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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
lutf ye wo jo faqat mausam-e-hijraaN meiN mile
wasl se zyaada khushi wasl ke imkaaN meiN mile
teri jaanib se humeiN koyee ishaara mil jaaye
deeda-e-tar meiN mile ya lab-e-khandaaN meiN mile
phir se jeene ki hai hasrat se uthee kyooN “zarraa”
us ke kya naqsh-e-qadam gor-e-gareebaaN meiN mile
hazrat ko khaaksaar ka aadaab.... kya kahun kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai... ek to aapko dobara yahan dekhne ki khushi duusrii is nayaab kalaam ko padh kar ke bayaani ke baahar ho gayaa hai..... kya kahun miyaaN kya chaaNt chaanT ke sher kahe hain aapne.. waahh Subhan allah is tahreer ke kyaa kehne........
uupar kahe gaye sheroN pe dil se yakbayaq waahhh nikalta gayaa...
hum ne to sair gulistaaN ki hai chhorhee kab se
mujh se milna ho jise aa ke bayaabaaN meiN mile
is sher ko ek baar dekhen... saani ke Mujh ki jagah hum kar leiN to dono misre milte nazar aayenge.....
is purkhuloos ghazal ke liye tahe dil se daad peshe khidmat hain bhai.... tashreef laanee ke liye shukrguzaar hoon... aate rahen.. apne nagmon se mehfil me chaar chaand lagaate raheN....
Shukriyaa...... apna khayaal rakkheN...
Shaad...............
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Bhai Shaad ... Itne waqt ke baad tum se guftagoo kar ke kitna acchha lag raha hai, bata bhi naheen sakta aur bataane ki zaroorat bhi naheen hai shaayad. Awwal to is bazm ki tumhein rehnumaayee karte huwe dekh kar behad khushi huwee kyunki tum ek aalaa darje ke shayar ho, ek nek insaan ho aur ek "enthu character" bhi
... jo hum jaise thake haaron se bhi thorhee mehnat mashakkat karwa lete hain !!!
meri sabhi duaein tumhare saath hain, aur is bazm aur uske saathiyon ke saath bhi...
Bhai tum ne jis dil se jis shauq se jis mohabbat se is ghazal ko parha aur apnaaya ... aur jitni dariyadilee se taareef ke, uska shukriya ada karne ke liye alfaaz kam bhi parh gaye hain aur na parhte to kaafee na hote.
Aur haan, wo "hum" aur "mujh" waala point jo apne rakha hai, wo ek dum valid baat kahi hai ... urdu adab mein waqayee ek hi sher mein sambodhan ke do forms ko mix naheen karte. Thx for pointing out. Asal mein, main saanee ko "hum" se shuroo karna avoid kar raha tha taaki repetitive na lage aur sher mein ek verbal twist ka ehsaas ho, isiliye ye galti huwee ho shayad. Isko kuchh is tarah kehne ka soch raha hoon ..... "jis ko milna hai humeiN aa ke bayaabaaN meiN mile"
Ummeed hai baakee sab khairiyat se hoga .... Apna khayaal rakhna .... Take care !!! Zarraa