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*~*~* Pyaar Mil Jaayega !!!!!! *~*~* - 28th March 2006, 12:34 AM
hi all
ye meri phir se 4 liners se kuhc jyaada likhne ki ek aur koshsih hai ..... umeed karta hun aap sabko pasand aayegi ...... agar koi mujhe kuch bhi suggest karna chahta hai .... ya koi complaint ( waise hogi nahi ) .... so most welcome .... i m waiting for your replies ....

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iss dil ko karaar tab aayega,
jab aapka deedar ho jaayega,
ho jaayenge hum khud se juda,
jiss din aapka pyaar mil jaayega....

hum to intjaar kar rahe hai,
ye intjaar kab khatam ho paayega,
karte hain hum pyaar unhi se,
kya ye baat dil unhe bata paayega....

kwaabon se hai unka naata,
kya vo yun hi toot jaayega,
saanso mein base hain vo,
kya ye sach unhe pata chal jaayega....

ho jaayenge hum khud se juda,
jiss din aapka pyaar mil jaayega....

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waiting for your replies ........

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hi - 28th March 2006, 01:33 AM
Hi aashu vaah kya badhiya kalaam likha hai yaar
dil ye padh ke sach mai baag baag ho gaya

maine socha bh nahi tha kabhi ke tum hamse bhi achhe shayar ho
yaar tumhare haatho ka ye jaadoo ab dil par bhi kaam kar gaya,

ham to cutu tumhare fan ho gaye
bahut hi badhiya koshish ki hai or ye koshish nahi safalta hai, jo tumhare kadam chumegi meri duao ke saath

nice wording aashu
yunhi likhte rahna, aur khush rehna dost

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28th March 2006, 01:36 AM
one word: WONDERFUL!!!

i must say...my favorite of all ur writings!! really good!! this was awesome ashu

keep writing

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28th March 2006, 11:14 AM
bahut acche ashuji bahut khoob likha hai 4 line main bahut kuch keh gaye aap............

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Bahot Achchha Likha Hai - 28th March 2006, 12:32 PM
Hi ashu,

Apne bahot achcha likha hai. yunhi likhte rahon, hum intezar karenge. mujhe kuch kami lagi par bata nahin paunga kis cheez ki. technicalities to mujhe bhi deep me nahin ati. par ye zarur kahunga ke aise hi likhte rahiye.

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28th March 2006, 06:45 PM
hi ashu
beautifulllll bahut achha likha hai aapney isi tarah share karte rahna
bye

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29th March 2006, 05:51 PM
manu bhai

bahut accha laga ke aapko mere ye shayri pasand aai
aapne to bahut jyaada taareef kar di ..... kya ye shayri sach mein itni achi likhi hai maine ....
thank you for appreciating this one ....

keep coming

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29th March 2006, 05:52 PM
warda ....

thank you for reading my post
and bahut accha laga ye jaanke ke maine itna accha likha hai ...

aate rehna
tumhara apna

cute sa Ashu

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29th March 2006, 05:53 PM
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29th March 2006, 05:56 PM
narender ji

accha laga aapne meri shayri padhi aur usse pasand kiya

keep coming
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29th March 2006, 06:00 PM
surbhi ji

accha laga aap aai aur aapne hamari shayri ko pasand kiya ..

issi tarah aate rahiyega

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30th March 2006, 05:52 PM
THAT IS BEAUTIFUL

VERY TRUE,

KEEP POSTING,

TAKE CARE,

MADIHA

Dur dur reh key sanu naa tarpaa tu,
Sadey naal pakiyaan mahabbataan nibhaa tu.

Dur dur reh key sanu naa tarpaa tu,
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31st March 2006, 03:19 PM
kwaabon se hai unka naata,
kya vo yun hi toot jaayega,
saanso mein base hain vo,
kya ye sach unhe pata chal jaayega....


hi ashu very beautful..........

bahut hi sundar likha hai......

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Re: *~*~* Pyaar Mil Jaayega !!!!!! *~*~* - 1st April 2006, 11:22 PM
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hi all
ye meri phir se 4 liners se kuhc jyaada likhne ki ek aur koshsih hai ..... umeed karta hun aap sabko pasand aayegi ...... agar koi mujhe kuch bhi suggest karna chahta hai .... ya koi complaint ( waise hogi nahi ) .... so most welcome .... i m waiting for your replies ....

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iss dil ko karaar tab aayega,
jab aapka deedar ho jaayega,
ho jaayenge hum khud se juda,
jiss din aapka pyaar mil jaayega....

hum to intjaar kar rahe hai,
ye intjaar kab khatam ho paayega,
karte hain hum pyaar unhi se,
kya ye baat dil unhe bata paayega....

kwaabon se hai unka naata,
kya vo yun hi toot jaayega,
saanso mein base hain vo,
kya ye sach unhe pata chal jaayega....

ho jaayenge hum khud se juda,
jiss din aapka pyaar mil jaayega....

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waiting for your replies ........
oye mere bhai mere dost kya likha hai tumne,meri daad kabool karna,dekte hi dekte tum kitna accha likhne lage ho,hope tum isse bhi kai jyada accha aga bhi likhoge......... aur me uska intezar karunga.yuhi likhte raho......bas
bye and take care
passionate........

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pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra"
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2nd April 2006, 10:52 AM
ashu bhai bahut bahut bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne...................yuhi aage likhte rehna aur mehfil sajate rehna

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
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2nd April 2006, 03:45 PM
bahut acha laga aapko padhkar,aise laga ke jaise mere jazbaat kisi ne likh daale.
loved it.
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5th April 2006, 03:35 PM
madiha

thanx for rewading and apreciating it

keep coming bye ...

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Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
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5th April 2006, 03:36 PM
ranjana ji

bahu bahut shukriya aapne hamara likha padah
aur sun ke accha laha ke aapko pasand aaya

aate rahiyega

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Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)

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5th April 2006, 03:38 PM
passionate bhaiya

thank you ver much for reading it ....
mujhe ye jaan ke accha laga ke aapko ye shayri itni pasand aai .. ..
main poori koshish karunga ke isse bhi accha likh paaun ...

aate rahiyega

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Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)

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thank you to u also
mujhe acha laa ke tum meri post pe aaye
aur maine suna hai tum aaj kal CA ki tayari kar rahe ho .. to meri taraf se BEST OF LUCK .... magar site pe aate rehna

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5th April 2006, 04:24 PM
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accha laga aapne humein padha

aate rahiyega

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Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
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Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)

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3rd May 2006, 12:21 AM
just want this one to bring in front of u all

as i m not a good shayar ... but i liked this one very much ...

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