My first poem mene khud likhi h.

[Sharma_Ashu]

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Me nhi janda , me dssa'n ga.
Me nhi janda aukat ki hanjua'n
yaada'n di
Kida klle beh beh ronde ginde taare
raata'n nu
Me dssa'n ga , Pehla khaid ishq di
baazi ik me haar lva'n.
Me smjh javanga kida jind yaari te
vaarde aa'n
Pehla jaan to pyara ik bna me yaar
lva'n.
Sbna nu hns hns apne gal naal
laavanga
Pehla hns hns kise de gal da bn me
haar jva'n.
Kidda'n khaidi jaandi baazi ishq di
me dssanga
Pehla kar kise kudi naal akhaa'n
me do char lvaa'n
Kyu adh vchale dub gyi c o
kchyaa'n te tar di hoyi
Me dssan'ga , Pehla yaar lyi kar
driya ik me paar lvaa'n
Kida milda rub ethe jyonde jee ena
bndya nu
Me dssanga , Pehla apne andr vsde
ME nt maar lvaa'n.
Tere pyaar de ehsaana da v krja
taaranga
Pehla bapu de sir chdya krja taar
lvaa'n
Pehla bapu de sir chdya krja taar
lvaa'n.
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Ashu

[Monikaa]

bahut badiya.. or badhai ho aapko first poem ke liye..
keep writing.

[yaaden_kamal]

nice one keep it up bahut wadhiya likhea tusi