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teri yaadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar........! -
26th January 2007, 12:15 AM
mere sabhi dostoN ko mera namskaar , aaj maiN apni pehli geet ki kosisH leke hazir hua huN jee haN isse pehle kabhi maine koi geet likha nahiN , bas ek chhoti si kosisH ki hai maine kuch likhne ki ummid karta huN aapka jo ab tak mujhe pyaar aur sath mila hai wo hamesha milta raheNga,
teri yaadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar use ziNdagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi............[2] tu seene me dhadkti hai dil banke, wo sath raheNga tera saaya banke roz aayega tere khwaboN meiN wo tera sath denga humsafar banke use aur kuch paane ki bhi pyaas nahi teri yaadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar use zindagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi....[2] tu jahaaN bhi jaayegi duniya meiN, wo sath raheNga teri yad banke tu sona use bas yaad karke, wo aayega milne tera khwaab banke use aur kuch paane ki bhi pyaas nahi teri yadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar use zindagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi... use zinagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi...[2] teri yaadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar......... |
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26th January 2007, 02:38 AM
hello ji......
kya bat hai.. well kafi dino baad apki aisi pyar bhari shayri padhne ko mili....kyu kam kyu kiya likhna.......bad haaa....well ye geet bahot pyara laga. daad haazir hai dil se..... aur mehanat kijiye bahot hi achhe aur bade shayar banenge aap ek din. isi dua ke saath ijazat dijiye grazie aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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26th January 2007, 02:31 PM
Assalam walekum,namaste dhaval ji,
kaise hain aap? ab kya kahe dhaval ji,? hamein yeh to pata tha,, ki aap achhi shayri, achhi ghazal,, nazm,,,, to likhte hi he,,magar itna achha geet b likhte hain yeh pata nahi tha, bohot hi pyara geet likha hai aapne.. khaas kar yeh mukhda......... tu jahaaN bhi jaayegi duniya meiN, wo sath raheNga teri yad banke tu sona use bas yaad karke, wo aayega milne tera khwaab banke janab ab to hamein aapke agle geet ka intezaar rahega..... Allah aapko aur tarakki de,Aamin apna khayal rakhiye **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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26th January 2007, 04:14 PM
hi dhaval ji
kese ho? sach mein aapne aaj kamal kar diya aaj aap lambe arse baad ek pyaar bhari nazam ke sath nazar aaye ho. tu seene me dhadkti hai dil banke, wo sath raheNga tera saaya banke roz aayega tere khwaboN meiN wo tera sath denga humsafar banke ye dhaval ji aapki is rachna mein se mujhe ye char line behad pasand aayi hai. kush rahiyega ese hi likhte rahiyega aur milte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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26th January 2007, 05:15 PM
Nice all .. very good.
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26th January 2007, 06:30 PM
Bahut khoob Dhaval ji.
Bahut hi accha likha hai. Meri daad kubul kijiye.  Woh Meri Kismat Mein Nahi |
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Dil khush kar diya tumne to Chotte Bhaiya.... Bahut hi sunder geet pesh kiya hai tumne... Main to gaane bhi lag gayi.. ho sakta hai tumhari aur meri tune me bahut fark ho.. lekin haan... ehsaas vahi rahenge...  Khush raho.. aur yunhi mehfil ko pyar bhare rango se sajaate raho.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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27th January 2007, 12:01 AM
dhaval ji kya baat hai aapne too bahoot aach likha hai....
daad hazir hai kabuulliyega ji sandhya |
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28th January 2007, 12:43 PM
Sabne jo bhi likha hai, sach likha hai...
Wah, Dhavalji, bahut khoob likha. Dil khush ho gaya yeh padhkar --Anupama Quote:
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28th January 2007, 02:42 PM
teri yaadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar
use ziNdagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi............[2] tu seene me dhadkti hai dil banke, wo sath raheNga tera saaya banke roz aayega tere khwaboN meiN wo tera sath dega humsafar banke use aur kuch paane ki bhi pyaas nahi teri yaadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar use zindagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi....[2] tu jahaaN bhi jaayegi duniya meiN, wo sath rahega teri yad banke tu sona use bas yaad karke, wo aayega milne tera khwaab banke use aur kuch paane ki bhi pyaas nahi teri yadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar use zindagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi... use zinagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi...[2] teri yaadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar......... bahut sundar geet likha hai yaar tune bilkul ehsaso.n se sarabor....... ek do jagah matra ki galti thi maine thik kar di hai. wanki poora kalam bahut khoobsurat hai....... dil se daad kabool karna mere yaar......... dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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hi!!! -
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thanx a lot for repying me..actually kya hai ki..mujhe pata nahi kaha reply karte hai aur kaha kya likhte hai..
mere to kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai..kya aap meri madat kar sakte ho??? mujhe zara explain kijiye ki ye shayri.com use kaise karte hai.. plz.. tc..bye muskaan |
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Bahut Khub -
29th January 2007, 11:03 PM
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BAHUT KHUB AHSAS KO BAHUT HI ACH SABDO ME MOTY SA PIROYA DL KO CHOOOOOOOOOOO GAYA DAAD HAJIR HE SUCH KAHA HE YAADE HI JINE KE LIYE JARURI HE BINA INAKE TO YAH JINDAGI HI ADHURI SI HE YESE HI LIKHTE RAHE BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHTE HE SADAKHUSH RAHE |
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30th January 2007, 11:48 PM
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ab kya kaheN hum bahot sara likhuNga to fir aap log pak jaoge mujhe paRh ke  isiliye kam kar diya , tumhe meri yeH pehli geet ki kosisH pasaNd aayi khusi hui mujhe yeH janke aur mehnat to maiN karta rahuNga ,aur maiN to bas hamesa apne dil ke ehsaasoN ko bayaaN karna chahta huuN bas aur kuch nahiNbas yuhiN sath dete rehna khus raho tumhara dost dhaval |
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31st January 2007, 10:58 PM
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namskaar merul ji aapne mera hamesa sath diya aapka maiN tah-e-dil se shukraGuzar huuN aapse bas yehi guzarish hai ki yuhin is dost ko paRhte raheN maiN kosisH karunGa age aur bhi achha likhne ki apna khayal rakheN khus raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazat aapka dost dhaval |
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1st February 2007, 01:43 PM
kamaaal ka lihte ho aap bhai...
wahhh... bas dil khush ho jata hai padh ke. yuuuhi likhte rahiye.. khush rahiye... allahhafiz Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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namskaar ricky ji bada hi achha lagata hai jab jab maiN apni post pe site ke purane meer ko dekhta huN to aapne meri kosisH ko pasaNd kiya achha laga ummid karta huN aap aage bhi si dost ko paRhte rahenGe khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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surudita ji namskaar aapne meri kosisH ko pasaNd kiya maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shuKraGuzar huN maiN kosisH karunGa aage bhi achha likhuN aapki daad sar'ankho par khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN duaoN ke sath ijaazat aapka dost dhaval |
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namskaar priya di aapko yahaaN dekh ke mujhe bahot khushi hoti hai aapko meri yeH pehli geet ki kosisH pasaNd aayi dil ko achha laga hmmm to aap gaane bhi lagi wah kya baat hai ab to hum dono milke apna ek album karenGe ap bhi khus raheN aur muskurati raheN aise----> duaoN ke sath ijaazat aapke chhote bhaiya dhaval |
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3rd February 2007, 05:44 PM
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sandhya ji namskaar aapka sath mila achha laga aapne meri kosisH ko paRha aur samjha maiN aapka shukraGuzar huuN ummid karta huN aapka sath yuhiN milta rahenGa aapki daad sar'ankho par duaoN ke sath ijaazat aapka dost dhaval |
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namskaar anupama ji apako yahaaN dekh ke achha laga aur khusi hui maiN kosisH karunGa aage bhi ki isse bhi behtar likhuN aap sab ne jo mujpe itna vishwas kiya hai aise hi si dost ka sath dete rahiyenGa apna khayal rakheN duaoN ke sath ijaazat aapka dost dhaval |
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aap aaye bahar aayi dost , aap sab ke sath se maiN yahaaN tak aaya huN aur likhne ko sikha huN maiN to bas yehi kahunGa mere yaar ki apne is dost ka sath hamesa nibhana maiN aage bhi bahot kuch sikhana chhata huN aur kosisH karta rahunGa apna khayal rakheN , duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka shaitaan dhaval |
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4th February 2007, 08:18 PM
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kaisi haiN aap? muskaan ji dostoN ko thanx nahiN kehte aur aapko sab baateN maine pehle hi PM ke zariye sab bata diya hai ki shayri.com ko kaise use karte haiN aur aapne to bahot acheh se ab sikh bhi liya hai yeH bahot achhi baat hai aapne mujhe paRha achha laga ummid hai ki aap aise hi is dost ko aage bhi paRHti rahenGii duaoN ke sath ijaazaT khus raheN aapka dost dhaval |
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aapko yahaaN dekh ke mujhe bahot hi khusi hui di aapne mujhe itna dhyan se paRha aur samajha mere liye itna hi kafi hai yuhiN apna aashirwad mere sath rahiyenGa maiN aage bhi yuN likhta rahunGa aap bhi apna khayal rakheN aur sada muskurate raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka shaitaan dhaval |
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ziyad bhai adaab aur namskaar bahot hi khusi hui aapko meri is rachna pe dekh ke jee yeH meri geet ki pehli kosisH thi jise aap sab dostoN ne pasaNd kiya dil ko khusi mili yeH jaanke ki maine aap sab ke dil ko khus kiya maiN aise hi likhta rahunGa aap yuhiN sath dete raheN apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT allah hafiz aapka dost dhaval |
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6th February 2007, 01:19 PM
sukhriya dhaval ji
milte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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7th February 2007, 08:10 PM
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Is liye bichari music industry pe reham kar dete hain.. unke daane paani ka khayaal karo Bhaiya...    Yeh idea un sab ki khushi ke liye drop hi karna padega... hahahaa.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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kyaa khoob likha hai |
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kyaa khoob likha hai -
7th February 2007, 08:40 PM
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kyaa khoob likha hai aapne, aap to geet bhi bahut achaa likh lete hai... kyu dhaval ji aapke sabhi raaz khul rahe hain aap intana kuch likh sakte hai ye mujhe maloom nahi tha or khaas ker geet ke bool bhi bahut achee the teri yaadoN meiN khoya wo is kadar, use ziNdagi ka bhi ehsaas nahi.. bahut pyaara likha hai. mujhe aage bhi intezaar rahega. sada khush rahe or mukurate rahe. take care Aapka dost Shaan |
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9th February 2007, 12:49 AM
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walekum asalaam shaan ji kaise hain aap? ab maiN kya kahuN maiN to kuch chhupata hi nahiN aur jahaaN tak likhne ki baat hai to meri yeH kosisH ko kaamyaab bana me aap jaise dostoN ka hi hath hai aap jaise dostoN ke hi wajh se aaj maiN kuch likh sakta huuN warna meri to koi hesiyat hi nahiN likhne ki mujhe ziyadah ilm to nahiN par bas kosisH karta rehta huN kuch behtar likhne ki aap yuhiN is dost ko paRhte rahiyenGa khusi hoti hai aapko apni post pe dekh ke aap bhi apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT allah hafiz aapka dost dhaval |
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9th February 2007, 07:19 AM
hi "dhaval" jee
bahut hi acchi tarah likha hai aapne, yeh geet bahut hi pasand aaya. Take Care Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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10th February 2007, 12:10 PM
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namskaar aarya ji aapne meri kosisH ko itne dil se paRha maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shukraGuzar huuN ummid karta huN aage bhi aapka sath milta rahenGa apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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Kya Baat Hai -
10th February 2007, 01:35 PM
Dhavalji aadab
main jannat aapka geet padke to h main kho si gayee bahut pyara geet likha hai aapne ummed karti hu aap aise hi likte rahege aur main aise hi unhe pdti rahugi, allah apko hamesha khush rakhe  Zindagi ek phool hai aur mohabbat us ka shehed,Pyar Ek Dariya Hai, Aur mehmoob uski sarhad...
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bhut khub |
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shayri is my life
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bhut khub -
10th February 2007, 03:11 PM
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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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11th February 2007, 04:46 PM
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jannat ji aadab aur namskaar aapko yahaaN dekh ke mujhe baRii khusi hui , aapko meri yeH geet ki kosisH pasaNd aayi achha laga maiN aapka tah-e-dil se shuKraGuzar huuN ki aapne mujhe itne dil se paRHa aage bhi yuhiN paRHte rahiyenGaa khus raheN , apna khayal rakheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT allah hafiz aapka dost dhaval |
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11th February 2007, 04:51 PM
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pranaam big B aapko meri yeH kosisH pasaNd aayi bahot hi khusi hui yeH jaanke aur big B aapne mujhe sikhane me bahot mehnat ki hai maiN to bas aapke sikhayi hui baatoN ko dhayan meiN rakh ke likhne ki kosisH karta huuN bas, aap yuhiN mujhe sikhate rahiyenGaa maiN kosisH karunGaa ki aage isse bhi achha likhuN apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka chhotu dhaval |
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13th February 2007, 12:37 PM
teri surat meri nighaon me firti rahe.............
teri yaad sataye to me kiya karun............. mene mangi thi masjidon me duaa,.............. jise me chahata hun o muje mile ,.................. khuda hi na chahe to me kiya karun. |
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muje dekhlo eak nazar peyar se |
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muje dekhlo eak nazar peyar se -
13th February 2007, 12:46 PM
noor si aankhe dekha jab unhe parde mein.........
a sar jhukgaya khuda ke sajden mein......... kiya noor thi un ankhon mein........... jo chamak raha tha pardon mein.. |
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16th February 2007, 12:04 PM
namskaar aur adaab mere dost,
aapne mujhe paRHa uske lkiye bahot bahot shukriyaH..aise hi paRHte raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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