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20th March 2012, 11:03 PM
kya kahana tha kya kahte ho aise kab thy tum jaise ho mujhko kyu dar lag jata hai.. pas mere se jab uth'te ho Jab bhi hasta huN main bolo.. Zakhm mere tum kyuN dukhte ho. chhoti chooti baateiN thi jo ab bhi unpe khush hote ho mere pass hi aana hoga jaao jahan bhi tum jaate ho maine suna hai logoN se ye tum mujhko 'mera' kahte ho ik din hum ik ho jayenge main bholaa ya, tum bhole ho sabko naam tumhara de duN mujhko sab meiN tum dikhte ho kaun sa kona dilli ka hai.. taaro jahan se tum dikhte ho kahmoshi hi khamoshi hai.. aisa kya hai jo sunte ho pyaar agar hai sach me tumko apni zubaaN se kyu kahte ho mere kaise .. ho paaoge maiN ugta huN, tum dhalte ho laut ayega anaaewala jaag pade ho ya sote ho honthoN ko hothoN pe rakh kar do wo saans jo tum lete ho jaise jaise likhta hun main waise waise tum dikhte ho nind nahi aati hai mujhko tum jaane kaise sote ho yaad rahe ik din tum ye hi .. kaatoge bhi jo botey ho pyaar to maine kiya hai tumko tum bin baat hi kyu ainthey ho koi duniyaa jeet gaya hai ik tum khud hi meiN uljhe ho aao tumko choom ke dekhuN meethey ho jo, kitne meethey ho main saare ka saara tumhara ankheN lab dil kyu chunte ho yaad chalo aati na hogi yaad aana bhi kyu bhoole ho ek ghazal se bharta nahi dil bolo kal se fir milte ho fikr nahi ye tum bhi sun lo aaj maro jo kal marte ho |
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20th March 2012, 11:15 PM
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yaad chalo na aati hogi yaad aana bhi kyu bhoole ho harf e taaza naii khushboo mein likha chahta hai baab ik aur mohabbat ka khula chahta hai- Parveen Shakir |
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21st March 2012, 08:38 AM
mere kaise .. ho paaoge
maiN ugta huN, tum dhalte ho honthoN ko hothoN pe rakh kar do wo saans jo tum lete ho jaise jaise likhta hun main waise waise tum dikhte ho yaad rahe ik din tum ye hi .. kaatoge bhi jo botey ho Itnii Lambi Ghazal MeN Tum Hunar Ke Baazigar Lagte Ho .... Bahut Badhiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ...... Vikas Bhai !!!   YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st March 2012, 10:14 AM
mujhko kyu dar lag jata hai.. pas mere se jab uth'te ho |
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21st March 2012, 12:14 PM
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................ummed hai aap bhee mujhse sahmat honge..............tc |
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21st March 2012, 01:36 PM
kya kahana tha kya kahte ho aise kab thy tum jaise ho Wah…Khubsurat Matla mujhko kyu dar lag jata hai.. pas mere se jab uth'te ho Ye Bhi Khoob Kaha… Jab bhi hasta huN main bolo.. Zakhm mere tum kyuN dukhte ho. Boht Boht Umdah Takhayyul , Khubsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan…..Dheron Daad chhoti chooti baateiN thi jo ab bhi unpe khush hote ho mere pass hi aana hoga jaao jahan bhi tum jaate ho maine suna hai logoN se ye tum mujhko 'mera' kahte ho Vikaas Ji…. Is Sher Ka Saani Theak se Mujh Par Nahi Khula, Wesay Agar Aisa Kar Len To Samajhnay Me Ziaada Aasaani Aa Sakti Hai TUM MUJH KO “APNA” Kehtay Ho Is Ka Bhi Wohi Mafh’oom Hai jo Aap Kehna Chah Rahay Hain….. ik din hum ik ho jayenge main bholaa ya, tum bhole ho Hmmmmm….. Khooob…Andaaz Acha Laga…. sabko naam tumhara de duN mujhko sab meiN tum dikhte ho Wah…Kia Kehnay…Ye Hee Hota Hai Muhabbat Me…. Bas Aik Baar Muhabbat Se Us Ko Dekha THa Phir Us Ke Baad Har Ik Chehra Us Ka Chehra Tha kaun sa kona dilli ka hai.. taaro jahan se tum dikhte ho kahmoshi hi khamoshi hai.. aisa kya hai jo sunte ho Behtreeen….. pyaar agar hai sach me tumko apni zubaaN se kyu kahte ho Ye Bhi Gehra Hai Saheb….. Wesay Vikaas Ji Aap Bhi Door Ki Kehtay Hain, Jo Acha Lagta Hai…. mere kaise .. ho paaoge maiN ugta huN, tum dhalte ho Wah Wah Wah… Kia Kehnay…. laut ayega anaaewala jaag pade ho ya sote ho Wahhh… honthoN ko hothoN pe rakh kar do wo saans jo tum lete ho khoob jaise jaise likhta hun main waise waise tum dikhte ho Wah…kamal Ka Sher Hai Janab….. nind nahi aati hai mujhko tum jaane kaise sote ho Usay Abhi Nahi Na Lagi Ho Gi Ye Agan……..! Hahahaahaa…. Wesay Acha Kaha yaad rahe ik din tum ye hi .. kaatoge bhi jo botey ho Its Fact & Reality….. Daad pyaar to maine kiya hai tumko tum bin baat hi kyu ainthey ho Mujhy Is sher Ki Samajh Nahi aa Saki, koi duniyaa jeet gaya hai ik tum khud hi meiN uljhe ho Wah Wah Wah…Ye Bhi Umdah Kaha….Daad aao tumko choom ke dekhuN meethey ho jo, kitne meethey ho Hmmmmmmm…Waqae Dekhna TO Chahiye…… J main saare ka saara tumhara ankheN lab dil kyu chunte ho Aashiq Ho TO Aisa…. Acha Laga Aap Ka Ye Andaaz….. yaad chalo aati na hogi yaad aana bhi kyu bhoole ho ek ghazal se bharta nahi dil bolo kal se fir milte ho fikr nahi ye tum bhi sun lo aaj maro jo kal marte ho Vikaas Ji………. Aik Taweel Or Khubsurat Ghazal Parhnay Ko mili… Buland Takhayyul Ko Boht Sada Alfaaz Me Dhalnay ki Koshish Achi Lagi…. Likhtay Rahiye…..Daad Qabool Farmaiye…… Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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23rd March 2012, 10:15 AM
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