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Hi ye kya kar baithey hai…………………… -
11th May 2005, 08:40 PM
Tere sab jhootho ko such samjh baithey they
Hi ye kya kar baithey hai…………………… Apne hi haathon se apni kabar bana baithey hai Hi ye kya kar baithey hai…………………………. Teri khatir me ab khud ko mitaane chali hoon Apne sab sapno ko kabar me dafnane chali hoon Tu milaa na jab mujhe is duniyaa me ye dil mere Isliye mein duniyaa se apne nisha mitane chali hoon sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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11th May 2005, 08:49 PM
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You do not know me..... But I know a bit about you.... AAp Ko agar maloom nahi to aap ek Strict NO Tolerance Zone mein kadam rakh rahi hain.... Kabar, Maut, Nishan mitane jaise shabdon ka prayog kar aap yahan ke logon se Daat khane wali hain.... Mein to yahi kahoonga... khoob dard bhara likha hai aapne.... Umeed hai Aapki zindagi mein aisa kuch na ho... Baki.... Pulkit, Kunal, Aman Bhai, Meena Di, Sab aapko samjh hi lenge aapki is gustakhi ke liye... Thanks Rohin Kuch jyada bol diya ho to uske liye maafi |
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11th May 2005, 09:03 PM
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mein bhi ye janti hun ki aap pul ke frnd ho aur jahan tak mujhe yaad hai hamne ek din kuch der chat ki hai. hey pls aap mujhe abhi se darao mat kyun ki abhi to mujhe hasi bhi aa gai apki ye ajab daant kha ke. thoda sa dar bhi lag gya hai ab ki kya hoga aage kyun ki ye meine post to kar di but suchhi ye nahi socha ki aage kya hoga bas mind me jo aaya likh dala. par yakeen maano mein bas un yaadoin ko yaa bato ko mita dungi aur ek new sakhi ko banane ki koshish karungi. haan man mein ye baatein aksar aati hai lekin bas kuch der ke liye hi. phir jab me likh leti hun to kuch halka ho jata hai. mein umeed karungi ki sab mujhe maaf kar denge mere in khyaalato ke liye. agar hua to mein jald hi khud ko naye roop mein aap sabke samne lane ki koshish karungi. shukriyaa aake yahn dard ko samjhne ke liye. aur haan mafi mangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai balki yaad dilane ke liye shukriyaa. apna khyaal rakhana aap khush rahna. sakhi with regards शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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11th May 2005, 09:38 PM
Rohin yaar ..
kuch kehne ka koi faida nahi.. maine socha tha meri dost meri sab bate manti hai .. par aaj pata laga .. ki woh bas unhe sunti hai ... kya faida aage keh kar.. aur madam aap .. kya kahooN ye hi bata do .. kya saoch kar post dal di .. ki sab aake tumhare is kalaam pe wah wah kareNge .. aisa karke bas tum humari umeedoN ko hi naakam karogi .. khair hume umeed aaj bhi hai aur humesha rahegi .. ab ye dekhna hai .. ki ek shakhs ehmiyat rakhta hai ya ek parivaar .. but ek bat jaroor .. dikhawe ke liye kuch mat karna .. jo karo dil se karna .. kyuNki mujhse na chupa sakogi tum kuch ... apna khayal rakhna tumhara dost kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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11th May 2005, 10:54 PM
Sakhi ji...!
Teer aapke to nikal gayi kamaan se... ab ek geet arz hai Amanush ke zoubaan se Chor de saari douniya kissi ke liye ye mounaseeb nahin aadmi ke liye Pyar se bhi zarouri kayi kaam hein pyar hi sab kouch nahin aadmi ke liye... Hum aap ke ouss naye roup ke intazaar main hein... jald hi ousse lete aaiye varna aapka kheir nahin!  Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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12th May 2005, 09:20 AM
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meri sakhi, ahesaas ka dard shabdo mai khub piroo paayi ho...... di. ............................ rohin, sakhi ki is rachna k liye tumne daantne walo mai mera bhi naam likha hai... kunu ne to aa kar apna gusaa jata bhi diya hai... pulkit ka gusaa bhi dekh chuki hu manaa ko kahte huae.... kc bhi abhi ise padh kar naraz huaa hai... par ...baat jaha tak meri hai..... mai kuch or khayal rakhti hu...... shayed jab bhi aap logo ko padhti hu... tab sirf vachak n rah kar.. maa, didi ya dost bhi hoti hu... kabhi kisi ko jyada sawaal nahi karti.. par oon k maan ko jaanna jaroor chahti hu... mere apne kis manjil par chal rahe hai... oon k kadam kaha pad rahe hai... oos k nishaan muje oonki kalam batati hai.. is liye mai oonhe kabhi likhne mai pabandhi nahi lagati... aap sab ki kalam padh kar hi to pata chalta hai k muje ab aage konsa kadam oothhana hai.. di |
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12th May 2005, 09:34 AM
tum bhi kabra pe likhne lag gayi ho
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12th May 2005, 10:27 AM
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sakhi ji, dard se bharpoor likha hai lekin sahi likha hai.. dard agar dil me umad aaye to use bahar nikaal hi dena chahiye man halka ho jaata hai .. to abhi to aapka dard bahar aa gaya ab ek achhi si kalam pesh kijiyega. Garima |
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12th May 2005, 10:31 AM
Sakhi......
khayalon ki kadr karta hoon......aur use likhne waale ki bhi..... jaisa ki Meena Di ne kaha......kisi ke khayalon pe paabandi nahi laga sakte.......aur unka nazariya bahut kum log hi samajh paaye hain....... Rohin ne sahi kaha hai.....Kunal ne bhi aakar keh diya...... Amanush bhai ne jo geet likha hai....jara us par bhi gaur kijiyega.....apne ird- gird dekhiye......kayi aise shaks paaogi.....jo tumhare saath is kadr jude hain......shayad tumhe bhi na pata ho.....unke dukh aur dard mein tumhe shaamil hona hai.....aur jis roz aisa hoga....tumhe lagega ki maine apni zindagi ko kis kadr sikod ke rakha hua hai....... Pulkit bhai ka maun sa jawab.....bus samajhne vaala hai..... ek dost jo dil ke kareeb ho.....aur kabhi Maut ka zikr kare to dil mein ek udaasi ki lehar si daud jaati hai..... koshish to yahi hai ki tum samajh sako mere in adhoore se alfaazon ko...... khush rahiye...... tumhara dost...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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12th May 2005, 11:12 AM
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EK Dum Maa ki tarah baat kari hai aapne.... Sahi Kaha di aapne....kissi ko likhne se rokne ki to meri bhi koi mansha nahi....kabhi kabhi jaise Sakhi ji ne kaha hai....Likhne se jee halka ho jaata hai....aur Parivaar mein hum sab to saath hain hi.... Bus Itna jyada likh diya Sakhi ji ne .... to meine Socha aap Sakhi ji ko daant kar ya Pyaar se Samjhayenge...ke aise Soch achi nahi hai....aise soch to aani bhi nahi chahiye Aur shayad aap pata kar lenge ke Wajah kya hai aise likhne ki... Aakhir aap Maa hai na.... ...Shukriya... Rohin |
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12th May 2005, 12:26 PM
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muje aur mere khayal ko samajne k liye shukria....di |
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12th May 2005, 01:19 PM
Hmmmn...
Sakhi...meri gudiyaa... ab main kya kahoon...sabne tau keh diya...meena di ne bhi...main bus hug dene chali aayi...woh bhi dher mithhiyon ke saath...shayad tumhara dard chuu mantar kar doon...kuch pal ke liye... aur sab log pyaar karte hain tumse isliye yeh sab kaha...kisi raah chalte pe thode hee haq jataayeinge apna...khayaal rakhna apna...nahin rakh sakti tau hum sabko rakhne do.... tumhari aapa >  <(yeh shimul ne hug karna sikhaya hai ) gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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13th May 2005, 12:36 AM
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acha ek baat batao agar tumhari bat na mani hoti to kya me tumhare saath hoti parsoin bolo bolo???  post to bas naa jane kyun daal di dil mein jo aya likhti gai aur send kiya yahn aur kuch nahi soch paai kyun ki us time man mein naa jane kya chal raha tha shayd jo likha wohi. mein janti hun koi wah wah nahi karega mere is qlaam par .naa mein kabhi wah wahi ke liye likhti hun.mein to bas dil mein aai bato ko dil halka karne ke liye likhti hun ye to mein hamesha hi kahti aai hun yahAn...... AAP SAB KI UMEEDOIN PAR MEIN NAAKAM HO yaisa din kabhi a laye bhagwaan bas yahi kah sakti hun isbaare mein aur kuch nahi kyun ki future to koi bhi nahi jaan sakta hai apna hai na??? hey mein ek baat aur kahungi tumse ki mein dikhawa pasand bhi nahi karti isliye jo karungi such mein karungi ok. aur haan ek baat batao mujhe agar ye pariwaar mere liye aham na hota to kya yahn mein apni saari feelings share karti????? bolo bolo........ nahi na ... to dear aap sab mere liye bahut mayne rakhte ho pahle bhi ab bhi .aur yun bhi mujhe jo mila yahi mila shayri mein.der saara pyaar bhi...aur ye bhi shayri hai jo mere dard ko bhi jagah deti hai. jo me kabhi kahin nahi kahti yahn kah deti hun aap sabse. tumse kabhi kuch chipaya hai aaj tak jo ab chipa lungi mein. tumhari dost sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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13th May 2005, 08:20 PM
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me ye baat hamesha yaad bhi rakhti hun such maniye.aur iska natiza hi hai ki mein bas likh kar rah jati hun kuch bhi. lekin na jane kyun apke geet ke ans mein mujhe ye geet yaad aa gya hai... tere bina jindgi se koi shikwa to nahi tere bina jindagi bhi lekin jindagi to nahi. andhi ka hai ye song. thanx yahn aake mujhe padne ke liye.aap ke kahe ke anusaar mein jald hi new hone ki koshish kar rahi hun. lol are mein dar gai hun ab aapse naa jane kya karo aap kheir manane ke liye badlna hoga ab to .lol sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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13th May 2005, 08:31 PM
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shukriya ahsaasoin ko samjh sakne ka aap hi top jaan sakti ho sakhi ke dard ko achi taraf shayad. di apka rohin ko diya ans mujhe andar tak bheego gya kyun ki apne ke dam such kaha hai kis ko roko mat jo dil mein hai woh to pata lag jayega uske likhne se. di saath dete rahna ap kyun ki apka saath hamesha chaiye mujhe. sakhi pyaar sahit शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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sach likha hai aapne -
13th May 2005, 09:44 PM
hello sakhi ji
umeed hai ki aap hume bhooli nahi hogi bahut din baad reply dene ke liye maafi ka huqdaar hoon par kaafi waqt se musibat hi kuch aisi thi ki online ho hi nahin saka mein ho sake to maaf ker dijiyega aapki hi rachana padi hai maine aaj kaafi din baad bahut achi likhi hai aapne aise hi likhti rahiye ga aapke reply ka intezaar karunga EK KATRA AASUN KA..... |
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ye to antim manjil hai isse bachke kahn ja sakti hun mein bhi.kyun ki kabar hi to shanti de sakegi mujhe last mein. kyun ki sabki antim manjil wohi hai. but tumse yahi kahungi mera ans +ve way meinlena haq se kuch bhi karoge manjoor dear frnd bye takecare शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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15th May 2005, 01:00 PM
Teri khatir me ab khud ko mitaane chali hoon
Apne sab sapno ko kabar me dafnane chali hoon Tu milaa na jab mujhe is duniyaa me ye dil mere Isliye mein duniyaa se apne nisha mitane chali hoon Dear Sakhi... Agar likhne ki baat karooN to achchha likha hai.. Lekin zara iss se upar nikal kar sochne ki kosish karna.. Zindagi khoobsoorat nazar aayegii.. Aur har taraf pyaar hi pyaar bikhra huaa milegaa... Ek puraana sher yaad aagaya.. Aaa Sikander-E-Hunar Aaazmayain Tu Teer Aaazmaaa, Hum Jigar Aaazmayain Take care.. MayanK |
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Sakhi ji.....Dard se mera daaman bhar de ya allah...fir chahe deewana kar de ya allah |
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Sakhi ji.....Dard se mera daaman bhar de ya allah...fir chahe deewana kar de ya allah -
15th May 2005, 01:34 PM
Sakhi ji,
Ghar se masjid(manzil) to hai bahot dooor....chalo yun kar lein..... kisi rote hue bachche ko hasaya jaye. poori duniya ko pyaar karo......sab ke dard ko samjo aur khushiyaan bant te chalo.....i batt.....apne dard ko aap bhool jaogi.... Pyaaar.....baant te chalo.....pyaaar bant te chalo...... Samajdaar ko ishara kaafi hota hai...... vaise is duniya me ishwar-khuda-jesus....ki marzi ke bina kuchh nahi hota.......aur maine suna hai....vo jo bhi karta hai achchhe ke liye hi karta hai.... aap ka kya vichaar hai is bareme? Trishna eka tarunayate.....matlab....wishes are the only things which keep growing only.... Vaise sorry agar maine kuchh zyada bhashan de diya ho....i know aap zyada samajdaar ho take care and Keeep smiliiiiing Jo humsafar hote hain.....vo bich safar me nahi chhoda karte.... aur jo bich safar me chhod jate hain...ba-khuda..vo humsafar nahi hua karte.... Thoda ma ghannu samaj jo saab ji.... -Ashish fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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15th May 2005, 02:45 PM
hi sakhi
its well written dard...or bebasi apna khiyal rkahna khan agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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mein janti hun koi wah wah nahi karega mere is qlaam par .naa mein kabhi wah wahi ke liye likhti hun.mein to bas dil mein aai bato ko dil halka karne ke liye likhti hun ye to mein hamesha hi kahti aai hun yahAn...... AAP SAB KI UMEEDOIN PAR MEIN NAAKAM HO yaisa din kabhi a laye bhagwaan bas yahi kah sakti hun isbaare mein aur kuch nahi kyun ki future to koi bhi nahi jaan sakta hai apna hai na???
Dear Sakhi, Beta ji...dost ji....Aap ke kalaam pe waah waah waah......waah waah waah.... Aapne bahot achchha likha hai....aur kavita ke lihaaz se...1000 waah waah hai aap ke liye.....Lekin....uske pichhe ke jazbaat humlogon ko satate hain.... Kyunki jo apne hote hain vo Apnon ke aansu samaj sakte hain....par unhe dekh nahi pate..taqleef hoti hai....Aur ye to shayaron ki family hai ji....humsab aap ko dard me nahi dekh sakte....kyunki jo dard ko samajte hain vahi shayar bante hain..... To ye to apno ki baat hai sakhi ji... varna....shayari ke lihaaz se....aap ki rachna ko 100-100 salaam.... likhti rahiye... aap ka, -Ashish fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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mera likha apko sahi laga aur kya kahun phi r mein apse jab aapne mera dard hi samjh liya. haan dard ko kisi na kisi taraf bahar karne ki koshish hamesha karti hoon sabko karni chahiye. ye liziye aapki baat lee hai meine garima ji aaj ek new post daali hai ab ye to nahi kahungi ki achi hai lekin haan dard utna nahi hai waki aap batana mera roop badla hai ya nahi meri is rachana mein. apko is naye roop ka link de rahi hoon mein....... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...threadid=35779 shukriya aane ke liye aur apna pyara saa reply dene ke liye. शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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15th May 2005, 11:10 PM
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khyaalo ki aur likhne wale ki kadr aap karte ho shukriyaa.... meena di ka nazariyaa mein samjh gai hoon aur bahut hi sahi nazriyaa hai unka.woh ek dam sahi sochti hai aman ji. rohin ne sahi kaha kunal ne bhi sahi kaha woh unka sahi nazriya tha.lekin mein ye bhi kahungi ki meine bhi jab likha to yahi laga tha ki mera nazriyaa bhi sahi hai lekin tab ye nahi socha ki kitno ko dukh hoga .ab jaan gai hoon ki yahn nahi daalna tha ye mera yahn daalne ka nazriyaa galat ho gya hai na?? amanush ji ke geet par kaphi dino se goar kar rahi hoon aur usi ki badolat kaphi madad mili. haan ye ho askta hai ki mein naa janti hoon ki kisi aur ko bhi mera saath dost ke roop mein ya kisi aur roop mein chahiye . haan mein unke dukh mein jarur shamil hona chahti hoon taki woh akele na rahe lekin ye bhi chahungi ki kisi dost ko koi gam na mile. woh khush rahe. pul ki bhawnao ko mein samjh sakti hoon. haan ye to hai dost ki muat ek gahra sadma hai aur jab yais baatein woh khud kare to kaisa lagega.sorry aap sabhi se bolna chahti hoon yaisa likhne par. par such batati hoon mein bhi nahi chahti ki yaisa kuch likhoon lekin naa jaane kyun ho jata hai yaisa. apne apne adhoore se lafjo mein mujhe sab samjha diya hai shukriya dost itne pyaar se pyara saa jawab dene ke liye . apki dost sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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Re: Re: Re: Hi ye kya kar baithey hai…………………… |
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Re: Re: Re: Hi ye kya kar baithey hai…………………… -
15th May 2005, 11:17 PM
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haan mee di maa hai ek yais jo bache ke dil ki baatein uske andaz se ya baatoin s elaga sake. unhone maa ke andaz mein hi socha bhi.aap sabka saath to mere liye kya hai nahi bata sakti mein abhi apko... kyun ki ye feel karti hoon mein.aur jab ye feellings kagaz par ayegi to aap jan jaoge shayad. sirf mee di hi nahi aapki sabki baatoin se mein samjh gai hun dost. bahut bahut shukriya itne pyaar se saath dene ka .ina apnapan to apno se hi milta hai na. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Hi ye kya kar baithey hai…………………… -
15th May 2005, 11:26 PM
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apko aur apke khyaal ko kaise na samjhe apse pyar jo hai hamein. sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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15th May 2005, 11:30 PM
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aap kuch mat kaho jab aap hug dene chali aai hoto bahut hai sakhi ke liye aapki saari baatein samjh gai woh. aapa apke gale lag sab bhool gai mein. shimul ne ache s ehug karna sikha diya hai chalo mujhe aap achi tarh hug de sakti ho ab hai na mein janti hoon sabne mujhse pyar mein yaisa kaha. unka bhi to haq hai na mujhpe.aur ye bhi sahiu hai apne hi haq jamate hai gair nahi. apki sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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17th May 2005, 11:01 PM
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mayank ji kaphi dinomein aap ko dekha hai khair mein bhi beech mein nahi aa paa rahi thi. kaise ho aap? uppar to nikaal rahi hoon khud ko mein.meri nai rachna meinaap mere new vichar pad sakte ho. apka sher bahut payar hai aur suchaa bhi. Aaa Sikander-E-Hunar Aaazmayain Tu Teer Aaazmaaa, Hum Jigar Aaazmayain aap bhi teer sahne mein saath dena pls.......just joking but saath dete rahna yuhi. kab kuch likhoge aap nya. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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Re: Sakhi ji.....Dard se mera daaman bhar de ya allah...fir chahe deewana kar de ya allah |
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Re: Sakhi ji.....Dard se mera daaman bhar de ya allah...fir chahe deewana kar de ya allah -
17th May 2005, 11:16 PM
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apne jo likha hai na ghar se masjid... mera feb sher hai woh. apka isara samjh gai mein .aapne itne kayde se jo samjhya hai to kyoon na samjh pati. sochti to mein bhi yahi thi woh jo karta hai acha karta hai lekin ab .............. nahi sorry ki koi baat nahi apne jo kaha acha kaha hai. thanx mujhe itne ache se samjhne ka. aur apki last ki lines to bahut hi such hai. yuhi saath dete rahiyega. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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22nd May 2005, 05:45 PM
Sakhi ji,
hamesha aap ke saath hain hum....agar aap humse chhoti ho to bada bhai maan lena....badi ho to chhota bhai maan lena.....Dard se bhari ho to hum dard maan lena......... Samajna chahti ho to dard maan lena... aapka -Ashish fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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22nd May 2005, 06:04 PM
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hi ashish ji chalo meine apko woh sab maana jo apne likha hai. aap hamesha saath hai to kya baat hai.samjhna bhi chahungi dard maan ke . apna khyaal rakhna ok bye sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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31st May 2005, 11:00 PM
Jab zarurat pade pukaar lena.......maine jab pukara tha to koi nahi aaya tha.....isliye im committed to be right there when someone needs........
Dard to dard hota hai.......aur utni hi taqleef deta hai.....chahe apna ho ya kisi aur ka........bass samajna padta hai.....mehsoos to vo ho hi jata hai.....bass insaan hona zaruri hai..... fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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5th June 2005, 05:11 PM
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good one sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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5th June 2005, 09:37 PM
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jarur pukar loongi mein apko. haan dard inshaan hi jaan sakta hai bas. bye शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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5th June 2005, 09:43 PM
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sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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16th June 2005, 08:40 PM
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Ashish Ji "Dard to dard hota hai.......aur utni hi taqleef deta hai.....chahe apna ho ya kisi aur ka........bass samajna padta hai.....mehsoos to vo ho hi jata hai.....bass insaan hona zaruri hai..... " Bahut badee baat kahee aapne.. bahut bada dil hai aapka. Kyonki adhiktar log .. kisi aur ka dard bhi utna hi samjh paate hain..jitna apne dard se ose relate kar sakein.. ek line suni thee koun rota hai ksi aur k liye ..sabko apni hi kisi baat pe rona aya.... baarahaa aise sawalaat pe rona aya. Kehna padega aap jaise log kam hote hain ".......maine jab pukara tha to koi nahi aaya tha.....isliye im committed to be right there when someone needs........" Forgive me for saying but shayad galat disha me pukara hoga aapne...... sabki aur aapki bhi life me i`m sure aise log hain..jinhe pukariyega tou ..saath samunder paar se ayenge ..ek awaaz pe Zindagi me apno ko pehchaniye ..aur jo apne nahi hain... unk baare me mat sochiye.. .. such ppl don deserve yr precious thoughts .....apne apno ki khatir ... Good luck !! |
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19th June 2005, 12:38 PM
I apreciate your words angel ji
,Angel is quite meaningful....-Ashish fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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20th June 2005, 06:12 AM
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aaj bhi bahut se yaise log hai jo sbka dukh apna samjhte hai aur use utni hi siddat ke saath mahsoos karte hai jaise ki apna dukh hai woh. haan sabko jeena padta hai apne apno ki khatir. apne acha song yaad dila diya hai. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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21st June 2005, 09:11 PM
Mere sweet doll
Yeh kya likh diya sakhi........itna dard bhara......khuda karey tum sada muskurao............ Tere sab jhootho ko such samjh baithey they Hi ye kya kar baithey hai…………………… Apne hi haathon se apni kabar bana baithey hai Hi ye kya kar baithey hai…………………………. Teri khatir me ab khud ko mitaane chali hoon Apne sab sapno ko kabar me dafnane chali hoon Tu milaa na jab mujhe is duniyaa me ye dil mere Isliye mein duniyaa se apne nisha mitane chali hoon Bahut acha likha hay sakhi mere daad kabul karna........khuda karey tumhari Zindagi mein kushian hi kushian ho aur gum duur ho jaye. Keep Smiling ......keep writing |
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21st June 2005, 11:56 PM
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apki daad mere sir ankhoin per apne meri khushiyaa chahi aap sabki khushi mein mein bhi khush hoon thk hai na. didi dard bhara likhna nahi chati per likh jata hai lekin ye wadaa hai ab jab tak khushi se bharpoor kuch nahi likhungi mein post nahi karoongi koi ok. sakhi apki with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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