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~..mubtila jabse huN - 16th October 2012, 06:09 AM

mubtila jabse huN muhabbat maiN
fark dikhtaa nahiN ibadat maiN

uski yaadoN mai doobaa hun maiN abhi
zindgi baat karna fursat main

Usse bolo mujhe sataye phir
Kitna baichain hun mai rahat main

jism ko rooh ki saza de dun
Kuch izaafa kar apni jurrat main

Ab uthaun ise ya rahne dun
Koe soya hai meri turbat maiin

Kitne kore hain dekho hath mere
Meri kismat nahi hai kismat main

Ek tu jo nahi to sab mushkil
Ab sahoolat nahi sahoolat main

Tujhko rahna hai rah tu main na rahun
Ae khudaa teri aisi jannat main

jism ko chhod rooh tak jauN
fikr padta nahi hai huzzat main
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16th October 2012, 08:01 AM
bahut hee badiya janumanu jee
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18th October 2012, 05:36 PM
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mubtila jabse huN muhabbat maiN
fark dikhtaa nahiN ibadat maiN

uski yaadoN mai doobaa hun maiN abhi
zindgi baat karna fursat main

Usse bolo mujhe sataye phir
Kitna baichain hun mai rahat main

jism ko rooh ki saza de dun
Kuch izaafa kar apni jurrat main

Ab uthaun ise ya rahne dun
Koe soya hai meri turbat maiin

Kitne kore hain dekho hath mere
Meri kismat nahi hai kismat main

Ek tu jo nahi to sab mushkil
Ab sahoolat nahi sahoolat main

Tujhko rahna hai rah tu main na rahun
Ae khudaa teri aisi jannat main

jism ko chhod rooh tak jauN
fikr padta nahi hai huzzat main
bohat hee umda ...................

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18th October 2012, 10:31 PM
very nice vikas ji.... superlyk....... specially these lines

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19th October 2012, 08:00 AM
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mubtila jabse huN muhabbat maiN
fark dikhtaa nahiN ibadat maiN

uski yaadoN mai doobaa hun maiN abhi
zindgi baat karna fursat main

Usse bolo mujhe sataye phir
Kitna baichain hun mai rahat main

jism ko rooh ki saza de dun
Kuch izaafa kar apni jurrat main

Ab uthaun ise ya rahne dun
Koe soya hai meri turbat maiin

Kitne kore hain dekho hath mere
Meri kismat nahi hai kismat main

Ek tu jo nahi to sab mushkil
Ab sahoolat nahi sahoolat main

Tujhko rahna hai rah tu main na rahun
Ae khudaa teri aisi jannat main

jism ko chhod rooh tak jauN
fikr padta nahi hai huzzat main
bahut sundar ...... vikas bhai ... dil se daad hazir hai .... radhe radhe ........

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19th October 2012, 01:23 PM
Vikas bhaii:

namaste!

bahot khoob andaaz-e-bayaan !! dil se daad

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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20th October 2012, 09:55 PM
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mubtila jabse huN muhabbat maiN
fark dikhtaa nahiN ibadat maiN

uski yaadoN mai doobaa hun maiN abhi
zindgi baat karna fursat main

Usse bolo mujhe sataye phir
Kitna baichain hun mai rahat main

jism ko rooh ki saza de dun
Kuch izaafa kar apni jurrat main

Ab uthaun ise ya rahne dun
Koe soya hai meri turbat maiin

Kitne kore hain dekho hath mere
Meri kismat nahi hai kismat main

Ek tu jo nahi to sab mushkil
Ab sahoolat nahi sahoolat main

Tujhko rahna hai rah tu main na rahun
Ae khudaa teri aisi jannat main

jism ko chhod rooh tak jauN
fikr padta nahi hai huzzat main
vikas ji bahut umda ,speechless.taareef ke liye shabd chote pad gaye...............

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isko saral banana too.ne
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28th October 2012, 12:38 AM
uski yaadoN mai doobaa hun maiN abhi
zindgi baat karna fursat main

waahhhh

Usse bolo mujhe sataye phir
Kitna baichain hun mai rahat main

kitna baichain hun raahat mein..yeh to mere dil ke kareeb rehne waali baat hai jo aapne kahi hai..

jism ko rooh ki saza de dun
Kuch izaafa kar apni jurrat main

acha hai..umda

Ab uthaun ise ya rahne dun
Koe soya hai meri turbat maiin

hmm

Kitne kore hain dekho hath mere
Meri kismat nahi hai kismat main

yeh bhi acha hai..

jism ko chhod rooh tak jauN
fikr padta nahi hai huzzat main

waah..

fikr sahaab aapne to "zindagi baat karna fursat mein" par hi dil jeet liya..bahot khoob..daad hi daad..god bless u

aapka dost/ bhai/ shishya,
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mubtila jabse huN muhabbat maiN
fark dikhtaa nahiN ibadat maiN

uski yaadoN mai doobaa hun maiN abhi
zindgi baat karna fursat main

Usse bolo mujhe sataye phir
Kitna baichain hun mai rahat main

jism ko rooh ki saza de dun
Kuch izaafa kar apni jurrat main

Ab uthaun ise ya rahne dun
Koe soya hai meri turbat maiin

Kitne kore hain dekho hath mere
Meri kismat nahi hai kismat main

Ek tu jo nahi to sab mushkil
Ab sahoolat nahi sahoolat main

Tujhko rahna hai rah tu main na rahun
Ae khudaa teri aisi jannat main

jism ko chhod rooh tak jauN
fikr padta nahi hai huzzat main
Laajawaab ! Vikas Bhai !! Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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Usse bolo mujhe sataye phir
Kitna baichain hun mai rahat main

jism ko rooh ki saza de dun
Kuch izaafa kar apni jurrat main

Ab uthaun ise ya rahne dun
Koe soya hai meri turbat maiin

Kitne kore hain dekho hath mere
Meri kismat nahi hai kismat main

Ek tu jo nahi to sab mushkil
Ab sahoolat nahi sahoolat main

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