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11th May 2016, 09:16 PM
ye vaade na keeje sanam jaate jaate,
kahiN marr naa jaaen tere aate aate.
sunegaa na koii gareebon ki aaheN,
kahin ruk gayee hai duaa jaate jaate
wafaaoN ki jab bhii chale baat koii,
ham ab bhi hain aksar teraa naam laate,
kisii se kiyaa na kabhii zikr teraa,
magar haal e dil hain ghazal me sunaate.
zaher hi sahii maikashii kijiye "Shaad",
bhulaa denge us ko bhi peete pilaate.
Shaad...........
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12th May 2016, 09:19 AM
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ye vaade na keeje sanam jaate jaate,
kahiN marr naa jaaen tere aate aate.
sunegaa na koii gareebon ki aaheN,
kahin ruk gayee hai duaa jaate jaate
wafaaoN ki jab bhii chale baat koii,
ham ab bhi hain aksar teraa naam laate,
kisii se kiyaa na kabhii zikr teraa,
magar haal e dil hain ghazal me sunaate.
zaher hi sahii maikashii kijiye "Shaad",
bhulaa denge us ko bhi peete pilaate.
Shaad...........
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Bahut khoob Bahut khoob mere bhai....mujhe to yeh itni pasand aayi ki ise compose karke aapko sunaa bhi diya...mazaa aa gaya
Dua hai khuda se ki aapka yeh hunar aur nikhartaa jaaye aur aapka likha har nagmaa humari zubaan par ho
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12th May 2016, 01:50 PM
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Bahut khoob Bahut khoob mere bhai....mujhe to yeh itni pasand aayi ki ise compose karke aapko sunaa bhi diya...mazaa aa gaya
Dua hai khuda se ki aapka yeh hunar aur nikhartaa jaaye aur aapka likha har nagmaa humari zubaan par ho
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka mast saahab..... aapne jo izzat bakshi hai uske liye main aapka tahe dil se shukr guzaar hoon..... ate rahiyegaa.. khush rahiye
Shaad...
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12th May 2016, 02:47 PM
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ye vaade na keeje sanam jaate jaate,
kahiN marr naa jaaen tere aate aate.
sunegaa na koii gareebon ki aaheN,
kahin ruk gayee hai duaa jaate jaate
wafaaoN ki jab bhii chale baat koii,
ham ab bhi hain aksar teraa naam laate,
kisii se kiyaa na kabhii zikr teraa,
magar haal e dil hain ghazal me sunaate.
zaher hi sahii maikashii kijiye "Shaad",
bhulaa denge us ko bhi peete pilaate.
Shaad...........
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waaah waaaah.....kya rawan ghazal hai shaad sahab..aur ehsaas dil ko chhoo lene wale..
sabhi ashaar lajwaab magar matla khaas pasand aaya..bahut khoob !!
dher sari daad aur mubarakbaad..
likhte rahein..
khush rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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12th May 2016, 04:14 PM
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ye vaade na keeje sanam jaate jaate,
kahiN marr naa jaaen tere aate aate.
sunegaa na koii gareebon ki aaheN,
kahin ruk gayee hai duaa jaate jaate
wafaaoN ki jab bhii chale baat koii,
ham ab bhi hain aksar teraa naam laate,
kisii se kiyaa na kabhii zikr teraa,
magar haal e dil hain ghazal me sunaate.
zaher hi sahii maikashii kijiye "Shaad",
bhulaa denge us ko bhi peete pilaate.
Shaad...........
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Masha allah
Shaad ji kamaal ki ghazal hui hai
Na-cheez ki Daad qubool karey
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12th May 2016, 08:27 PM
Shaad bhai namaste,
Behad pasand aai ye gazal.....bohot hi lay me likhte hain aap....wakai lajawab....yoon hi hameen apni khoobsurat gazalon se nawazte rahen....dheroon daad
Aapka apna
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13th May 2016, 02:56 PM
"Zeher hi sahi maikashi kijiye 'shaad'
Bhula denge usko bhi pite pilaate"
Behad Khubsurat aur puri gazal ka sabse nayaab sher!
mughe apne gam me kisi ki dakhal andazi nhi pasand k mere yar ne badi nazakat se ye tohfa nazar kiya he mughe!!
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14th May 2016, 01:49 AM
Kya baat hai shaad sahab.....
Chah to ye thi ke doob ke marr jaaun gham ki samandar me
Magar ye kya, aaj bhi tair raha hun uspe kisi laash ki tarah...
उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
दिल में सुलग रही आग को ना हवा दिया करो
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25th May 2016, 01:00 AM
vaah vaah buhet achee aor khoub ghazal hey shaad saheb
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25th May 2016, 05:17 PM
Shaad sahab....
aap ki ghazal hameiN bahot pasand aayi hai... dil o daad pesh hai ..
ek sher meri taraf se
Ruk se gaye the labz ... jubaa' pe aate aate
Bin kahe fir dil ka aalam hum kis ko sunaate
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26th May 2016, 09:13 AM
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waaah waaaah.....kya rawan ghazal hai shaad sahab..aur ehsaas dil ko chhoo lene wale..
sabhi ashaar lajwaab magar matla khaas pasand aaya..bahut khoob !!
dher sari daad aur mubarakbaad..
likhte rahein..
khush rahein...
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aapki is darjaa muhabbat aur kholoos se main behad mashkoor hoon Madhu saaahiba..... aapne nacheez ko jo izzat se nawaaza hai main us qaabil nahi thaa.... apni duaaon me yaad rakhiyega...
apna khyaal rakhen.. shukriyaa
Shaad....
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Masha allah
Shaad ji kamaal ki ghazal hui hai
Na-cheez ki Daad qubool karey
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behad shukrguzaar hoon aapka mujahid bhai.... tashreef laate rahiyegaa...
duaa goh
Shaad....
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Shaad bhai namaste,
Behad pasand aai ye gazal.....bohot hi lay me likhte hain aap....wakai lajawab....yoon hi hameen apni khoobsurat gazalon se nawazte rahen....dheroon daad
Aapka apna
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aapki inaayat hai janaab.... bahut bahut shukriyaa jo aapko mera likha pasand aa saka..
aate rahiyegaa..
Shaad.....
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26th May 2016, 09:15 AM
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"Zeher hi sahi maikashi kijiye 'shaad'
Bhula denge usko bhi pite pilaate"
Behad Khubsurat aur puri gazal ka sabse nayaab sher!
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is ek sher par nazre inaayat farmaane ke liye mamnoon hoon aapka...
aati rahiyegaa... apna khayaal rakhiye
Shaad......
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Kya baat hai shaad sahab.....
Chah to ye thi ke doob ke marr jaaun gham ki samandar me
Magar ye kya, aaj bhi tair raha hun uspe kisi laash ki tarah...
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kya baat hai janab...... khoobsurat jawaab se aapne meri izzat ko badhaaya hai.....
shukran......
Shaad......
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4th June 2016, 05:12 AM
aadaab shaad miyaaN,
picchle koi 10-15 saaloN meiN jab bhi tabiyat ko dard ki "dose" shiddat se mehsoos hui hai to sabse pehle Majaaz ke qalaam paDhta hooN, phir chacha Ghalib, Meer aur Shakeel Badayuni ki jaanib tavvazo jaati rahi hai, aapka sukhan usi may'aar par mujh gareeb ki zaroorat par har baar khara utar raha hai
Ghazal par khaadim ki mubaarikbaad tasleem farmaiiyega aur ba-ra'ye "meherbaani" mashq jaari rakhiyega, mujh jaise TooTe hue afraad ko in nagiinoN ki sakh zaroorat hai!
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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21st June 2016, 12:51 AM
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aadaab shaad miyaaN,
picchle koi 10-15 saaloN meiN jab bhi tabiyat ko dard ki "dose" shiddat se mehsoos hui hai to sabse pehle Majaaz ke qalaam paDhta hooN, phir chacha Ghalib, Meer aur Shakeel Badayuni ki jaanib tavvazo jaati rahi hai, aapka sukhan usi may'aar par mujh gareeb ki zaroorat par har baar khara utar raha hai
Ghazal par khaadim ki mubaarikbaad tasleem farmaiiyega aur ba-ra'ye "meherbaani" mashq jaari rakhiyega, mujh jaise TooTe hue afraad ko in nagiinoN ki sakh zaroorat hai!
rab raakha
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chacha Ghalib ka naam aapne kyaa liyaa ke aapkii aamad par ye sher yaad aa gayaa bade bhai.....
woh aaye ghar meiN hamaare KHuda ki kudrat hai
kabhee ham unko, kabhee apne ghar ko dekhte haiN
aur aap ne mujh gareeb ko jo izzat bakshii hai main yaqeenan uskaa rattee bhar bhii nahii hoon, magar aapki muhabbat hai jo aapne aisaa kahaa aur maana.... aise chahne waale naseebwaalon ko milte hain.... aur ham sau baar sadqe jaate hain aapki inaayaton par.....
aapke mashware ko ham sar maathe par lagaate hain aur koshish banae rakhenge k aap jaise sukhanwar ko agar ek lamhe ko bhi mutmaeen kar sake to hamaari khushnaseebi hogii....
duaaon ka talabgaar
Shaad...........
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27th June 2016, 06:51 PM
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ye vaade na keeje sanam jaate jaate,
kahiN marr naa jaaen tere aate aate.
sunegaa na koii gareebon ki aaheN,
kahin ruk gayee hai duaa jaate jaate
wafaaoN ki jab bhii chale baat koii,
ham ab bhi hain aksar teraa naam laate,
kisii se kiyaa na kabhii zikr teraa,
magar haal e dil hain ghazal me sunaate.
zaher hi sahii maikashii kijiye "Shaad",
bhulaa denge us ko bhi peete pilaate.
Shaad...........
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waah shaad ji
ek ajeeb se kashish thi iss kalaam mein................ek ajeeb sa dard.............bohut khubsoorat ghazal hui hai.........har baar ki tarah.
bohu bohut mubarak.
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29th June 2016, 11:31 PM
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ye vaade na keeje sanam jaate jaate,
kahiN marr naa jaaen tere aate aate.
sunegaa na koii gareebon ki aaheN,
kahin ruk gayee hai duaa jaate jaate
wafaaoN ki jab bhii chale baat koii,
ham ab bhi hain aksar teraa naam laate,
kisii se kiyaa na kabhii zikr teraa,
magar haal e dil hain ghazal me sunaate.
zaher hi sahii maikashii kijiye "Shaad",
bhulaa denge us ko bhi peete pilaate.
Shaad...........
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bahut khoob shaad bhai har ashar lajwaab.....................
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1st July 2016, 11:51 PM
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chacha Ghalib ka naam aapne kyaa liyaa ke aapkii aamad par ye sher yaad aa gayaa bade bhai.....
woh aaye ghar meiN hamaare KHuda ki kudrat hai
kabhee ham unko, kabhee apne ghar ko dekhte haiN
aur aap ne mujh gareeb ko jo izzat bakshii hai main yaqeenan uskaa rattee bhar bhii nahii hoon, magar aapki muhabbat hai jo aapne aisaa kahaa aur maana.... aise chahne waale naseebwaalon ko milte hain.... aur ham sau baar sadqe jaate hain aapki inaayaton par.....
aapke mashware ko ham sar maathe par lagaate hain aur koshish banae rakhenge k aap jaise sukhanwar ko agar ek lamhe ko bhi mutmaeen kar sake to hamaari khushnaseebi hogii....
duaaon ka talabgaar
Shaad...........
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kaahe TaaNg kheech riye ho miyaaN!
yaqeen jaano, taQalluf nai kar riya hooN , na to aadat hai aur na hi fitrat hai hai aisi harqatoN ki
badaa mann hai, ya khwaab keh lijiye ke "ek shaam" aisi ho ke maiN, aap, Anu aur do-ek sho'ra idhar se, mil baiTheN to ziNdagii kuch maqaam paa jaye
jeete raho mere bhai, Allah aapko aur aapke parivaar ko taNdrus'tii aur dheroN khushiyoN se nawaaze!
rab raakha
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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2nd July 2016, 03:55 AM
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waah shaad ji
ek ajeeb se kashish thi iss kalaam mein................ek ajeeb sa dard.............bohut khubsoorat ghazal hui hai.........har baar ki tarah.
bohu bohut mubarak.
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka Sarikaa jee...... bahut khushi huii aapko bazm me maujood dekh kar,.....
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bahut khoob shaad bhai har ashar lajwaab.....................
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aapki inaayaton ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon Rajinder ji.....
aate rahiyegaa
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kaahe TaaNg kheech riye ho miyaaN!
yaqeen jaano, taQalluf nai kar riya hooN , na to aadat hai aur na hi fitrat hai hai aisi harqatoN ki
badaa mann hai, ya khwaab keh lijiye ke "ek shaam" aisi ho ke maiN, aap, Anu aur do-ek sho'ra idhar se, mil baiTheN to ziNdagii kuch maqaam paa jaye
jeete raho mere bhai, Allah aapko aur aapke parivaar ko taNdrus'tii aur dheroN khushiyoN se nawaaze!
rab raakha
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janaab Ahlan.....
aapki duaaon par mere thartharaate hue labb faqat itnaa hi kah sakte hain..... Aameen.
duaaon ki darkhaast...
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kaahe TaaNg kheech riye ho miyaaN!
yaqeen jaano, taQalluf nai kar riya hooN , na to aadat hai aur na hi fitrat hai hai aisi harqatoN ki
badaa mann hai, ya khwaab keh lijiye ke "ek shaam" aisi ho ke maiN, aap, Anu aur do-ek sho'ra idhar se, mil baiTheN to ziNdagii kuch maqaam paa jaye
jeete raho mere bhai, Allah aapko aur aapke parivaar ko taNdrus'tii aur dheroN khushiyoN se nawaaze!
rab raakha
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janaab Ahlan.....
aapki duaaon par mere thartharaate hue labb faqat itnaa hi kah sakte hain..... Aameen.
duaaon ki darkhaast...
Mukhlis...
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