..

Na bewafa hum hai, na bewafa wo hai..
Phir bhi dil se wo pyaar aah ban ke guzra..

Jii rahein hai zindagi, koi shikaayaT bhi Nahi..
BeeTa Sama Har baar dil pe vaar karke guzra..


~Priya
Priya, tumhare ehsaas padey, accha likha hai, par tumhare ehsaas dil mein tees paida jarte hai...arse baad tumhe sdc par dekha, accha lga...apna message box check kro.

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Ek arse baad kuch ehsaas kaagaz par utaarne ki koshish kar rahi hu.....


Woh beeTa sama jab aankhon se ho ke guzra..
Ek sannaTTa dil ko choo ke guzra..

Woh hasi woh pyaar woh saari pyaari baaTein,
Sab haqeeqaT ke Taraazu se ho ke guzra..

Na bewafa hum hai, na bewafa wo hai..
Phir bhi dil se wo pyaar aah ban ke guzra..

Jii rahein hai zindagi, koi shikaayaT bhi Nahi..
BeeTa Sama Har baar dil pe vaar karke guzra..


~Priya
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Bahot achchi tarah pesh kiya hai haal wdil aapne
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Ek arse baad kuch ehsaas kaagaz par utaarne ki koshish kar rahi hu.....


Woh beeTa sama jab aankhon se ho ke guzra..
Ek sannaTTa dil ko choo ke guzra..

Woh hasi woh pyaar woh saari pyaari baaTein,
Sab haqeeqaT ke Taraazu se ho ke guzra..

Na bewafa hum hai, na bewafa wo hai..
Phir bhi dil se wo pyaar aah ban ke guzra..

Jii rahein hai zindagi, koi shikaayaT bhi Nahi..
BeeTa Sama Har baar dil pe vaar karke guzra..


~Priya

Waah kya kahne Priya ji.... sabse pahle aapko itne din baad bazm me dekhna, aur upar se itni lajawaab ghazal le ke aap aain , aapke ehsaas kaabile tareef hain....

mujhe har lafz har sher pasand aaya... likhti rahiyega, aati rahiyega...


Na bewafa hum hai, na bewafa wo hai..
Phir bhi dil se wo pyaar aah ban ke guzra..

ye sher bahot pyaara hai...

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Waah kya kahne Priya ji.... sabse pahle aapko itne din baad bazm me dekhna, aur upar se itni lajawaab ghazal le ke aap aain , aapke ehsaas kaabile tareef hain....

mujhe har lafz har sher pasand aaya... likhti rahiyega, aati rahiyega...


Na bewafa hum hai, na bewafa wo hai..
Phir bhi dil se wo pyaar aah ban ke guzra..

ye sher bahot pyaara hai...

Shaad...
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Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Priya didi

Kem chho?

Aap ko bade dinon baad padh rahaa hun.. Aur sach maaniye bahot khushi huii aapko yahaan dekh kar... Bahot khoob likhaa hay.. Yuunhi Likhte rahen...

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Priya didi

Kem chho?

Aap ko bade dinon baad padh rahaa hun.. Aur sach maaniye bahot khushi huii aapko yahaan dekh kar... Bahot khoob likhaa hay.. Yuunhi Likhte rahen...

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