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Tumhi chand suraj tumhi chandni ho -
11th September 2014, 12:16 PM
Dayar-e-falak ki tumhi roshni ho
Tumhi chand suraj tumhi chandni ho Dayar-e-falak- The region of sky Jo goonje to sab ko diwana bana de Usi raag ki tum haseeN raagni ho haseeN- Beautiful hai sheereeN zabaaN jiski akhlaaq umdah Kisi ko bhala us se kya dushmani ho sheereeN – Sweet, Akhlaaq- Behaviour Parizaat ho tum bohut khaas ho tum Bohut khoobsurat bohut mohini ho Mohini- Pretty woman na ho sirf tum gham ke maron key hami mata-e-muhabbat key bhi tum dhani ho hami –Supporter/ Person who helps, mata-e-muhabbat- Things of love tumhen dekh kar log kehte hain aksar Ke chawal key ek daane se tum bani ho eh tofeeq har aadmi ko khuda de tumhari tarah oh wafa ka ghani ho tofeeq- Mercy of God, Strength, Success, ghani- Rich, Wealthy wafa- To give company/ Support Moqaddar se Parwaaz ko tum mili ho Badi dil lagi pyar ki chaashni ho Chaashni- Syrup , Flavour By Mujeeb Parwaaz |
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11th September 2014, 01:18 PM
Bohat khoob mujib sahab. ...
Aapse guzarish hai ke ek ghazal ko ek hi dafa aur ek hi section me post kijiye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th September 2014, 01:29 PM
Shukriya Zainy Saheba.
Agar is Ghazal ko "Shayeriye Ishq"" forum men muntakil kar den to ziyada munasib hoga. Aisa kijiye agar ek hi forum ki baat hai to...jo mujhe pata nahin tha. It ni si zehmat gawarah kijiye.....khushu hogi mujhe. |
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11th September 2014, 01:39 PM
Jee zarur.................................
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th September 2014, 02:28 PM
wahh! waahh!... Mujeeb bhai,
Mehboob ki tareef karni ho to koi alfaaz aap se udhaar le kar jaaye!  Mazaa aa gaya.. sacch meiN..... masha Allah.. bohat pyar bharay eshaas haiN, aur lafz lafz khushbu bakher raha hai fizaa meiN.. DherooN daad is pur-waqaar kalaam ke liye.. reps added! Likhte rahiye, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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11th September 2014, 02:36 PM
hahahaha....
bas yunhi ek halki koshish hai. aap ki badi nawazish hai Hassan Saheb. Isi tarah saath dete rahiye. Aap ka dost Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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12th September 2014, 10:29 PM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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13th September 2014, 08:55 AM
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Mujeeb saahab.... aapki kaavish ka alag hi lutf alag hi mazaa hai... main bahot hi mutassir huaa hoon aur dil se aapko daad ki peshe aqeedat kaarta hoon..... tashreef laate rahiyega... shukriyaa Shaad.... |
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Boht Khoob! |
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Boht Khoob! -
14th September 2014, 09:46 PM
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15th September 2014, 11:29 AM
Naz@neenji,Hassanji, Zainyji, Madhuji, Saadji aur Yasmine ji aur baqi sabhi doston ko, meri taraf se pyar bhara adaab.
Aap sab ka teh dil se shukriya ada karta hun ke aap logon ne dher sari daadon se mujhe nawaaz kar meri hausla afzai ki. Dar asl main dard ki fugaan ( Sense of sadness) apne dil men rakhta nahin hun naahin kalam men iski tasheer chodta hun. Wajah eh hai ke roz-marra ki zindegani men har shakhs pareshani men mubtalah hai aur kaamkaaj men masroof rehta hai. Usko chhahi ke aisi cheez mile jo uske chhere per muskaan bikhraye aur uska dil halka kare....us ki tafree kare...dil juee kare. Is lehaaj se jo asaar seerat aur surat ki tareef bayaan karte hain oh asaar ziyada mozuuN( fit) hain mere khayaal se. Mere aksar beshtar kalaam tareefon se taalluq rakhte hain. Aur mere kalaam nayi aur purani behron men hote hain. Isi khaas baat ko madde nazar rakhte hue, aap hazraat is na cheez ki takhliqaat ko padhte rahen , sarahte rahen aur mujhe khidmat karne ka mauqa faraham karte rahen...isse se mujhe khushi hogi...magar han koi khaami hoto be-jhejhak bataya karen. Aap sab khush rahen...muskurate rahen..isi dua ke saath rukta hun. Khuda hafiz Mujeeb Parwaaz |
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15th September 2014, 12:17 PM
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Itni mohabbatoN se nawaazne ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaaH! Aap younhi acche acche kalaam hum se ru-ba-ru karaatay raheN, hum issi taraH hausla afzaai karte raheN ge... aur abhi tak to aap ke kalaam meiN koi khaami dikhi nahi.... agar dikhi to zaroor nishaan-dahi kareN ge... Apna khaayal rakhiye ga, Younhi meHfil sajaatay rahiye ga, Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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25th September 2014, 05:13 PM
Hassan sb....adaab arz hai....thodi der hui aap se mukhatib hone men...bura mat maniyega.
Muhabbat hai jabhi to aap hazraat ke sath is anjuman men shamil hun. Urdu se mujhe behad lagao hai..jabke roz roz ke kaam men ise istemaal nahin karpata hun. By profession Sr. Scientist jo thera. Lekin shayeri ke zauq ko taskeen dene ke liye hum sukhan logon ke beech ana pasand karta hun. Aap sabhi hazraat bohut khoobsurat kalaam likhte hain aur achhe kalaam ke hami bhi hain. khaas kar aap ke kallam achhe standard ke hote hain. Waise sabhi logon ke lafzon ke intekhaabaat dekhtehi bante hain. Baas aap log kaam jaree rakhenge..isi ummeed ke saath rukta hun aur dua ki darkhwast karta hun. Khush rahen. Khuda Hafiz Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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