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Kyon Itna Tere Khayaalon Mein Mandraate Hain -
1st April 2006, 08:11 AM
Sabko mera Salaam,
Aaj pehli baar, bina hindi/Urdu dictionary use kiye, maine kuch likha hai  ..yes I kno, sounds a bit pathetic, but neways…aur pehli baar, ek aise topic par likha hai, jo humse bahot anjnabi sa hai…maikhaana aur sharaab, poetry par par ke, mere mann mein khayaal aaya, k kyon na main bhi likhoon kuch thora sa mere style se alag…toh thora sa dar k, k shayad kitna bura maine likha hai, im peshing this to u…zaroor bataayega k accha laga k so-called kachra hai  Har shaam teri dehleez par sar jhukaate hain Maikhaanon ko teri yaadon se sajaate hain Har ik boondh jo utharthi hai apne sine mein Usse teri tukraayi ka ek inaam kehlaate hain Par peene se bhi tera chehra duur nahi hota Nashe mein bhi ashkon ko hum chupaate hain Aur phir jab suraj ki kiran deti hai apni awaaz Hum jhoothi muskaan se dard ko dafnaate hain Kat jaata hai din bina koi khushie k mel se Shaam hote hi, phir peene chale aate hain Sochti hai yeh badnaseeb kyon aisa samaa hai K ab maikhaanon se bhi kuch hamare naate hain Kyon zindagi k har rang teri yaad dilaate hain Kyon itna tere khayaalon mein mandraate hain Thanx... »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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Re: Kyon Itna Tere Khayaalon Mein Mandraate Hain -
1st April 2006, 08:31 AM
Har shaam teri dehleez par sar jhukaate hain Maikhaanon ko teri yaadon se sajaate hain Har ik boondh jo utharthi hai apne sine mein Usse teri tukraayi ka ek inaam kehlaate hain Par peene se bhi tera chehra duur nahi hota Nashe mein bhi ashkon ko hum chupaate hain Aur phir jab suraj ki kiran deti hai apni awaaz Hum jhoothi muskaan se dard ko dafnaate hain Wah.... Kat jaata hai din bina koi khushie k mel se Shaam hote hi, phir peene chale aate hain Sochti hai yeh badnaseeb kyon aisa samaa hai K ab maikhaanon se bhi kuch hamare naate hain Kyon zindagi k har rang teri yaad dilaate hain Kyon itna tere khayaalon mein mandraate hain Wah bahut ache... Warda, Dheere dheere tum urdu mein bhi acha likhne lagi ho... thou u used dictionary.. but ur effort is worth applauding... but ek baat kahunga... gals drinking dont look good... so say no... lol... Take Care Rohin |
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1st April 2006, 10:21 PM
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toh aapko accha laga...koolness..yeh aakhri post thi meri...ab ainda se...na iss site par aana, na kuch likhna hai maine.... hah! now whts the point of my improving my urdu...jab likhna hi chordiya... take care »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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1st April 2006, 10:44 PM
very nice
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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Re: Kyon Itna Tere Khayaalon Mein Mandraate Hain -
2nd April 2006, 12:20 PM
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Pahli baar likha hai yah soch kar yahi kahooNga ki bahoot achchha likha hai.. Sab se achchha pahla sher hi laga.. Aur aap ke pahle ghazal ka pahla sher.. waah! kya baat hai... Likhte rahiye .. Ek achchhi kosish .... Mayank |
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Re: Kyon Itna Tere Khayaalon Mein Mandraate Hain -
2nd April 2006, 03:22 PM
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vaah vaah wardaaji aap ne to kamaal hi kar diya bahut hi achha likha hai sach mai maan gaye aap ki ungliyo ke jaadu ko bas aise hi likhe rahiye or khush rahiye wid regards take care manu. |
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2nd April 2006, 10:19 PM
oyeee...when did u start drinkin...meri nanni si jaan...
chota sa bachchaa...  tht was really nice...except for the drinkin part take care luv ya Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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2nd April 2006, 11:15 PM
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gracias!(thank u) keep coming take care »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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3rd April 2006, 09:19 AM
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....................................NICE  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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3rd April 2006, 11:28 AM
sweet bhaut achha likha hai
aajkal bus chaahyi hui ho tum keep writing shrdh 
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Re: Re: Kyon Itna Tere Khayaalon Mein Mandraate Hain -
4th April 2006, 04:55 AM
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thanx for liking...and no its not my first try...i didnt even kno it was a ghazal...well, i was hoping for a mix between a ghazal and a regular kalaam...if thas possible  ....and u liked the first sher...well, at least u liked something..and knowing tht makes me very happy...take care keep coming Warda »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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4th April 2006, 05:04 AM
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kuch zyaada keh diya hai aapne...main itni taareef ki...god darn it! aage aur hindi nahi aati! i mean to say...i dont deserve all tht praise...a bit too much...ab isse hindi mein kaise kehte hain?? take care keep coming bye »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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4th April 2006, 05:12 AM
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hey...thanx for liking...lol, the drinking part...who cares, juss an expression to enhance it ...as long as u dont strt it...juss playingtake care luv ya Warda »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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