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Ham Rehte Hai Kitabo Me Sukhe Hue Gulaab Ki Tarah - 12th October 2016, 09:17 PM

Ishq Ne Diya Hamein Ye Thikana Kisi Inaam Ki Tarah..!!
Ham Rehte Hai Kitabo Me Sukhe Hue Gulaab Ki Tarah..!!

Umrr To Dhal Gai Hai Par Mohabbat Ka Asar To Dekho..!!
Wo Hamein Aaj Bhi Lagte Hai Roshan Mehtaab Ki Tarah..!!

Jab Kabhi Basaya Tha Unho Ne Hamein Apni Nazro Me..!!
Khub Chamakti Thi Unki Aankhein Kisi Aaftaab Ki Tarah..!!

Yun To Koi Aisi Dilkash Baat Nahi Hai Meri Ankho Me..!!
Phir Bhi Log Ise Padhte Hai Mohabbat Ki Kitaab Ki Tarah..!!

Bhot Acha Lagta Hai Hamein Tanhai Me Rehna SAFREEN..!!
Ishq Ne Diya Hai Hamein Ye Thikana Kisi Inaam Ki Tarah..!!


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13th October 2016, 03:02 PM

Bohat khoob azaz bhai
har baar ki tarah bohat umda takhayyul raha
Lekin zara matle mai qafiya pe gaur farmaiye


Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye

Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch
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13th October 2016, 03:14 PM

buhet acha likhaa aap ney azaz saheb
maqtey mai inaam word rawani main likh gaey aap
over all buhet achee ghazal rahi


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13th October 2016, 04:41 PM

Mein To Aksar Dil Ki Baat Dil Ki Kalam Se Likh Leta Hu Shahab...

Ye Qafiyaa Aur Raawani To Shyaar Log Dhyaan Me Rakhte Hai..

Bahar Hal Agli Bar Inshallah Dhyan Me rahegi Aapki Baatein.. Sukriya.. Mujhahid Shahab.. Aur Saba Ji
   
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13th October 2016, 07:47 PM

bahot acchaa likhaa hai aapne..... jaisa ke baaz shoraa ne farmaaya , qaafiyaa par dhyaan dene ki zaroorat hai......

khush rahen,

Shaad......


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17th October 2016, 07:58 AM

bahot khoob jazbaat pesh kiye hai azaz sahab.....

Aage bhi intzaar rahega..

Aate rahein...



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20th October 2016, 09:59 PM

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Ishq Ne Diya Hamein Ye Thikana Kisi Inaam Ki Tarah..!!
Ham Rehte Hai Kitabo Me Sukhe Hue Gulaab Ki Tarah..!!

Umrr To Dhal Gai Hai Par Mohabbat Ka Asar To Dekho..!!
Wo Hamein Aaj Bhi Lagte Hai Roshan Mehtaab Ki Tarah..!!

Jab Kabhi Basaya Tha Unho Ne Hamein Apni Nazro Me..!!
Khub Chamakti Thi Unki Aankhein Kisi Aaftaab Ki Tarah..!!

Yun To Koi Aisi Dilkash Baat Nahi Hai Meri Ankho Me..!!
Phir Bhi Log Ise Padhte Hai Mohabbat Ki Kitaab Ki Tarah..!!

Bhot Acha Lagta Hai Hamein Tanhai Me Rehna SAFREEN..!!
Ishq Ne Diya Hai Hamein Ye Thikana Kisi Inaam Ki Tarah..!!


.. Azaz AHMAD..

Kya baat hai Azaz Saheb.... Bohot Khoob....


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11th November 2016, 12:14 PM

Bhot Bhot Sukriya Aap Sabhi Shorao Ka..
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14th November 2016, 09:46 AM

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Ishq Ne Diya Hamein Ye Thikana Kisi Inaam Ki Tarah..!!
Ham Rehte Hai Kitabo Me Sukhe Hue Gulaab Ki Tarah..!!

Umrr To Dhal Gai Hai Par Mohabbat Ka Asar To Dekho..!!
Wo Hamein Aaj Bhi Lagte Hai Roshan Mehtaab Ki Tarah..!!

Jab Kabhi Basaya Tha Unho Ne Hamein Apni Nazro Me..!!
Khub Chamakti Thi Unki Aankhein Kisi Aaftaab Ki Tarah..!!

Yun To Koi Aisi Dilkash Baat Nahi Hai Meri Ankho Me..!!
Phir Bhi Log Ise Padhte Hai Mohabbat Ki Kitaab Ki Tarah..!!

Bhot Acha Lagta Hai Hamein Tanhai Me Rehna SAFREEN..!!
Ishq Ne Diya Hai Hamein Ye Thikana Kisi Inaam Ki Tarah..!!


.. Azaz AHMAD..


wahhhhhhhh bahut khoob likha hai aapne, ehsaas pasand aaye..........


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Ishq Ne Diya Hamein Ye Thikana Kisi Inaam Ki Tarah..!!
Ham Rehte Hai Kitabo Me Sukhe Hue Gulaab Ki Tarah..!!

Umrr To Dhal Gai Hai Par Mohabbat Ka Asar To Dekho..!!
Wo Hamein Aaj Bhi Lagte Hai Roshan Mehtaab Ki Tarah..!!

Jab Kabhi Basaya Tha Unho Ne Hamein Apni Nazro Me..!!
Khub Chamakti Thi Unki Aankhein Kisi Aaftaab Ki Tarah..!!

Yun To Koi Aisi Dilkash Baat Nahi Hai Meri Ankho Me..!!
Phir Bhi Log Ise Padhte Hai Mohabbat Ki Kitaab Ki Tarah..!!

Bhot Acha Lagta Hai Hamein Tanhai Me Rehna SAFREEN..!!
Ishq Ne Diya Hai Hamein Ye Thikana Kisi Inaam Ki Tarah..!!


.. Azaz AHMAD..
Umdaa ehsaas azaz bhai, mehfil mein yunhi apne khayaal rakhte rahiyegaa



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27th November 2016, 10:03 PM

Bhot Bhot Sukriya Qasid Bhai Aur Sunita Ji.. Jaan Kar Khusi Hui Ke Aapko Mere Ehsaans Pasand Aaye..
   
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