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hindi rachanaye - 5th April 2006, 11:20 PM

haan marunga main
antim satya hai mritu
jise swikaar karunga main

jab surya uttarardh mein
tatha madhyahn mein jiwan
apne safalatam shirsh par
pratham prem alingan mein
Milan k samarpan mein
Anubhutik charam par
Bhawanao k kinare par
Deh Wasana tripti ki or
Atmansh anant ki or
Tatha mastishk mein sunya hoga

Tab haan tab …..jiwan rupi
Mrityu ka varan karunga main
Tab haan tab …..marunga main

Marunga main !!!!…………haan marunga main
   
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pratham prem - 5th April 2006, 11:25 PM

avichal , chanchal , atal
……pratham ..athawa antim
……..apoorn swapn sa
bhramik parantu satya
mritu sa smaran raha tha wo

wasna k charam mein
sparsh k udvign mein
gyan k gahan mein
surya k shikhar par
tatha anant ki maap tak

hriday se lipte ……
vishbel ki bhati…ko
prem karta raha tha wo

kyunki bhramik parntu saty
pratham athawa antim
parantu thaa ….uska prem tha wo
……….pratham prem tha wo
   
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mitr ...ho tum ...? - 5th April 2006, 11:29 PM

antar k gahan andhkar mein
prakash ek punj tum …………..hey priy

nirasha k majhdhar mein
jiwan naiya k khiwaiya tum …...hey priy

vicharo k bhanwar mein
bhawnao k kinare tum …………hey priy

jiwan k samast sangharsho mein
ekmatr sahare tum ……………...hey priy

bhawna k charam se
kamna k shikhar tak …tum …….hey priy

sima rahit….. niswarth
sambandho k adhare tum ……….hey priy

nishpap , nish-kalank , neehit
nij mein swyam tum …………….hey priy

priyo mein pritam tum ….
Matr ek mitr ho tum !!! …………hey priy
   
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6th April 2006, 08:45 AM

antar k gahan andhkar mein
prakash ek punj tum …………..hey priy

nirasha k majhdhar mein
jiwan naiya k khiwaiya tum …...hey priy

vicharo k bhanwar mein
bhawnao k kinare tum …………hey priy


bahut hi sundar rachna hai yeh aapki......


with best wishes

ranju


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Re: hindi rachanaye - 6th April 2006, 10:32 PM

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Originally posted by sagar_vishvaraj
haan marunga main
antim satya hai mritu
jise swikaar karunga main

jab surya uttarardh mein
tatha madhyahn mein jiwan
apne safalatam shirsh par
pratham prem alingan mein
Milan k samarpan mein
Anubhutik charam par
Bhawanao k kinare par
Deh Wasana tripti ki or
Atmansh anant ki or
Tatha mastishk mein sunya hoga

Tab haan tab …..jiwan rupi
Mrityu ka varan karunga main
Tab haan tab …..marunga main

Marunga main !!!!…………haan marunga main
Saagar Ji,
aapko parhkar main dhanya ho gaya hoon. Yahan aana saarthak hua hai. Jisse khojtey rehta tha aaj woh aapke shabd mein liptey miley hain. Asamanjas sa hoon ki aage kya likhun.
Aapki is kriti ko mera pranaam.

vipin
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dhanyawad - 7th April 2006, 05:53 PM

dhanyawad vipin ji ......aapke itne adar aur prem k liye .......achha lagta yadi aapne meri dusri kavitao ko padh kar unhe saraha hota ...aapka swagat hai vipin ji
   
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11th April 2006, 11:47 PM

avyakt vicharo ko vyakt kar raha hun
kuchh na kar , kuchh na keh pane ki kuntha ko ashakt kar raha hun
antar k goodh rahasyo ko kar saku ujagar
iksha hai jaan saku swyam ko ..pare agyat simao k

hey ek-matr aadhaar vishvah k ho jaagrat
ban sahayak karo jaagrat akriti mein atma ko
niyantrit kar endriyo ko , jiwan sangharsh mein
deh-rath k bano sarathi …tum par agyat sa vishvash hai

ashakt…nirash…bojhil man se
matr sajiw darshak ho raha hun
kunthao , abhilashao k bojh tale
matr nirjiv vimarshak ho raha hun
mahatwaakankshi kathor main k kuthaaraaghat se
pashan pradarshak ho raha hun
kuchh na kar , kuchh na keh ki aswikrit nirasha
thake tan aur man ki sampoorn vishram hetu mritu abhilasha
tadhaypi manaw man k sundar diwaswapn si jine ki aashaa

hey dev …….
He mahamanaw ………….
Main bhi manaw hun ..mujhme bhi ikshaye hai
Jiwan jine ki ….auro ki bhanti hi …
Main bhi jiwit rehne ka ikshuk hun

Prarthi hone ki kalaa se anibhigya
Prarthana , abhyarthana se vimukh
Nahi janta kaise vyakt karu swyam ko
Parantu tum to antaryaami ho
Tum to man awam vicharo k gyani ho
To ……..jaan lo mere avyakt ko …….
   
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12th April 2006, 01:57 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by sagar_vishvaraj
avyakt vicharo ko vyakt kar raha hun
kuchh na kar , kuchh na keh pane ki kuntha ko ashakt kar raha hun
antar k goodh rahasyo ko kar saku ujagar
iksha hai jaan saku swyam ko ..pare agyat simao k

hey ek-matr aadhaar vishvah k ho jaagrat
ban sahayak karo jaagrat akriti mein atma ko
niyantrit kar endriyo ko , jiwan sangharsh mein
deh-rath k bano sarathi …tum par agyat sa vishvash hai

ashakt…nirash…bojhil man se
matr sajiw darshak ho raha hun
kunthao , abhilashao k bojh tale
matr nirjiv vimarshak ho raha hun
mahatwaakankshi kathor main k kuthaaraaghat se
pashan pradarshak ho raha hun
kuchh na kar , kuchh na keh ki aswikrit nirasha
thake tan aur man ki sampoorn vishram hetu mritu abhilasha
tadhaypi manaw man k sundar diwaswapn si jine ki aashaa

hey dev …….
He mahamanaw ………….
Main bhi manaw hun ..mujhme bhi ikshaye hai
Jiwan jine ki ….auro ki bhanti hi …
Main bhi jiwit rehne ka ikshuk hun

Prarthi hone ki kalaa se anibhigya
Prarthana , abhyarthana se vimukh
Nahi janta kaise vyakt karu swyam ko
Parantu tum to antaryaami ho
Tum to man awam vicharo k gyani ho
To ……..jaan lo mere avyakt ko …….
Sagar Ji
jane kyon aisa lagta hai ki aapko aapke ke hee andar jaakar parha jaaye. In vichaaron ko parhkar mujhe bahaut khushi hoti hai. Aap apni rachnaon se apni drid pehchaan de chukey hain. Khusnaseeb hoon main jo aapke parhney ka awsar paata hoon.

ek baat aur kehna chahunga main ki, aap apni rachnaon ko ek hee post mei matt likhiye, unhe alag alag shirshak ke saath hee alag alag post kijiye. Nahin tow bahaut saare dost aapki kalam ko parhney se vanchit reh jaayenge. main chahunga aap sabhi rachnaon ko alag-alag shirshak se prakaashit karein.

aapka shubchintak
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