chalte rahna hai

meena chheda · 11:04 AM

Chalte rahna hai, kshitiz bhale hi na milae,
Chahte rahna hai, duniya bhale hi na milae.

Aashman maie udna hai, pankh bhale hi na mile
Shunya mie kho jana hai, bhale hi koi na milae.

Deep mera hai, bhlae hi aaftaab na milae
Yah pal meri hai, bhale hi din ka ujala na milae.

Rango se sajna hai, bhale hi indradhanu na milae
Geet goongoaane hai, bhale hi sur na milae.

Chalte rahna hai, rasta bhale hi na milae
Chahte rahna hai, bhale hi tumhara sathh na milae.

musharrafhusain · 15th April 2003, 10:52 AM

aap waqai bohat achcha likh rahi hain.
likhte rahiye gaa.
aap ke khayalat se ikhtilafat ke baawajood mein aap ka kalam zaroor parhta hoon.
ajeeb si saadgi aur innocence hota hai ismein
bye and take care.
musharrafhusain

"Chalte rahna hai, rasta bhale hi na milae"
"Chahte rahna hai, bhale hi tumhara sathh na milae."

meena chheda · **bahot shukriya -** 15th April 2003, 11:14 AM

musharrafhusainji,
bahot shukragujaar hu aapki. jo aapko meri rachna pasand aati hai. isi tarah mujae likhne par saraahte rahengae isi aasha ke sathh.

Pulkit_gupta · 16th September 2005, 05:18 PM

Chalte rahna hai, kshitiz bhale hi na milae,
Chahte rahna hai, duniya bhale hi na milae.

Aashman maie udna hai, pankh bhale hi na mile
Shunya mie kho jana hai, bhale hi koi na milae.

Aisi soch rakh paayen.. to zindagi asaan ho jaaye.. hai na di?

Deep mera hai, bhlae hi aaftaab na milae
Yah pal meri hai, bhale hi din ka ujala na milae.

Loved these 2 lines... bahut sahi bata kahi hai...!

Rango se sajna hai, bhale hi indradhanu na milae
Geet goongoaane hai, bhale hi sur na milae.

Chalte rahna hai, rasta bhale hi na milae
Chahte rahna hai, bhale hi tumhara sathh na milae.

Bahut pyaari baat kahi yahan bhi... Chalte jaana hai...!

Didi!

Bahut hi pyaari rachna hai.. aur aapki har rachna ki tarah isme bhi ek seekh hai... will try to gain form it

Aise hi pyara pyaara likhti raho... Apna acche se khayal rakho...Keep smiling

meena chheda · 16th September 2005, 05:31 PM

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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
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Didi!

Bahut hi pyaari rachna hai.. aur aapki har rachna ki tarah isme bhi ek seekh hai... will try to gain form it Aise hi pyara pyaara likhti raho... Apna acche se khayal rakho...Keep smiling

mere pulkit,

16 saal ki umr mai likhi gayi meri gujarati rachna ka yah hindi anuwaad hai. ...

di

Pulkit_gupta · 16th September 2005, 05:46 PM

Didi!

Sahi hai... matlab 16 saal ki umar me bhi khayal me bhi soch itni hi gehri thhi... kabhi laga hi nahi ise padhkar ke itni chhoti umar me likhi hogi.. i thot jab post kii tabhi likhi hogi....

Ab yeh qualities to meri Didi ko special banati hain naa

Love u Di:....aise hi likhti raho

Parastaar · 16th September 2005, 06:15 PM

Meri pyaari meena ji...

Rango se sajna hai, bhale hi indradhanu na milae
Geet goongoaane hai, bhale hi sur na milae.

Chalte rahna hai, rasta bhale hi na milae
Chahte rahna hai, bhale hi tumhara sathh na milae.

yeh kya likh gayin aap itti choti umr mein...yahi hai wo astitva jiska zikr aapne kabhi mujhse kiya thaa...badhte rehna hee zindagi hai...yeh panktiyaan tau dil mein utar gayin aur kis narm se ehsaas ke saath...

astitva ka daman thaame chalte rehna hai.....

apki paras

Parul · 16th September 2005, 07:46 PM

Dearest Meena di,

Bahut prerna milti hai tumhari iss rachna se. bahut achha likha hai hamensha ki tarhaa. bas yun hi likhte rehna aur hamensha khush rehna!

Apna khyaal rakhna!

meena chheda · 16th September 2005, 08:00 PM

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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Didi!

Sahi hai... matlab 16 saal ki umar me bhi khayal me bhi soch itni hi gehri thhi... kabhi laga hi nahi ise padhkar ke itni chhoti umar me likhi hogi.. i thot jab post kii tabhi likhi hogi....

Ab yeh qualities to meri Didi ko special banati hain naa Love u Di:....aise hi likhti raho

mere pulkit,

sahi hai ... 16 saal ki umr ki meri 2 kavita jaise jameen or aasmaan ...
ek yah .. rachna jis mai har haal mai mushkurahat k sath jina hai or ek kavita ... jis mai maine apne hi maut ki baat ki thi ..
shayed tumne padhi bhi hogi...

di

meena chheda · 16th September 2005, 08:03 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Parastaar
Meri pyaari meena ji...

Rango se sajna hai, bhale hi indradhanu na milae
Geet goongoaane hai, bhale hi sur na milae.

Chalte rahna hai, rasta bhale hi na milae
Chahte rahna hai, bhale hi tumhara sathh na milae.

yeh kya likh gayin aap itti choti umr mein...yahi hai wo astitva jiska zikr aapne kabhi mujhse kiya thaa...badhte rehna hee zindagi hai...yeh panktiyaan tau dil mein utar gayin aur kis narm se ehsaas ke saath...

astitva ka daman thaame chalte rehna hai.....

apki paras

meri paras,

tumhari meena

meena chheda · 16th September 2005, 08:06 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Parul
Dearest Meena di,

Bahut prerna milti hai tumhari iss rachna se. bahut achha likha hai hamensha ki tarhaa. bas yun hi likhte rehna aur hamensha khush rehna!

Apna khyaal rakhna!

priy parul,

je kavita no aa anuwaad chhe ae gujarati kavita....

MALE N MALE

SATAT CHALWU CHHE, KSHHITIJ MALE N MALE
SATAT CHAHWU CHHE, KOI MALE N MALE;

VYOM MA VIHARWU CHHE, PAANKHO MALE N MALE
SOONYE LEEN THHAWU CHHE, KOI MALE N MALE;

KODIYU MARU CHHE, SOORAJ MALE N MALE
KSHHAN MARI CHHE, DIVAS MALE N MALE;

RANGO JILWA CHHE, USHA MALE N MALE
GEETO TAHUKWA CHHE, SOOR MALE N MALE;

SATAT CHALWU CHHE, SATHH MALE N MALE
SATAT CHAHWU CHHE, CHAH MALE N MALE.

di

Parul · 16th September 2005, 08:16 PM

Arre wah...

mazaa aavi gujarati man vaanchi ne.

dhanyvaad.

Khush raho!

meena chheda · 16th September 2005, 08:17 PM

mere pulkit
yah wo doosri kavita ki link hai ... jiska jikr maine kiya tha...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...0&pagenumber=1

di

komal5 · 16th September 2005, 08:40 PM

Didi..
kehwa ni jarur nathi...k guj ma aa kavita vadhu mithi lage che!

...cute one...shu kahu!...mane toh bahu badhu lakhvu chhe shabd male n male...he ehe.

tc
komal
&
deven(maro bhai)

meena chheda · 16th September 2005, 08:48 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by komal5
Didi..
kehwa ni jarur nathi...k guj ma aa kavita vadhu mithi lage che!
...cute one...shu kahu!...mane toh bahu badhu lakhvu chhe shabd male n male...he ehe.
tc
komal
&
deven(maro bhai)

priy komal,

tari vaat sathe hu barabar sahmat chhu ...
anuwaad ae to shabdo no hoi che mithas no anuwaad kem kari thhay..

deven,

mari kavita ne pasand karwa maate taro pan khub j aabhar .

di

kalpesh016 · 16th September 2005, 11:07 PM

Naa sir jukao patthar ke aage ki woh dewata ho jaye.
Na chaho kisi ko itna ki woh befawa ho jaye.

Asman ko need aye to sulaaun kahan,
dharti ko maut aye to dafnao kahan,
sagar mein lehar aye to chupao kahan,
jab teri yaad aye to jao kahan

Guzare Huve Kal Ki Yaad aati hai,
kuch lamhon se aankhen bhar aati hain,
woh subah rangeen shaam nirali doob jati hain,
jab aap jaise doston ki yaad aati hai.

Tujhe dekhe bina humne, humdard banaya hai
Haan yaadon ne teri hi, hume jeena sikhaya hai
Mere humraaz, tu humsafar na bane, na sahi
Par toone hi humko yeh pyar sikhaya hai

Koi aankhon aankhon se baat kar leta hai
Koi aankhon aankhon mein mulakaat kar leta hai
Bada Mushkil hota hai tab Jawab denA
Jab koi KhamosH rehkar Sawaal kar leta hai

Aap Rootha na karO yun humse
Mere dil ke Dhadkan bhad jaati hai
Dil tho aap ke Naam kar hi chuke hain
Jaa bus baaki hai woh bhi nikal jaati hai

KHUDA UNHE SALAMAT RAKHE JO
NAFRAT HUMSE KARTE HAI
PYAR NAHI NAFRAT HI SAHI
KUCH TO HUM SE KARTE HAI

Pyarali Rajan · 16th September 2005, 11:09 PM

RANGO JILWA CHHE, USHA MALE N MALE
GEETO TAHUKWA CHHE, SOOR MALE N MALE;

Wah Meena bahen! ekdam khovai jaiyen tevi rachna aney tey pan varsho paheley lakhel!!!!

Rajan!!!

meena chheda · 16th September 2005, 11:19 PM

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Originally posted by kalpesh016
Naa sir jukao patthar ke aage ki woh dewata ho jaye.
Na chaho kisi ko itna ki woh befawa ho jaye.

Asman ko need aye to sulaaun kahan,
dharti ko maut aye to dafnao kahan,
sagar mein lehar aye to chupao kahan,
jab teri yaad aye to jao kahan

Guzare Huve Kal Ki Yaad aati hai,
kuch lamhon se aankhen bhar aati hain,
woh subah rangeen shaam nirali doob jati hain,
jab aap jaise doston ki yaad aati hai.

Tujhe dekhe bina humne, humdard banaya hai
Haan yaadon ne teri hi, hume jeena sikhaya hai
Mere humraaz, tu humsafar na bane, na sahi
Par toone hi humko yeh pyar sikhaya hai

Koi aankhon aankhon se baat kar leta hai
Koi aankhon aankhon mein mulakaat kar leta hai
Bada Mushkil hota hai tab Jawab denA
Jab koi KhamosH rehkar Sawaal kar leta hai

Aap Rootha na karO yun humse
Mere dil ke Dhadkan bhad jaati hai
Dil tho aap ke Naam kar hi chuke hain
Jaa bus baaki hai woh bhi nikal jaati hai

KHUDA UNHE SALAMAT RAKHE JO
NAFRAT HUMSE KARTE HAI
PYAR NAHI NAFRAT HI SAHI
KUCH TO HUM SE KARTE HAI

kalpesh,

aabhar... amari sathe aa share karwa badal. ane aa site par taraf thi swagat chhe.

meena chheda · 16th September 2005, 11:20 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pyarali Rajan
RANGO JILWA CHHE, USHA MALE N MALE
GEETO TAHUKWA CHHE, SOOR MALE N MALE;

Wah Meena bahen! ekdam khovai jaiyen tevi rachna aney tey pan varsho paheley lakhel!!!!

Rajan!!!

rajan ,

aabhar....

romana · **hi -** 22nd September 2005, 07:15 PM

meri piyaar ma si di

kaise ho aap

kiya kaho maloom nahi aapki shayri padh ke dil ko jo rahat milti hai vo to mai biyaa nahi kar sakti. its really beautiful aur aapke shayri ka har lafz dil mai ghar kar giya hai. kitni sachai hai is nazam mai ke humai chalte rehna hai or chahte rehna hai akhir isi ka naam zindagi hai

love u di

keep writing

meena chheda · **Re: hi -** 22nd September 2005, 09:33 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by romana
meri piyaar ma si di

kaise ho aap

kiya kaho maloom nahi aapki shayri padh ke dil ko jo rahat milti hai vo to mai biyaa nahi kar sakti. its really beautiful aur aapke shayri ka har lafz dil mai ghar kar giya hai. kitni sachai hai is nazam mai ke humai chalte rehna hai or chahte rehna hai akhir isi ka naam zindagi hai

love u di

keep writing

priy romaaa,

mai thik hu.
haan ... sahi kaha tumne chalte rahna hi zindgi ka doosra naam hai.
khush raho

di

garima · **Re: chalte rahna hai -** 11th December 2005, 02:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by meena chheda
Chalte rahna hai, kshitiz bhale hi na milae,
Chahte rahna hai, duniya bhale hi na milae.

Aashman maie udna hai, pankh bhale hi na mile
Shunya mie kho jana hai, bhale hi koi na milae.

Deep mera hai, bhlae hi aaftaab na milae
Yah pal meri hai, bhale hi din ka ujala na milae.

Rango se sajna hai, bhale hi indradhanu na milae
Geet goongoaane hai, bhale hi sur na milae.

Chalte rahna hai, rasta bhale hi na milae
Chahte rahna hai, bhale hi tumhara sathh na milae.

Maa bahoot hi achha likha hai.. sahi hai chalate rahana hai.. pahale hi manjil milane na milane par vichaar kar lenge to, chalne ka maja nahi aayega...

ek saks hai jisase aksar alag reaserches kaam par baat-chit hoti hai.. wo mujhase har waqt puchhata hai..Garima baat to hum dono hi karate hai fir kyu tumhaare reserches ho jaate hai aur mai tumhaare reserches par aadhaarit ho jaata hoon..
har baar mera ek hi jawaab hota hai.. tum vicharak ho, sochana achhi baat hai lekin itana bhi nahi soch lena chahiye ki sochate sochate waqt nikal jaaye aur tumhaari soch hi na khatm ho ..
sawaal karta hai tumhe asfalta se darr nahi...
jawaab yehi hota hai.. usaki chinkta nahi hai.. jab kaam hi nahi karungee to kaayarta hai.. asafal bhi hui kabhi to kam se kam is baat ki khushi to hogi ki maine mehnat ki thi..

lambi baat ho jaayegi.. aapki ye rachana bahoot pasand aayi

aapki laadli

meena chheda · **Re: Re: chalte rahna hai -** 11th December 2005, 03:32 PM

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Originally posted by garima
Maa bahoot hi achha likha hai.. sahi hai chalate rahana hai.. pahale hi manjil milane na milane par vichaar kar lenge to, chalne ka maja nahi aayega...

ek saks hai jisase aksar alag reaserches kaam par baat-chit hoti hai.. wo mujhase har waqt puchhata hai..Garima baat to hum dono hi karate hai fir kyu tumhaare reserches ho jaate hai aur mai tumhaare reserches par aadhaarit ho jaata hoon..
har baar mera ek hi jawaab hota hai.. tum vicharak ho, sochana achhi baat hai lekin itana bhi nahi soch lena chahiye ki sochate sochate waqt nikal jaaye aur tumhaari soch hi na khatm ho ..
sawaal karta hai tumhe asfalta se darr nahi...
jawaab yehi hota hai.. usaki chinkta nahi hai.. jab kaam hi nahi karungee to kaayarta hai.. asafal bhi hui kabhi to kam se kam is baat ki khushi to hogi ki maine mehnat ki thi..

lambi baat ho jaayegi.. aapki ye rachana bahoot pasand aayi

aapki laadli

meri priy garima,

tumhare is khayal se sahmat hu. mahenat to karni hi hoti hai...

maa