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teri ibadat hai - 10th August 2015, 10:53 PM
mujhe mere ghum se mohabbat hai,
Aye khuda tujh se ye shikayat hai .

kyun baar baar imtehaan leta hai ,
mere zhakhmon mein abhi nazakat hai.

Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

Ab tau jeena bhi mera dushvar hua ,
log kehne lage kyun kerta himakat hai .

kaise batau unko apne dil ka ye haal ,
Is dil meiN basee unki ek chahat hai .

Aye mere dost Ishq buri cheez nahiN ,
zhakhm dena tau zamane ki riwayat hai .

mere mehboob jaan le zindagi ka falsafa ,
Hamdam her waqt kerta teri ibaadat hai.


khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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10th August 2015, 11:19 PM
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mujhe mere ghum se mohabbat hai,
Aye khuda tujh se ye shikayat hai .

kyun baar baar imtehaan leta hai ,
mere zhakhmon mein abhi nazakat hai.

Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

Ab tau jeena bhi mera dushvar hua ,
log kehne lage kyun kerta himakat hai .

kaise batau unko apne dil ka ye haal ,
Is dil meiN basee unki ek chahat hai .

Aye mere dost Ishq buri cheez nahiN ,
zhakhm dena tau zamane ki riwayat hai .

mere mehboob jaan le zindagi ka falsafa ,
Hamdam her waqt kerta teri ibaadat hai.
Sanjay bhai behad khoob ehsaas hue hai is baar, bahut aache


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11th August 2015, 11:43 AM
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11th August 2015, 12:14 PM
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mujhe mere ghum se mohabbat hai,
Aye khuda tujh se ye shikayat hai .

kyun baar baar imtehaan leta hai ,
mere zhakhmon mein abhi nazakat hai.

Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

Ab tau jeena bhi mera dushvar hua ,
log kehne lage kyun kerta himakat hai .

kaise batau unko apne dil ka ye haal ,
Is dil meiN basee unki ek chahat hai .

Aye mere dost Ishq buri cheez nahiN ,
zhakhm dena tau zamane ki riwayat hai .

mere mehboob jaan le zindagi ka falsafa ,
Hamdam her waqt kerta teri ibaadat hai.



bahut hi aalaa darje ka kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne Sanjay saahab......
meri tarafa se dher saarii daad aur shubh kaamnaaen......

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12th August 2015, 12:53 PM
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mujhe mere ghum se mohabbat hai,
Aye khuda tujh se ye shikayat hai .

kyun baar baar imtehaan leta hai ,
mere zhakhmon mein abhi nazakat hai.

Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

Ab tau jeena bhi mera dushvar hua ,
log kehne lage kyun kerta himakat hai .

kaise batau unko apne dil ka ye haal ,
Is dil meiN basee unki ek chahat hai .

Aye mere dost Ishq buri cheez nahiN ,
zhakhm dena tau zamane ki riwayat hai .

mere mehboob jaan le zindagi ka falsafa ,
Hamdam her waqt kerta teri ibaadat hai.

Sanjay ji....bahut accha likha hai aapne, hame poori gazal pasand aaye, yeh sher khaas dil ke kareeb rha.

Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

bahut khoobsurat sher hai yeh

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12th August 2015, 05:35 PM
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mujhe mere ghum se mohabbat hai,
Aye khuda tujh se ye shikayat hai .

kyun baar baar imtehaan leta hai ,
mere zhakhmon mein abhi nazakat hai.

Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

Ab tau jeena bhi mera dushvar hua ,
log kehne lage kyun kerta himakat hai .

kaise batau unko apne dil ka ye haal ,
Is dil meiN basee unki ek chahat hai .

Aye mere dost Ishq buri cheez nahiN ,
zhakhm dena tau zamane ki riwayat hai .

mere mehboob jaan le zindagi ka falsafa ,
Hamdam her waqt kerta teri ibaadat hai.

Bahot khoob sahab .....behad umda ghazal hui hai....dheron mubarakbaad aapko !!!!!!

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mujhe mere ghum se mohabbat hai,
aye khuda tujh se ye shikayat hai .

Kyun baar baar imtehaan leta hai ,
mere zhakhmon mein abhi nazakat hai.

Jab kaanton se paanv mein lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

Ab tau jeena bhi mera dushvar hua ,
log kehne lage kyun kerta himakat hai .

Kaise batau unko apne dil ka ye haal ,
is dil mein basee unki ek chahat hai .

Aye mere dost ishq buri cheez nahin ,
zhakhm dena tau zamane ki riwayat hai .

Mere mehboob jaan le zindagi ka falsafa ,
hamdam her waqt kerta teri ibaadat hai.

bahut khoob rahe aapke yeh ehsaas sanjya bhai
likhte rahen
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13th August 2015, 07:28 PM
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mujhe mere ghum se mohabbat hai,
Aye khuda tujh se ye shikayat hai .

kyun baar baar imtehaan leta hai ,
mere zhakhmon mein abhi nazakat hai.

Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

Ab tau jeena bhi mera dushvar hua ,
log kehne lage kyun kerta himakat hai .

kaise batau unko apne dil ka ye haal ,
Is dil meiN basee unki ek chahat hai .

Aye mere dost Ishq buri cheez nahiN ,
zhakhm dena tau zamane ki riwayat hai .

mere mehboob jaan le zindagi ka falsafa ,
Hamdam her waqt kerta teri ibaadat hai.
AchChhe Khayaalaat Pesh Kiye HaiN

Khoobsurat KalaaM Ke Liye Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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Sanjay ji namaste,

Kafi dino baad aapko padhne ka mauka mila....
Behad khoobsurat ehsaaso ko aur bhi khoobsurat alfaz diye aapne......kya baat hai...
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Accha likha hai Sanjay ji

Aajkal aap hain kahan. Sdc se gayab hi ho gaye hain.
Sarika ji ,

Main thora busy chal raha huN isliye aa nahi raha sdc pe .. Isi karan maine moderatorship bhi chori thi .. Dekho jab free hounga aap logon se phir jur jaaonga ..Yaad kerne ke liye shukriya .

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mujhe mere ghum se mohabbat hai,
Aye khuda tujh se ye shikayat hai .

kyun baar baar imtehaan leta hai ,
mere zhakhmon mein abhi nazakat hai.

Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe bur jaati muskuahat hai.

Ab tau jeena bhi mera dushvar hua ,
log kehne lage kyun kerta himakat hai .

kaise batau unko apne dil ka ye haal ,
Is dil meiN basee unki ek chahat hai .

Aye mere dost Ishq buri cheez nahiN ,
zhakhm dena tau zamane ki riwayat hai .

mere mehboob jaan le zindagi ka falsafa ,
Hamdam her waqt kerta teri ibaadat hai.
Hamdam ji aadab. Aapki peshkash sher dar sher ahsaasoN se bharpoor sunder lagi.....

"Jab kaanton se paanv meiN lahoo nikla ,
unke chehre pe baRh jaati muskuahat hai.".....behad khoobsoorat...

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