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21st August 2016, 11:14 PM

kirdaar ko lekar ek aur koshish..

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baa-kirdaar rehta tha ye jab tak humhara tha
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kirdaar ko lekar ek aur koshish..

baa-kirdaar rehta tha ye jab tak humhara tha
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3rd September 2016, 10:27 AM

Chaliye dosto mehfil ko aagey badhate hai

Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

Word: Gauhar/گوہر
Meaning: pearl/moti/virtue/quality

Khush naseebo ko mohabbat ki inaayat milti hai
Jo mila hai mujh ko tum vo gauhar-e-nayaab ho

خوش نصیبوں کو محبّت کی عنایت ملتی ہیں
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Chaliye dosto mehfil ko aagey badhate hai

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Word: Gauhar/گوہر
Meaning: pearl/moti/virtue/quality

Khush naseebo ko mohabbat ki inaayat milti hai
Jo mila hai mujh ko tum vo gauhar-e-nayaab ho

خوش نصیبوں کو محبّت کی عنایت ملتی ہیں
جو ملا ہے مجھ کو تُم وہ گوہرِ نایاب ہو
umdaa lafz pesh kiya hai janaab sabhi doston se darkhwaast hai ki apne apne sher/ghazal/nazm pesh karne is haseen alfaaz ko lekar..



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buhet acha wordaor buhet acha sher mujahid sahib


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Word: Gauhar/گوہر
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Khush naseebo ko mohabbat ki inaayat milti hai
Jo mila hai mujh ko tum vo gauhar-e-nayaab ho

خوش نصیبوں کو محبّت کی عنایت ملتی ہیں
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muhabbat ke seep se jo milaa hamkoh
wo hi toh ek aabdaare goher tum ho
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6th September 2016, 09:15 AM

gauhar-e-ashk haal-e-dil bepardah bataate the
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6th September 2016, 04:36 PM

bahut khoob lafz diya mujahid sahab aur khoob sher kahein aap sab ne....

Daad qubool karein doston...



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22nd September 2016, 10:17 AM

Mehfil tham si gayi hai socha agle alfaaz ka waqt aa gaya aur jo lafz zehan mein hai vo kehne ko seedha bhi hai par asal mein bahut gehraa hai is par apne sher zaroor rakhiyegaa

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Waaahhhh khoobsoorat lafz chuna hai anu...

Aur bahot khoob sher hua hai.....

Kuch is qadar tanhaiiyo.n ka sath hai raha
Apna hee aks aiine me dekh dar gaye............



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Buhet achaa word buhet acha shair qasid sahib


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madhu ji buhet achaa shair likha hey ap ney buhet khoob...


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Aks e khushbu hu bikherney sey na roukey koee
Aor bikher jayun to mujhkoh na sametey koee
Perween shakir


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Kuch is qadar tanhaiiyo.n ka sath hai raha
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Umdaa sher Madhu....guzaarish hai is thought ko aage badhaayein



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غضب ہے منظرِ شب تاب یا افسونِ الفت ہیں؛
نگاہیں جب کھلے بس عکسِ جاناں ہی نظر آئے؛

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Pyar pher aor bhi nikher jata
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Khubsoorut sheir mujahid saheb.....


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Gazab hai manzar-e-shab-taab ya afsoon-e-ulfat hai
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Gazab hai manzar-e-shab-taab ya afsoon-e-ulfat hai
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Bahut umdaa bhai....yunhi likhte rahiye



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Bahot khoob peshkash saba ji.....

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غضب ہے منظرِ شب تاب یا افسونِ الفت ہیں؛
نگاہیں جب کھلے بس عکسِ جاناں ہی نظر آئے؛

Gazab hai manzar-e-shab-taab ya afsoon-e-ulfat hai
Nigaahe jab khuley bas aks-e-jaanaaN hi nazar aaye (MUJAHID)

Manzar-e-shab-taab= roshan raat ka nazaara
Afsoon-e-ulfat= magic of love

Waaahh !!!kya baat hai.......



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Umdaa sher Madhu....guzaarish hai is thought ko aage badhaayein
Bahot shukriya anu....

Apka hukm sar ankhon par janaab.....koshish karoongi..

Filhaal ek chhoti si koshish aur..

Dil ye tanhaii me bhi ab nahi tanha hota
Aks tera nahi ankhon ko bhigone deta......



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30th September 2016, 01:06 AM

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Bahot shukriya anu....

Apka hukm sar ankhon par janaab.....koshish karoongi..

Filhaal ek chhoti si koshish aur..

Dil ye tanhaii me bhi ab nahi tanha hota
Aks tera nahi ankhon ko bhigone deta......
bahut khoob daad qubool farmiye is haseen sher pe..............



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Dosto chaliye mehfil ko aagey badhate hai

Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

Word: GumaaN/gumaan/گمان/گماں
Meaning: Doubt/suspicion/khayaal


Na jaane hota hai kyu ab haqeeqat pe gumaaN mujh ko
Fareeb-e-chashm lagta hai ye tasveer-e-jahaaN mujh ko(MUJAHID)

GumaaN= doubt
Fareeb-e-chashm=illusion of eyes


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buhet acha wordmujahid sahib
buhet acha sheir bhi
Ye ajeeb Khail hai pyar ka , main ne aap dekha ye Mojzaa
Wo jo lafz mere Gumaan mein Thay , wo teri Zubaan pe aa Gaye

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Dosto chaliye mehfil ko aagey badhate hai

Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

Word: GumaaN/gumaan/گمان/گماں
Meaning: Doubt/suspicion/khayaal


Na jaane hota hai kyu ab haqeeqat pe gumaaN mujh ko
Fareeb-e-chashm lagta hai ye tasveer-e-jahaaN mujh ko(MUJAHID)

GumaaN= doubt
Fareeb-e-chashm=illusion of eyes
Waah khoob lafz diya hai mujahid sahab...aur bahot khoob sher kaha............



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buhet acha sheir bhi
Ye ajeeb Khail hai pyar ka , main ne aap dekha ye Mojzaa
Wo jo lafz mere Gumaan mein Thay , wo teri Zubaan pe aa Gaye

f ahmed faiz
Waaah waaah!!! Saba ji..Khoob sher pesh kiya hai faiz ahmed faiz ka...........



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madhu ji buhet shukria
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Gumaan teri muhabbat ka mujhe barbaad kar dega
tujhe masoom keh dega mujhe sayyaad kar dega......

Doston mehfil ko aage badhaaye aapke agle sher ka intezaar rahegaa



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tujhe masoom keh dega mujhe sayyaad kar dega......

Doston mehfil ko aage badhaaye aapke agle sher ka intezaar rahegaa
Waah waah!!! bahut khoob.........



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Waah waah!!! bahut khoob.........
shukriyaa Madhu...

Mehfil ko agle sher ka betaabi se intezaar hai



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Doston,

Agle sher ke intezaar mein tha lagta hai Gumaan ki taqdeer mein ek sher kam hai...to chaliye agle alfaaz ko mehfil mein rakhte hai...agla lafz hoga 'bebaak'

Ek sher arz kar raha hoon umeed hai pasand aayegaa

Bahut bebaak hai armaan tahnaa hai.n akele hai.n
magar vo shokh na jaane yeh ulfat ke jhamele hai.n



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1st December 2016, 05:38 PM

Waah...bahot khoob lafz diya qasid sahab........

Aur behtareen sher pesh kiya hai.......bahot khoob....



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