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Love Loug aesey kub bhulaaye jaatey hein - 19th September 2016, 11:17 PM

Kub ye Aankhon sey bahaaye jaatey hein
Dard toh dil mai chupaaye jaatey hein

Sach ki khatir hi jo jeetey martey hon
Loug aesey kub bhilaaye jaatey hein

Lout aaney kaa nahin garchey yakeen
Aas pher bhi kyo jagaaye jaatey hein

Yun piroya hey unheyb her saans mai
Aur pher sub ghum bhulaaye jaatey hein

Joh mohebat koh hi samjhey zindagi
Loug kia aesey bhi paaye jaatey hein
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20th September 2016, 11:59 AM

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Kub ye Aankhon sey bahaaye jaatey hein
Dard toh dil mai chupaaye jaatey hein

Sach ki khatir hi jo jeetey martey hon
Loug aesey kub bhilaaye jaatey hein

Lout aaney kaa nahin garchey yakeen
Aas pher bhi kyo jagaaye jaatey hein

Yun piroya hey unheyb her saans mai
Aur pher sub ghum bhulaaye jaatey hein

Joh mohebat koh hi samjhey zindagi
Loug kia aesey bhi paaye jaatey hein
Sabaa
Waaaah!!!! Saba ji..dheron daad aapko is khoobsoorat kalaam par...har sher mere dil ko khoob bhaya...bahot achcha andaaz...aur ehsaas.....

Likhti rahiye.....



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Kub ye Aankhon sey bahaaye jaatey hein
Dard toh dil mai chupaaye jaatey hein

Sach ki khatir hi jo jeetey martey hon
Loug aesey kub bhilaaye jaatey hein

Lout aaney kaa nahin garchey yakeen
Aas pher bhi kyo jagaaye jaatey hein

Yun piroya hey unheyb her saans mai
Aur pher sub ghum bhulaaye jaatey hein

Joh mohebat koh hi samjhey zindagi
Loug kia aesey bhi paaye jaatey hein
Sabaa
Bohat la-jawaab kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne saba ji

Saadgi aur ehsaas ka behtareen muraqqab hai aapki ye ghazal

Allah karey aapke kalaam mai aur pukhtagi aaye
   
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20th September 2016, 02:03 PM

Sabaa jee

Namaste

Bahot khoob likhaa hay aapne.. Dil se daad... Likhte rahiye aage bhee...

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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20th September 2016, 04:07 PM

Buhet buhet shukria madhu aapka yon housla barhati rahien ga

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Waaaah!!!! Saba ji..dheron daad aapko is khoobsoorat kalaam par...har sher mere dil ko khoob bhaya...bahot achcha andaaz...aur ehsaas.....

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Buhet shukria mujahid saheb
Yunhi sath dete rahiye housla afzayi key liye
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Buhet shukria dhaval saheb .....
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Sabaa jee

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Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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21st September 2016, 12:41 PM

Sabaa....bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas padne ka mokka mila...sabhi ehsaas tareef ke kabil hai, par jo mere dil ke khaas kareeb rha, wo hai :

Lout aaney kaa nahin garchey yakeen
Aas pher bhi kyo jagaaye jaatey hein


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Sunita jee dhanevaad shukria apka
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Kub ye Aankhon sey bahaaye jaatey hein
Dard toh dil mai chupaaye jaatey hein

Sach ki khatir hi jo jeetey martey hon
Loug aesey kub bhilaaye jaatey hein

Lout aaney kaa nahin garchey yakeen
Aas pher bhi kyo jagaaye jaatey hein

Yun piroya hey unheyb her saans mai
Aur pher sub ghum bhulaaye jaatey hein

Joh mohebat koh hi samjhey zindagi
Loug kia aesey bhi paaye jaatey hein
Sabaa


waahh saba saahibaa... kamaal ka kalaam likhaa hai aapne is baar ke bas waah hi waahh nikal raha hai..... likhtii rahen.... khush rahen

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Saba jii aapne bahut hi umda kalam. Pesh kiya he

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shukriaa shaad saheb buhet buhet shuqriaa...

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buhet buhet shuqriaa shakir saheb aapkaa ...
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