~.. is ladki main ....

[janumanu]

इस लड़की मॅ ज़रूर कोई देवता रहता है
दुख इसके आगे जो घुटने टेकता रहता है


is ladki mai zaroor koe devta rahta hai
dukh iske aage jo ghutne tekta rahta hai


मैने सोते हुए चूमा है इसे हर शब
चाँद भी ना लंबी लंबी फैंकता रहता है


maine sote hue chooma hai ise har shab
chand bhi na lambi lambi fainkta rahta hai


कुछ यूँ गुज़रा इसकी सोहबत मॅ वक्त मेरा
ज़्यु बूढ़े के आगे कोई बच्चा खेलता रहता है


kuch yun guzra iski sohbat mai woqt mera
jyu boodhe ke aage koe bacha khelta rahta hai


किसी की खोई मासूमियत का अक्स इनमे
कोई इसकी नज्मे पढ़ता नही देखता रहता है

kisi ki khoi masoomiyat ka aks inme
koe iski nazme padhta nahi dekhta rahta hai


ये कोडियों के भाव दे जाती है आँसू अपने
जानूमानू मोतियों के मोल बेचता रहता है

ye kodiyon ke bhaav de jati hai aansu apne
'Janumanu' motio ke mol bechta rahta hai


-- For taru .... a friend who inspired me lot...

[N@zneen]

Hamesha ki tarah bht gehrai liye hue bht simple si ghazal..........is mei sirf tumhe hi maharat haasil hai..........awesome as usual..........KEEP IT UP

[Baqtiar]

Originally Posted by N@zneen

Hamesha ki tarah bht gehrai liye hue bht simple si ghazal..........is mei sirf tumhe hi maharat haasil hai..........awesome as usual..........KEEP IT UP

(Kitna jhoooooooot bolti ho....tum jhoot bolti thak ti nahi .... )

[LAMHA]

awesome as usual..........................keep it up...................

[janumanu]

............. thanx everyone ..

[Mayank]

vikash jee,

aap ki kavita achchhi lagi, so daad qubool keejiye.........

par yeh couplet mai.n samjh nahii.n paaya, agar aap samjhaa de.n to khushii hogii...... chaand ka labi lambi phaikne.n se kyaa muraad hai aap ka?

maine sote hue chooma hai ise har shab
chand bhi na lambi lambi fainkta rahta hai

-Mayank

[janumanu]

Originally Posted by Mayank

vikash jee,

aap ki kavita achchhi lagi, so daad qubool keejiye.........

par yeh couplet mai.n samjh nahii.n paaya, agar aap samjhaa de.n to khushii hogii...... chaand ka labi lambi phaikne.n se kyaa muraad hai aap ka?




-Mayank

shuukriaya mayank bhayee ... woqt dene ke liye

lami lambi fekne se matlab ........ gappe marna .... ya apni jhoothi badayee karne se hai ...

"to be boastful .........

we ussualy said na ... itni lambi lambi na fainka kar ... job koe apni jhooti tareef karta hai

to be boastful ......... deenge marne wala

[Mayank]

Originally Posted by janumanu

shuukriaya mayank bhayee ... woqt dene ke liye

lami lambi fekne se matlab ........ gappe marna .... ya apni jhoothi badayee karne se hai ...

"to be boastful .........

we ussualy said na ... itni lambi lambi na fainka kar ... job koe apni jhooti tareef karta hai

to be boastful ......... deenge marne wala

jee, mai.n aap ne jo farmaaya hai woh to samjh gaya thaa.. mera kahana thaa ki chaand ka lambi lambi phainkne se kyaa muraad hai, aur kyaa yeh chaand (moon) hai?

-Mayank

[janumanu]

maine sote hue chooma hai ise har shab
chand bhi na lambi lambi fainkta rahta hai

chand kahta hai ki maine ise(taru ) har raat ko chooma hai

chand is baat ki deenge marta rahta hai

this is just i want to say ..

[sunita thakur]

nice.............................................. .....!

[janumanu]

thanx sunita ji

and sorry to be late .. as usual

[kwahish]

Wah Bhai...... SuperB

As uswal kehne se beter lagenga ke main kuch aur kahun......
really bahut achcha likha hai....... sabhi sher achche lage aur bahut khoob surat lage..

Likhate raho Bhai
Khush raho......
God Bless You...

Originally Posted by Mayank

jee, mai.n aap ne jo farmaaya hai woh to samjh gaya thaa.. mera kahana thaa ki chaand ka lambi lambi phainkne se kyaa muraad hai, aur kyaa yeh chaand (moon) hai?

-Mayank

Mayank Jii Shayad main aapko kuch samjha pauN..

Koshish karta huN" bus itna taswwur kijiye ke shayar us ladki ke paas kisi shab mein
Baitha ho aur pure chand ko dekhker uske dil mein aisa guman hua ho... ke chand usse jalane ke liye usse kaha ho... ke main us ladki ko sote hua kai baar chuma huN...

But shayar uski yeh baat kharij kerta hai aur kehta hai " chand se" ke chand lambi lambi fenkta hai " yeh sab taswwur hai is haqeekhat mein tole to phir kabhi samjhne wali baat hi nahi aati... aur samjhane wali shayad kabhi nahi.....

well aapko bura naa lage main bus itna hi kahunga........

[satyaa]

Bahot achi ghazal hai janumanu ji

[kafiir]

Originally Posted by janumanu

इस लड़की मॅ ज़रूर कोई देवता रहता है
दुख इसके आगे जो घुटने टेकता रहता है


is ladki mai zaroor koe devta rahta hai
dukh iske aage jo ghutne tekta rahta hai


मैने सोते हुए चूमा है इसे हर शब
चाँद भी ना लंबी लंबी फैंकता रहता है


maine sote hue chooma hai ise har shab
chand bhi na lambi lambi fainkta rahta hai


कुछ यूँ गुज़रा इसकी सोहबत मॅ वक्त मेरा
ज़्यु बूढ़े के आगे कोई बच्चा खेलता रहता है


kuch yun guzra iski sohbat mai woqt mera
jyu boodhe ke aage koe bacha khelta rahta hai


किसी की खोई मासूमियत का अक्स इनमे
कोई इसकी नज्मे पढ़ता नही देखता रहता है

kisi ki khoi masoomiyat ka aks inme
koe iski nazme padhta nahi dekhta rahta hai


ये कोडियों के भाव दे जाती है आँसू अपने
जानूमानू मोतियों के मोल बेचता रहता है

ye kodiyon ke bhaav de jati hai aansu apne
'Janumanu' motio ke mol bechta rahta hai


-- For taru .... a friend who inspired me lot...

this is more like it as per expectation.........................

dheroo daad kabool karye................

kafiir

[Manshaa Thaakur]

Originally Posted by janumanu

इस लड़की मॅ ज़रूर कोई देवता रहता है
दुख इसके आगे जो घुटने टेकता रहता है


is ladki mai zaroor koe devta rahta hai
dukh iske aage jo ghutne tekta rahta hai


मैने सोते हुए चूमा है इसे हर शब
चाँद भी ना लंबी लंबी फैंकता रहता है


maine sote hue chooma hai ise har shab
chand bhi na lambi lambi fainkta rahta hai


कुछ यूँ गुज़रा इसकी सोहबत मॅ वक्त मेरा
ज़्यु बूढ़े के आगे कोई बच्चा खेलता रहता है


kuch yun guzra iski sohbat mai woqt mera
jyu boodhe ke aage koe bacha khelta rahta hai


किसी की खोई मासूमियत का अक्स इनमे
कोई इसकी नज्मे पढ़ता नही देखता रहता है

kisi ki khoi masoomiyat ka aks inme
koe iski nazme padhta nahi dekhta rahta hai


ये कोडियों के भाव दे जाती है आँसू अपने
जानूमानू मोतियों के मोल बेचता रहता है

ye kodiyon ke bhaav de jati hai aansu apne
'Janumanu' motio ke mol bechta rahta hai


-- For taru .... a friend who inspired me lot...

is ladki mai zaroor koe devta rahta hai
dukh iske aage jo ghutne tekta rahta hai

maine sote hue chooma hai ise har shab
chand bhi na lambi lambi fainkta rahta hai

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