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Baitbaazi - 3rd May 2007, 12:57 PM



DostoN riyaayati baitbaaazi meiN aap ka swaagat hai.. yahaaN Sher ke aakhir akshyar(in hindi) se aap ko naya Sher kahna hai kisii bhii ustaad ka.. Jaise kii.,...... "yaaro.n" agar last word hai tho, aap ko "R" se shair start karna hai

ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
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yaa rab! Gam-e-hijraa.N me.n itanaa to kiyaa hotaa
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4th May 2007, 12:56 PM

wel come mausam

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hai duaa yaad magar harf-e-duaa yaad nahii.n
mere naGmaat ko a.ndaaz-e-navaa yaad nahii.n

mai.n ne palako.n se dar-e-yaar pe dastak dii hai
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Ra>>>>



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arz-e-niyaaz*-e-ishq ke qaabil nahii.n rahaa
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jaataa huu.N daaG-e-hasarat-e-hastii liye hue
huu.N shammaa-e-kushtaa** daraKhur***-e-mahafil nahii.n rahaa

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mayankjee ek baat aapne jo apni post me hi fi urdu istemaal ki hain woh agar meanings ke saath likhe to mere jaiso ke liye accha hoga...

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jaataa huu.N daaG-e-hasarat-e-hastii liye hue
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Sunita jee aap khud ke Sher bhi likh sakte haiN.. aur kisii aur ke bhii..

Sunita jee>>> yaa

yaa to miT jaa_iye yaa miTaa diijiye
kiijiye jab bhii saudaa kharaa kiijiye

ab jafaa kiijiye yaa wafaa kiijiye
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sauda:deal
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hi fi urdu ??? : yeh kya hota hai??? chaliye aage har post meiN, maiN difficult words ke matlab saath meiN likh duNga... TC

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ab samjh meiN aa gaya, aap ka hi-fi urdu se matlab:

koShish karuuNga kii aage aasaan likhuuN ....

ek Sher arz kiye deta huuN...

ii>>>

ek nazar dekh ke ham jaan gaye
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koShish karuuNga kii aage aasaan likhuuN ....

ek Sher arz kiye deta huuN...

ii>>>

ek nazar dekh ke ham jaan gaye
aap kyaa chiiz hai.n pahachaan gaye


ye>>>
humne kab kaha asan sher likhe..likheye hi fi..par meanings bhi to likheye... dictionary mein meanings kaun dhundhe...

waise lagta hain yeh uparwala sher aapne hi likha hoga..kyun????

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Yeh Sher mera nahiiN hai, kahiiN paRha tha, aap ko paRh kar dhyaan meiN aa gaya... waise Sher ki pasandagii ke liye Shukriyah!

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hmm.... jee haaN par thoRa thoRa.....

well.. aap ne Sher meiN 'hain' likha hai woh dar-asal 'hai' hona chaahiye..(shaayad)

haiN>>>

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yeah right 'hai' hi hain..maine likhne me galti kar di....

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haaN, mujhe laga kii 'hai' hi hona chaahiye, kyuN kii singular words use huye haiN.. aur singular meiN 'hai' lagta hai, 'haiN' nahiiN.. ek baat aur, mausam, baitbaazi meiN aap ko last words ke aakhiri letter ko lena hai.. lekin Hindi ka, Roman ka nahiiN... Jaise kii aaNkheN heiN.. to last letter huaa 'kheN' i.e 'kha' means 2nd alphabet of hindi consonent..

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achhha guruji age se hindi aur roman pe dhyan rakhungi warna aap to hain hi batane ke liye

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hahahaha. guru jee..... Guru jee lafz se ek buRhe aadmi kii tashveer nazroN meiN aa jaati hai aur maiN....... ess liye Guru jee mat kaho.... haaaN GhaltiyoN ke liye, maiN huuN na...



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heeeeeeeeeee aaap ladke hoke bhi age conscious hain aam taur pe ladkiyan aise karti hain aap bhi chalo hum samajh sakte hain kya feel hota hain so no gurujee....only mayankjee ab theek hain...

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heeeeeeeeeee aaap ladke hoke bhi age conscious hain aam taur pe ladkiyan aise karti hain aap bhi chalo hum samajh sakte hain kya feel hota hain so no gurujee....only mayankjee ab theek hain...

to ke>>>>>(y yaha silent hain right????)

keh rahii hai hashr mein vo aankh sharmaai hui
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age conscious kii baat nahiiN hai, baat hai Guru jee kii hai.. ab aap ek jawaan insaan ko buRha bana deNgii to yeh to na-insaafii hogii.... kyuN hai na? waise mayank jee kyaa, mayank bhii chalegaa..

aap ne sahii kaha 'y' silent hai, lagta hai kaafi aage jaaYeNgii.. .

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ohhh same galati dobaaraa!!!ab kya kiya jaaye??
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aap ne sahii kaha 'y' silent hai, lagta hai kaafi aage jaaYeNgii.. .

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yeh baat aapki galat hain...maine aapko sirf gurujee kaha...ab aapne guruji ko budha bana diya usmein mein kuch nahin keh sakti,, aur aisa zaroori nahin guruji budha hi ho....college mein sir aur student ke bich bahut kam fasala hota hain waise mayank hi theek rahega... kabhi kabhi jee bhi laga liya karungi......(sanman dene ke liye)

dekha apne sikhaya hi itna badhiya so first round maine pass kar liya gurujee(

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le chalaa jaan merii ruuTh ke jaanaa teraa
aise aane se to behatar thaa na aanaa teraa


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le chalaa jaan merii ruuTh ke jaanaa teraa
aise aane se to behatar thaa na aanaa teraa


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