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mirage (nazm) - 25th May 2017, 06:26 AM

adaab hazreen,

ba-sad-mazrat salaam,

Shoaib, Anu, Sunita Jee, Sarika aur Madhu se khaaskar muaafi ka talabgaar hooN, itni muhabbatoN ke ba-wajood maiN inke khatoN ka jawaab naeeN de paata, meri naalaayiqui hai, ummed hai aap muaaf kar deNge


nazm bohat kam likhta huuN, kul milaa kar 5 ya 6 raqm hui hoNgi aaj taq. yeh koi 15 saal puraani nazm hai, mulaizza farmaiiye


mere khwaaboN ki jannat ka nazaraa haiN teri aaNkheN
hujuum-e-Gham meiN khushiyoN ka ishaara haiN teri aaNkheN

yeh pech-o-kham jo zulfoN ka kabhi maathe pe lehraaye
jabeen-e-arsh pe goya GhaTaa kaali si bal khaaye

teri baateN haiN jaise chaandii ta'riiKh raatoN meiN
tabassum ye tera jaise ki sehra meiN ho barsaateiN

tujhe har raNg har aNdaaz meiN maine hasiiN paaya
bohat haiN maahjabiiN dekhe kahiiN tujhsa nahiiN paaya

tu voh tasveer hai jiska mussavir khud bhi hairaaN hai
tu kya hai khud naeeN tu jaan'ti, haaye , itni naadaaN hai

mujhe yeh ilm hai tumne bohat sadme uThaaye haiN
tumhari zeest par haavi Gham-e-dauraaN ke saaye haiN

tumhe shikwa bada hai apne maaThe ki lareekoN se
khafaa hooN maiN haram ke paasbaanoN ki zaNjeeroN se

baRaa jee chahta hai tujhko baahoN meiN chhupa luuN maiN
tere har dard ko apne kalejey se lagaa luuN maiN

tere pairoN ke kaaNTe apni palkoN se uThaa luuN maiN
meri jaanaaN jo ho mumkin tujhe apna banaa luuN maiN

muhabbat tujhse hai itni ke maiN batlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta

ummiidoN ke khilonoN se bhi jee behlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta

tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN......
lekin.....
paa nahiiN sakta!



to be continued........




rab raakha
maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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10th June 2017, 10:26 AM

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adaab hazreen,

ba-sad-mazrat salaam,

Shoaib, Anu, Sunita Jee, Sarika aur Madhu se khaaskar muaafi ka talabgaar hooN, itni muhabbatoN ke ba-wajood maiN inke khatoN ka jawaab naeeN de paata, meri naalaayiqui hai, ummed hai aap muaaf kar deNge


nazm bohat kam likhta huuN, kul milaa kar 5 ya 6 raqm hui hoNgi aaj taq. yeh koi 15 saal puraani nazm hai, mulaizza farmaiiye


mere khwaaboN ki jannat ka nazaraa haiN teri aaNkheN
hujuum-e-Gham meiN khushiyoN ka ishaara haiN teri aaNkheN

yeh pech-o-kham jo zulfoN ka kabhi maathe pe lehraaye
jabeen-e-arsh pe goya GhaTaa kaali si bal khaaye

teri baateN haiN jaise chaandii ta'riiKh raatoN meiN
tabassum ye tera jaise ki sehra meiN ho barsaateiN

tujhe har raNg har aNdaaz meiN maine hasiiN paaya
bohat haiN maahjabiiN dekhe kahiiN tujhsa nahiiN paaya

tu voh tasveer hai jiska mussavir khud bhi hairaaN hai
tu kya hai khud naeeN tu jaan'ti, haaye , itni naadaaN hai

mujhe yeh ilm hai tumne bohat sadme uThaaye haiN
tumhari zeest par haavi Gham-e-dauraaN ke saaye haiN

tumhe shikwa bada hai apne maaThe ki lareekoN se
khafaa hooN maiN haram ke paasbaanoN ki zaNjeeroN se

baRaa jee chahta hai tujhko baahoN meiN chhupa luuN maiN
tere har dard ko apne kalejey se lagaa luuN maiN

tere pairoN ke kaaNTe apni palkoN se uThaa luuN maiN
meri jaanaaN jo ho mumkin tujhe apna banaa luuN maiN

muhabbat tujhse hai itni ke maiN batlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta

ummiidoN ke khilonoN se bhi jee behlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta

tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN......
lekin.....
paa nahiiN sakta!



to be continued........




rab raakha
maikash


waah wah wah waahh kyaa baat hai kyaa umdah ehsaas hain kyaa andaaze bayaan hai.......

saahab ise kahte hain quality work..... kam hain magar shaandaar nazm hain aapki bhaijaan.....

tahe dil se daad aur mubaarakbad.......

to be continued likh ke aapne to intzaar ki shuruiaat kar di..... agle part ka intzaar rahega

Shaad...


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15th June 2017, 11:10 PM

Maikash bhaiya

Pranaam.. SSA

Aik behterin tehreer paRhne ko mili.. Ehsaason se bhari hui koshish!

Yeh do sher dil ke Qareeb rahen

muhabbat tujhse hai itni ke maiN batlaa nahiiN sakta
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ummiidoN ke khilonoN se bhi jee behlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta


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adaab hazreen,

ba-sad-mazrat salaam,

Shoaib, Anu, Sunita Jee, Sarika aur Madhu se khaaskar muaafi ka talabgaar hooN, itni muhabbatoN ke ba-wajood maiN inke khatoN ka jawaab naeeN de paata, meri naalaayiqui hai, ummed hai aap muaaf kar deNge


nazm bohat kam likhta huuN, kul milaa kar 5 ya 6 raqm hui hoNgi aaj taq. yeh koi 15 saal puraani nazm hai, mulaizza farmaiiye


mere khwaaboN ki jannat ka nazaraa haiN teri aaNkheN
hujuum-e-Gham meiN khushiyoN ka ishaara haiN teri aaNkheN

yeh pech-o-kham jo zulfoN ka kabhi maathe pe lehraaye
jabeen-e-arsh pe goya GhaTaa kaali si bal khaaye

teri baateN haiN jaise chaandii ta'riiKh raatoN meiN
tabassum ye tera jaise ki sehra meiN ho barsaateiN

tujhe har raNg har aNdaaz meiN maine hasiiN paaya
bohat haiN maahjabiiN dekhe kahiiN tujhsa nahiiN paaya

tu voh tasveer hai jiska mussavir khud bhi hairaaN hai
tu kya hai khud naeeN tu jaan'ti, haaye , itni naadaaN hai

mujhe yeh ilm hai tumne bohat sadme uThaaye haiN
tumhari zeest par haavi Gham-e-dauraaN ke saaye haiN

tumhe shikwa bada hai apne maaThe ki lareekoN se
khafaa hooN maiN haram ke paasbaanoN ki zaNjeeroN se

baRaa jee chahta hai tujhko baahoN meiN chhupa luuN maiN
tere har dard ko apne kalejey se lagaa luuN maiN

tere pairoN ke kaaNTe apni palkoN se uThaa luuN maiN
meri jaanaaN jo ho mumkin tujhe apna banaa luuN maiN

muhabbat tujhse hai itni ke maiN batlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta

ummiidoN ke khilonoN se bhi jee behlaa nahiiN sakta
tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN lekin paa nahiiN sakta

tujhe maiN chaah to sakta huuN......
lekin.....
paa nahiiN sakta!



to be continued........




rab raakha
maikash
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Tujhe main chaah to sakta hoon lekin paa nahi saktaa

isi saani ne zindgaani ko aazaab banaye rakha hai....is khazaane si nikli nazm ko khaaksaar ka salaam yunhi likhte rahiye



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Aapki nazm padhi aur kitni baar padhi....par socha waah waahi Karien to Jane apko qubool ho na ho...lekin dil ko chooo Jane wali nazm par daad diye bagair raha bhi nhi jata......

Agle part ka intzaar rahega.....

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waah wah wah waahh kyaa baat hai kyaa umdah ehsaas hain kyaa andaaze bayaan hai.......

saahab ise kahte hain quality work..... kam hain magar shaandaar nazm hain aapki bhaijaan.....

tahe dil se daad aur mubaarakbad.......

to be continued likh ke aapne to intzaar ki shuruiaat kar di..... agle part ka intzaar rahega

Shaad...

alfaaz, mayiine, mahafuum...behadd "saada" rahe is nazm meiN Shoaib bhai. umr/jazbaat ka taqaaza bhi kuch aur tha un dinoN jo zaahir bhi hai.

iske bawajood aapki muhabbatoN ke zer-e-baar huuN

bohat shurkiya

rab raakha jee
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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