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1212/1212/1212/1212

Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai

1st sher

Tujhe batau bhi toh kya be-taab dil ki keyfiyat
Na aaye neend raato ko ye ishq ka fusoon hai (MUJAHID)

2nd sher

Hai mushkilon ki andhiyaan yakeen dagmaga raha
Khuda ka naam dil me rakh vahi tera sutoon hai(madhu)

Sutoon=pillar



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Behr
1212/1212/1212/1212

Na chahtein na rahtein na dil me phir sukoon hai
Hai lutf e zindagi bhi kam agar nahi junoon hai

1st sher

Tujhe batau bhi toh kya be-taab dil ki keyfiyat
Na aaye neend raato ko ye ishq ka fusoon hai (MUJAHID)

2nd sher

Hai mushkilon ki andhiyaan yakeen dagmaga raha
Khuda ka naam dil me rakh vahi tera sutoon hai(madhu)

Sutoon=pillar
doston mahfil ruk gayi hai...aap sab se request hai ki aage sher pesh karein aur ghazal ko mukammal karne me madad karein....



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Is ghazal ke naseeb me anjaam nahi hai shayad..

Mujahid sahab aapse request hai aap ek nayi behr dekar nayi ghazal ka agaaz karein.

Jisse ruki huyi mahfil me rawani aaye..

Shukriya..



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Is ghazal ke naseeb me anjaam nahi hai shayad..

Mujahid sahab aapse request hai aap ek nayi behr dekar nayi ghazal ka agaaz karein.

Jisse ruki huyi mahfil me rawani aaye..

Shukriya..
Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu

Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge

Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai

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1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22

Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai

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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu

Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge

Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai

BEHR-E-MUJTAS:

Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin

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1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22

Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai

Matla:

Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa raha hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)
Shukriya mujahid ji...

Sabhi doston se guzarish hai agla sher pesh karein...



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21st August 2016, 11:58 PM

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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu

Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge

Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai

BEHR-E-MUJTAS:

Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin

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1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22

Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai

Matla:

Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa raha hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)
umdaa aaghaaz mere bhai, apni maaloomat ke liye poocha raha hoon misra-e-sani mein kahi se aa raha hai hoga ya kahi se aa rahi hoga?



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umdaa aaghaaz mere bhai, apni maaloomat ke liye poocha raha hoon misra-e-sani mein kahi se aa raha hai hoga ya kahi se aa rahi hoga?
Shukriya mast sahab daad deney ke liye

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mujahid saheb aasan si beher ar asaar dia karen hamkoh itni mushkil beher samjh nahi aati :conf used:

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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu

Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge

Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai

BEHR-E-MUJTAS:

Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin

Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
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1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22

Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai

Matla:

Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa raha hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)


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mujahid saheb aasan si beher ar asaar dia karen hamkoh itni mushkil beher samjh nahi aati :conf used:
Mohtarma saba ji

Aap behr ki istilaahi naam se bilkul confused mat hoiye

Mai jab bhi koi nayi ghazal pesh karta hu koshish karta har baar alag behr ka istamaal karu

Ye bohat maqbool behr hai jiss mai kaafi mashoor ghazle likhe hai shaurao ne

Misaal ke taur par

1) Har ik baat pe kehte ho tum ke tu kya hai
Tumhi kaho ke ye andaaz-e-guftgu kya hai (MIRZA GHALIB)

2) Gulo mai rang bharey baad-e-nau-bahaar chaley
Chaley bhi aao ke gulshan ka karobaar chaley (FAIZ AHMED FAIZ)

3) Kabhi kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aata hai (SAHIR LUDHIANVI)

Aap arkaan aur uss ke vazn pe hi dhyaan dijiye

Aap jaise ba-kamaal shaiera zaroor achha likh sakenge

Maine iss liye urdu aur roman mai dono mai arkaan likh diye sab ki aasaani ke liye
   
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Chaliye madhu ji ki farmaish pe ek nayi behr ke saath hazir hu

Umeed hai iss ghazal ko sahi anjaam tak hum sab mil ke pohchayenge

Lijiye pesh-e-khidmat hai

BEHR-E-MUJTAS:

Behr-e-mujtas musamman makhboon mahzuuf/makhboon maqsuur, makhboon mahzuuf musakkin, makhboon maqsuur musakkin

Mufa'ilun, Fa'ila'tun, Mufa'ilun, Fa'i'lun/Fa'i'laan/Fe'lun/Fe'laan
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مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان
مفاعِلن، فَعِلاتُن، مفاعِلن، فَعِلن(فَعِلان) فعلن(فعلان

1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22
1212, 1122, 1212, 112/22

Ehem nikaat= Fa'i'lun mai "i" mutahrik hai
Fa'i'laan mai "n" saakin hai
Fe'laan mai "n" saakin hai

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Dilo ke faasley ab hone bhi lagey hai daraaz
Kahi se aa rahi hai dil ko hijr ki aawaaz (MUJAHID)
Na jane kya hoga anjaam is kahani ka
Sitam se dard se hee jiska ho raha aaghaaz... (madhu)



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shukkria mujahid sahib
buhet achey sey aap ney samjhaya hey


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Mohtarma saba ji

Aap behr ki istilaahi naam se bilkul confused mat hoiye

Mai jab bhi koi nayi ghazal pesh karta hu koshish karta har baar alag behr ka istamaal karu

Ye bohat maqbool behr hai jiss mai kaafi mashoor ghazle likhe hai shaurao ne

Misaal ke taur par

1) Har ik baat pe kehte ho tum ke tu kya hai
Tumhi kaho ke ye andaaz-e-guftgu kya hai (MIRZA GHALIB)

2) Gulo mai rang bharey baad-e-nau-bahaar chaley
Chaley bhi aao ke gulshan ka karobaar chaley (FAIZ AHMED FAIZ)

3) Kabhi kabhi mere dil mai khayaal aata hai (SAHIR LUDHIANVI)

Aap arkaan aur uss ke vazn pe hi dhyaan dijiye

Aap jaise ba-kamaal shaiera zaroor achha likh sakenge

Maine iss liye urdu aur roman mai dono mai arkaan likh diye sab ki aasaani ke liye


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Behtareen sher hua hai madhu ji

Waah waah waah waah
Bahut shukriya janaab....aate rahiye...



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Na jane kya hoga anjaam is kahani ka
Sitam se dard se hee jiska ho raha aaghaaz... (madhu)
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Dosto ghazal be-kas padh gayi hai

Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat se guzarish hai kashti ko sahil tak pohchaye


Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye

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Dosto ghazal be-kas padh gayi hai

Moazziz khavateen aur hazraat se guzarish hai kashti ko sahil tak pohchaye


Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye

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mahfil eghazal aagey barahiyen mujahid sahib .....


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Aakhri sher toh maine hi kaha saba ji

Aap koi sher arz karey agla sher mai pesh karta hu


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aap beher aor sheir dein taakey silsila aagey barhaya jaye
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Aadaab mohtaram khavateen aur hazraat

Shayad guzishta behr thoda mushkil laga bohat se logo ko aisa mujhe ehsaas hua

Chaliye ek bohat hi maqbool behr ke saath mehfil ka phir se aaghaaz kiya jaaye

Pesh-e-khidmat ek naya behr

Behr-e-mutaqaarib musammam salim

فعولن فعولن فعولن فعولن
فعولن فعولن فعولن فعولن

Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun
Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun Fa'uu'lun

122 122 122 122
122 122 122 122

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Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)


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buhet achi beher aor sheir bhi buhet achaa hey mujahid sahib

Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
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Aadaab mohtaram khavateen aur hazraat

Shayad guzishta behr thoda mushkil laga bohat se logo ko aisa mujhe ehsaas hua

Chaliye ek bohat hi maqbool behr ke saath mehfil ka phir se aaghaaz kiya jaaye

Pesh-e-khidmat ek naya behr

Behr-e-mutaqaarib musammam salim

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Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
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Bahot khoobsoorat behar aur sher mujahid sahab shukriya apka.....



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Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
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chaley aayo key raah tuktey sitaarey
binaa chand key hain adhurey nazaare
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Ana ki jagah ho na ab ulfato.n me
Milei.n jitne pal, chahto.n me guzarei.n.(madhu)



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Bohat hi khoobsurat sher madhu ji aur saba sahiba

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Baaqi membraan se pur-khuloos guzarish hai iss ghazal ko kamyaab banaiye aur sahi anjaam tak pohchaye
Shukriya mujahid sahab.......................



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chaley aayo key raah tuktey sitaarey
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3rd sher

Na kar tu mere yaado ko yu hi gharat
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Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
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Ana ki jagah ho na ab ulfato.n me
Milei.n jitne pal, chahto.n me guzarei.n.(MADHU)

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Bahot khoob dosto.n..agli koshish pesh hai..

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Matla
Kami na rahey darmiyaaN ab hamarey
Chalo ab mita dey giley shikwe saarey (MUJAHID)

1st sher
chaley aayo key raah tuktey sitaarey
binaa chand key hain adhurey nazaare (SABA)

2nd sher
Ana ki jagah ho na ab ulfato.n me
Milei.n jitne pal, chahto.n me guzarei.n.(MADHU)

3rd sher
Na kar tu mere yaado ko yu hi gharat
Mai zinda hu inn yaado ke hi saharey (MUJAHID)

4th sher
mai tanha rahu gee terey saath main bhi
na mil paaye gai ab sitarey hamarey
(sabaa)

5th sher..
Nahi sath jo ham to mayoos har shai
Chalo sath mil ke chaman ye nikharei.n(madhu)



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