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Holii kii lapto.n me.n mujhe apni chita nazar aatii hai - 3rd March 2007, 07:18 PM
aaj holi per achanak do khyal main uthe unhe hi kuch shwado main dhalkar pesh kar raha hoon.........
or meri or se shayar family ke sabhi members ko

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jamane ki rangeeniyaa.n ab yuiN rehne do yaaro
is duniaa ko ab mujhe albidaa kahne do yaaro.n

apne naseeb main pyar kaha.n rakha hai yaro.n
ye pyar mohbbat ki bate.n ab rahne do yaaro.n

apni to jindgi me.N jagne ke sibaa kuch na likha
wo sote hai.n to unhe chain se sone do yaro.n

taa-Umra unkii aankho.n me.n pyaar doondte rahe
aaj bhii sirf nafrat,_bas,_ ab sahne do yaro.n

huaa na hasil kuch bhii apne dosto.n se yahaa.n
dusmano.n se bhii gale mujhe milne do yaro.n

Holii kii lapto.n me.n mujhe apni chita nazar aatii hai
Chhodo kafan ki baate.n “dilip” ko chain se jalne do yaro.n


aapke jawabo.n ka muntzir

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3rd March 2007, 09:24 PM
namskaar dilip bhaiya


mere bhai yeH kya liKh diya ..

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agar ise kalaam ki nazar se deKheN to wakehi meiN bahot hi khoob andaaz-e-bayaaN hai.. maiN to bas dua karta huN dost khushiyaaN aapke kadam chume aur dard aapse bahot door raheN..

apna khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

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3rd March 2007, 09:40 PM
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aaj holi per achanak do khyal main uthe unhe hi kuch shwado main dhalkar pesh kar raha hoon.........
or meri or se shayar family ke sabhi members ko

~*~*~ HAPPY HOLI ~ *~*~

jamane ki rangeeniyaa.n ab yuiN rehne do yaaro
is duniaa ko ab mujhe albidaa kahne do yaaro.n

apne naseeb main pyar kaha.n rakha hai yaro.n
ye pyar mohbbat ki bate.n ab rahne do yaaro.n

apni to jindgi me.N jagne ke sibaa kuch na likha
wo sote hai.n to unhe chain se sone do yaro.n

taa-Umra unkii aankho.n me.n pyaar doondte rahe
aaj bhii sirf nafrat,_bas,_ ab sahne do yaro.n

huaa na hasil kuch bhii apne dosto.n se yahaa.n
dusmano.n se bhii gale mujhe milne do yaro.n

Holii kii lapto.n me.n mujhe apni chita nazar aatii hai
Chhodo kafan ki baate.n “dilip” ko chain se jalne do yaro.n


aapke jawabo.n ka muntzir

dilip

Waah daliip saheb bahoot khoob.....achhe ahsaas diyehaiN aapne apni tehreer main......God bless you dost..


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4th March 2007, 02:07 AM
dilip bhai,
aapne bahut hi achcha likha hai.


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namskaar dilip bhaiya


mere bhai yeH kya liKh diya ..



agar ise kalaam ki nazar se deKheN to wakehi meiN bahot hi khoob andaaz-e-bayaaN hai.. maiN to bas dua karta huN dost khushiyaaN aapke kadam chume aur dard aapse bahot door raheN..

apna khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

aapka shaitaan dost
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ese hi hamesha mera sath dete rahana dost
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taa-Umra unkii aankho.n me.n pyaar doondte rahe
aaj bhii sirf nafrat,_bas,_ ab sahne do yaro.n

huaa na hasil kuch bhii apne dosto.n se yahaa.n
dusmano.n se bhii gale mujhe milne do yaro.n


bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain dilip ji.....bohat dino baad aapki ghazal padhne ko mili...yuhi likhte rahiye...ummid hai aapki aur se jald hi kuch naya padhne ko milega hame....

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11th March 2009, 11:15 AM
Dilipjee,

Bahot hee anokhe andaaz se pesh ki hai aap ne yah ghazal.... Daad deti hoon mein..

yeh ek sher muje bahot hee pasand aaya....

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taa-Umra unkii aankho.n me.n pyaar doondte rahe
aaj bhii sirf nafrat,_bas,_ ab sahne do yaro.n

huaa na hasil kuch bhii apne dosto.n se yahaa.n
dusmano.n se bhii gale mujhe milne do yaro.n


bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain dilip ji.....bohat dino baad aapki ghazal padhne ko mili...yuhi likhte rahiye...ummid hai aapki aur se jald hi kuch naya padhne ko milega hame....

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muaafii ke sath main aapka shukriya ada karta hoon ki aapko mere dil ke ehsas pasand aaye,
ese hi sath dete rahiyegaa


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Dilipjee,

Bahot hee anokhe andaaz se pesh ki hai aap ne yah ghazal.... Daad deti hoon mein..

yeh ek sher muje bahot hee pasand aaya....



Yunhi likhte rahiye

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aapko holi ki bahut bahut shubhkamnayen

ese hi sath dete rahiyega

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aaj holi per achanak do khyal main uthe unhe hi kuch shwado main dhalkar pesh kar raha hoon.........
or meri or se shayar family ke sabhi members ko

~*~*~ HAPPY HOLI ~ *~*~

jamane ki rangeeniyaa.n ab yuiN rehne do yaaro
is duniaa ko ab mujhe albidaa kahne do yaaro.n

apne naseeb main pyar kaha.n rakha hai yaro.n
ye pyar mohbbat ki bate.n ab rahne do yaaro.n

apni to jindgi me.N jagne ke sibaa kuch na likha
wo sote hai.n to unhe chain se sone do yaro.n

taa-Umra unkii aankho.n me.n pyaar doondte rahe
aaj bhii sirf nafrat,_bas,_ ab sahne do yaro.n

huaa na hasil kuch bhii apne dosto.n se yahaa.n
dusmano.n se bhii gale mujhe milne do yaro.n

Holii kii lapto.n me.n mujhe apni chita nazar aatii hai
Chhodo kafan ki baate.n “dilip” ko chain se jalne do yaro.n


aapke jawabo.n ka muntzir

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bahut dard bhara hai is ghazal me...khoob dard ko ubhaara hai shabdon ke dwara..aise hi likhte rahe aur mehfil ki raunak badhaate rahen

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dilip bhai
radhe radhe

bahut dard bhara hai is ghazal me...khoob dard ko ubhaara hai shabdon ke dwara..aise hi likhte rahe aur mehfil ki raunak badhaate rahen
shukriya dost pasand karne ke liye,,, ese hi hamesha sath dete rahna.....


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