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next word is ye
ye intzaar na thahra koi bala thahri
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rabt mai bhi ik tasalsal chahiye
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rabt mai bhi ik tasalsal chahiye
zabt bhi to phir musalsal chahiye
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Ye na ho ki zabt ki bhi inteha ho jaye ab
Hai guzarish aapse aise sitam na dhaiye..(.madhu)

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yaarub merey zabt ki intiha ker dey
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yaarub merey zabt ki intiha ker dey
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next word ye
ye fiqraye chalen ye ghaaten ye baatein
tujhe o daGabaaz ham jante hain..

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ye fiqraye chalen ye ghaaten ye baatein
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hafeez jaunpuri..

next ha....
Bahut khoob....agla sher dekhiye

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next la..



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waahhh kya baat hai......

ye rabta ye silsila ye apse hame gila
faqat ye dil ki baatei.n hai.n kya apne bas me hai bhala?

next la..
Bahut khoob Madhu agla sher dekhiye

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Bahut khoob Madhu agla sher dekhiye

la-ilm sa pada mila khaak sa ye dil mera
kabse ye ha'shr hai bewajah muskuraa raha

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Bahot khoob...

Hamse kya ho poochte ye shokh dil ki adatein
Muskara diya kabhi zara aur kabhi khafa raha....

Madhu..

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Bahot khoob...

Hamse kya ho poochte ye shokh dil ki adatein
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Madhu..

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Next ha again
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Tere aage na kuch nazar aaya
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yaa rab! Gam-e-hijraa.N me.n itanaa to kiyaa hotaa
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Tumko jo bhula pati to awwal ye kaam tha
Par kya karun ki koshishein nakaam huyi hain...

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Waah!!!

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Madhu..

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haathon ke tere haath ne kuch aisa hai chuuaa
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Next ha again...
Waah bahot khoob anu....

Phir se ha...

Ham hosh me jo hote koi aur baat karte
Chhukar u.nhe nasha hua utra na phir kabhi............

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Waah bahot khoob anu....

Phir se ha...

Ham hosh me jo hote koi aur baat karte
Chhukar u.nhe nasha hua utra na phir kabhi............

Next..bh
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Vah sunita ji

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Sabaa ji khoob hai...assuming next is 'na'

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Sabaa ji khoob hai...assuming next is 'na'

na tumse kuch gila na zamaane se hai humdum
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ruswaayi zindagi se kuch aise nibhaayi humne

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27th September 2016, 09:24 PM

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