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Jee han.. Peeta hun.. - 9th June 2006, 02:43 PM

Maine mana janab peeta hun
Bakhuda, Behisab peeta hun
Log logon ka khoon peete hai
Mai to phir bhi sharab peeta hun

Jindagi ka aajab peeta hun
Hoke khanakharab peeta hun
Roz-e-Mahshar, Hissab ho na sake
Isliye behisaab peeta hun
-NM
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Nasha meri ibadat hai,
Mai kabhi be-vajoo nahi peeta
Mai sharabi sahi, Saki
Aadmi ka lahoo... NAHI PEETA
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12th June 2006, 04:51 PM

bahot khoob

kya baat likhi hai

Log logon ka khoon peete hai
Mai to phir bhi sharab peeta hun

badhiya...


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12th June 2006, 05:25 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by red_ruchika
bahot khoob

kya baat likhi hai

Log logon ka khoon peete hai
Mai to phir bhi sharab peeta hun

badhiya...
Mujhe khushi hai ki aapko padh kar acha laga..
Yeh mere bhi favourite main se hai..

Milte hai.. Break ke bad.. :-)

- Sinha


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Re: Jee han.. Peeta hun.. - 19th June 2006, 04:33 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Bijay.Sinha
Maine mana janab peeta hun
Bakhuda, Behisab peeta hun
Log logon ka khoon peete hai
Mai to phir bhi sharab peeta hun

Jindagi ka aajab peeta hun
Hoke khanakharab peeta hun
Roz-e-Mahshar, Hissab ho na sake
Isliye behisaab peeta hun
-NM
-------------------------------------------------------------

Nasha meri ibadat hai,
Mai kabhi be-vajoo nahi peeta
Mai sharabi sahi, Saki
Aadmi ka lahoo... NAHI PEETA
- NM

Bijay ji

bahut badiya, ek ek shabad bahut gahra matlab liye huey hai, yu hi likhtey rahiye,

- Sinha


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Re: Re: Jee han.. Peeta hun.. - 19th June 2006, 04:48 PM

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Bijay ji

bahut badiya, ek ek shabad bahut gahra matlab liye huey hai, yu hi likhtey rahiye,
Mujhe behad khushi hai ki yeh ashaar aapko pasand aaye.. Please note that this was purely intentional.. It was intended to be such a beautiful piece of work that it'll give pleasure while reading. But it'll be wrong on my part if I don't tell this. These are not written by me. These belong to some one else. And as you liked it now, I did liked it too. And then I thought that I'll bring this in front of more people who can judge it, love it and share it across. Cause I believe khushiyan bantne se badhti hai aur gam bantne se kam hote hai.. So you should share your feeling to the peoples. I pray to god that he give me more gems to share with you.

See ya around. Take care.

- Sinha


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