to hum batate

[rakesh]

Tarif apni gero se kya sunta hai?
ye to tera nasa hai jo chad gaya,
hosh me hote ,''to hum batate''.

mere ishq ki intaha kya hai?
ye to tm the jo wafa kr gaye,
bewafa hote,''to hm batate.''

rafta rafta khudkhusi me sukun kya hai?
ye to mar gaye hm jo tujhpe marte marte,
jinda hote,''to hm batate.''

izhar-e-peshagi ka tarika kya hai?
ye to kante hai jo meri raho me,
phool hoote,''to hm batate.''

tujhpe gajal ka mouka kya hai?
ye hm the jo ashiq bane rahe,
sayar hote,''to hm batate.''

mere sahar me ye virana kya hai?
ye to tm the jo bahar se gujar gaye,
maikade me hote,''to hm batate.''


meri bebasi par ye guman kya hai?
ye to tm the jo dill tood gaye,
koi aur hota,''to hm batate,to hm batate.''.......

[kwahish]

Rakesh Jii.........

Wakai aapke jazbaat mein dum hai... bahut hii dil fareb likha hai aapne ...
magar yun itna gussa cool down bro.. jyada garmi bhi thik nahi hoti kabhi tanhai mein shanti se sochna....

wel bahut achcha likha hai aapne...
aur yeh do stanza bahut hi kabile tarif rahe..

tujhpe gajal ka mouka kya hai?
ye hm the jo ashiq bane rahe,
sayar hote,''to hm batate.''

mere sahar me ye virana kya hai?
ye to tm the jo bahar se gujar gaye,
maikade me hote,''to hm batate.

likhate rhiaye..
Khush rahiye...
God bless you..

[rakesh]

apke appreciation ke liye bhut bhut sukriya.............

ye koi gussa nahi hai janab,bas kuch dill ki tamannaye hai jo halat ke chalte,adoohri rah jati hai......
apne apna kimti wqt diya uske liye tahe dill se sukriya..........
ate rahiyega.
god bless u.......